A bit of proofreading is good and fine, but how is the actual chapter coming along?

Could use some more editing. The dialogue grammar is still off. For example:

"Why would he dress up like a bat?" Asked Fluttershy.

"Because he is afraid of bats. In the film, he says: 'Bats frighten me. It's time my enemies share my dread.'" Explained Julian. [underlines added]

Should be:

"Why would he dress up like a bat?" asked Fluttershy.

"Because he is afraid of bats. In the film, he says: 'Bats frighten me. It's time my enemies share my dread,'" explained Julian. [underlines added]

Notice the lower case used after the dialogue is over and the comma instead of the period after "dread". All of the dialogue has those errors, and could use some fixing.

Would discord be disgusted by the joker?

For the longest time this has been in my Read later list. Every time I saw it I just passed it off for some reason. Now that I've read it though, dang. Should have started reading this a long time ago. This is a great fic, can only hope for more.

he should show goku next

3792956 We've got a grammar Nazi on our hands!

moar

this was good but the humans should point out that ya our stuff is dark but most of it is to give us hope that there is good in the world though im just glad he did not show them zombie films or things made by King. Star trek would of been a good showing as well wile not a superhero film it shows our want to learn and live in peace with others(though im no longer a fan after that god afoul mmo)

You forgot the Sam Remi Spider man trilogy

You should include sea food on their diet, like fish, oysters and turtle eggs.

Seems like every time something interesting shows up in the sidebar, I take a closer look, and find out it's been dead for more than a year.

I'm quite disappointed that this story isn't going anywhere.

well I'm sad it's dead

And just like that a great story is end