this is a fun little first person fan fiction, co-written with a friend of mine on DA. (Sugarcube16)
it started off as a fun little thing, but now I'm trying to take it a little more seriously.
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what starts as a fun night of pranks between two friends could blossom into something more. but the jealous antics of one certain Wonderbolt could Keep them Apart. will friendship triumpth over Rainbow Dash's most intimate and most passionate dream? or is one fun Prank Night not a gurentee for a long and happy relationship?
Chapters (1)
Not bad, but it has lots of typos and grammar mistakes.
thanks for telling me, I'll put it through a rewrite.
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Just a lot?Yep, a lot.2169543 okay, so my spell check sucks and I miss grammar errors a lot. satisfied?
I thought of Twilight Sparkle standing ominously over the city like Batman, just standing there.
2172919Im Twilight.....
2172253 Hey, don't get it wrong. I still love this story. For now. I could look past the mistakes.
2184292 thanks. there's some 'sneak previews' on DA, but they're not as well written.... and probably have even more mistakes.)
u should update this ive been waiting forever
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it's supposed to be my partners turn, but she's been taking her sweet time. I'm giving her till the end of the month, then continuing it on my own.