• Member Since 18th Dec, 2012
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kalash93


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A year is kinda like a wheel on a wagon. It has its highs and its lows, but it always back around, just like the denizens of Sweet Apple Acres

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Comments ( 9 )

Wow, this a nice little story. I like it. :twilightsmile:

D'awwwwwww. /)^u^(\

A very good read, short but good. Also, You got featured so i2.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/012/982/post-19715-Brent-Rambo-gif-thumbs-up-imgu-L3yP.gif
One last thing, one of the links in the A/N isn't working.

Apples to Apples

The first url needs to be closed before the equal sign.

“⸘Howdy‽” is a contraction of “¡Hello!” and “¿How are you?” One does not need to write “Howdy, how ya doin’?”. “⸘Howdy‽” is fine.

This was... certainly not your usual style of writing. Interesting, but a bit dull. I know you were very crunched for time, so I'm impressed that you got out anything at all. And now I'm reading everything in a southern twang. :P

The story was nice and enjoyable. A different perspective, as it were... :ajsmug:

Formatting needs work on....block paragraphs can be broken up with practice.

Thumbs up.

Nice little ditty.
Recorded reading it for an audiobook to come soon.

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