If you leave a like and/or favorite, please tell me why, I want to know what I'm doing right, and what needs to be worked on. May the Horse be with you.
Justice shares much with Chaos, each have ones who fight for them. Heroes and Villains to each his own but everyday the ones in the middle are pulled to each side unwittingly. In the end each side will have the necessary numbers to lay waste to the world around them and remodel it in their own image. The last humans remain unaligned and both sides are desperate for their allegiance and will do anything to attain it.
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I like this a lot. you've got a good story building up and thus has earned my thumb. Great job. I'll wait for more chapters.
great story can't wait for more chapters this will definitely be intresting
Wait they're eating meat! WHAT THE BUCK. I mean crustations but still any form of meat is a no no... even fish is looked down upon to some extent.
Well this will be interesting.
So a whole bunch of mythology slammed together given no explenation to why anything is anything yet it works.
Well this is a first. A human shipped with Zecora you dont see that ever. May be interesting.
Uhhh... A tid bit random, but again your developing the story so hopefully you'll patch everything together soon. Will wait for the next batch of chapters.
Thumbs up- can't do it more than once so there you go.
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Whining and impractical appearance.
I don't like him already.
Wow, bringing in a romance pretty quick.
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I am so lost right now.
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Martin is from the future.
Shining Knight and Clarvious, are from the middle ages.
Hanna and Kali are from Feudal Japan,
Kai is from the Han Dynasty of China,.
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Whining:
- He talks about hating his name, something so repulsive that he allows a complete stranger to name him. If it was indeed so awful, why didn't he change it sooner?
- I can understand feeling a little bad about killing an animal. But brought to tears over it? And over one that was trying to kill him! Not so much.
Impractical Appearance:
- He has freeflowing waist-length hair! As a knight! I have hair that's only a little past my shoulders and running through a forest while ducking branches with the wind whipping it around would have it snagged on something near instantly. Not to mention the huge disadvantage it causes in a fight, which as a knight is deadly.
1655607 Oh that makes much more sense now.
1655663 you're welcome
1655538 If you don't read it for Shining Knight's perspective, try the other characters maybe they'll be more to your liking.
1655607 I haven't read the story yet, but from your comment, it sounds ALOT like the game "Live a Evil". For the Snes in Japan. McGammar Let's Played it, if you wanna check it out. This is his channel.
This is the Playlist of Live a Live/Live a Evil.
Check it out, if you want.
Hah! Mr. Boy, I was confused why they would call the waiter boy
So each group of humans are from the specifically mentioned sections of the book?
I can understand him thinking Pinkie is a very pale red color, but rarity is not anywhere near blue in color. She is white.
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Seems that shit thought it would be a good time for a storm!
2307341 No spoilers Gale!
2307623 Who
... me...
2307633 No, bad Unicorn!
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2307662 *Martin laughs, whipping out his laser pistols.*
BOOM BITCH!
wow interesting amount of lore
2802274 Yes I found that all the different beliefs and codes of conduct from each race could make for interesting plot points. Showing that Equestria while having solid foundations of their religious standards differ from humans.
2802320 also like how a lot goes on but at the same time it is able to be easily understood once the reader thinks about it, good job.
also how much research did you do for the knights of the round table lore? just wondering
2804876 I'm still researching, I love mythology so much, I remember reading the Illiad and Oddyssey at ten. The round table and grail lore impacted me more so at a younger age, with Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade. The more research I do the more ideas I get, it's still a work in progress,
Greek, Norse, Japanese, Chinese, Central, Southern, and Northern American lore will play parts in later chapters, I'm just hoping I can do it all right. 
1630876 you never say whos talking its a guessing game half the time
confusing and fast-paced
Please continue!