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Stories (17)

  • You Obey
    You are a changeling, servant of Queen Chrysalis. You always obey her orders, even when you don't want to. And at times like this, you really don't want to.

    5,555 words · 5,567 views · 89 likes · 5 dislikes
  • Last One Standing
    From the beginning, it could only end one way. Nopony lives forever.
    7,596 words · 3,195 views · 80 likes · 5 dislikes
  • You Are A King
    You are a king. You rule an ancient, mysterious land. You are powerful and ancient beyond compare. You are king of nothing. Most Dangerous Game contest entry.
    7,676 words · 237 views · 39 likes · 2 dislikes
  • I Did Not Want To Die
    The final thoughts of a fallen soldier. Dedicated to all who serve, all who survived, and all the fallen.
    4,727 words · 14,914 views · 105 likes · 13 dislikes
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    49,546 words · 4,548 views · 88 likes · 11 dislikes
  • Bratan
    2,721 words · 230 views · 29 likes · 2 dislikes
  • Songs Uncle Sings
    1,630 words · 986 views · 22 likes · 1 dislikes
  • Reflections
    4,784 words · 1,687 views · 24 likes · 2 dislikes
  • Barren
    4,862 words · 208 views · 20 likes · 2 dislikes
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    2,680 words · 3,758 views · 47 likes · 11 dislikes

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Celestia and Luna talk about immortality, life, death, and what such things mean. This is a followup story to Last One Standing. While you don't need to read one in order to understand the other, it will make the experience more complete.

The art is not mine.

First Published
21st Feb 2013
Last Modified
21st Feb 2013

Comments ( 7 )

#1 · 79w, 1d ago · · ·

This is jmartkdr from AHA. I will be reading and reviewing this story either later tonight or tomorrow.

#2 · 79w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

Review for Authors Helping Authors

Name of Story: Reflections

Grammar Score: 10

Pros: Good use of mood, it held a fair amount of bittersweet and hope all at once.

Beautiful prose, each sentence was a tiny work of art

I really liked the transition from despair to hopefulness in this story; well executed.

Cons: Is Twilight supposed to be Celestia's daughter literally or figuratively? I wasn't entirely sure.

Long paragraphs. Breaking it up would have improved readability.

I feel you might have pulled Celestia a little far out of canon with this.

Notes: Overall a great, if dense, piece of writing. I did enjoy the conversation even when it got into tricky philosophical ground. I think if I would suggest any change it would be clarifying Celestia and Twilight's relationship. I was a little confused by that, which pulled me away from the emotions you were trying to create. The long paragraphs in the beginning were technically correct, but cutting them down could help too.

Enjoy your review, and Thank you for reviewing Princess of the Night!

#3 · 78w, 6d ago · · ·


Five out of five moustaches. You show a depth of understanding well beyond your age.


#4 · 78w, 1d ago · 1 · ·


Is Twilight supposed to be Celestia's daughter literally or figuratively?

Read Last One Standing for the answer.

#5 · 78w, 18h ago · · ·

>>2296175 on my read later list as of... now

#6 · 78w, 18h ago · · ·


It seems like you're going to go through my entire library pretty soon!

#7 · 76w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

redmon77 from AHA here to review

title: reflections

author: kalash93

grammar: 9. there were few, if only occasional, spelling errors.


1. this was clearly well written and thoroughly thought out before put down on paper.

2. the point of the sister's lives being bittersweet was clearly stated and seen, as well as felt.

3. just by reading this story one could tell that you put your heart into it.


1. as previously said, very few spelling errors.

2. not sure if this is right, but doesnt Luna refer to Celestia as "Sister" instead of using her actual name?

3. you randomly shift "i" to "we" or "us" in luna's dialogue.


im not really one for reading sad/tragic/dark stories, "redheart" being the single standing exception. but this story had overall been beautiful and i thouroughly enjoyed reading it, good sir!


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