After reading it, I can say that since it isn't a perfect display of writing prowess, you are probably going to have at least 13 Dislikes. There are 13 members of this site that go around and dislike any Human in Equestria fic they find, unless it is literary gold (in a fanfic sense that is). Don't be to upset about it.
I've already introduced 2 human characters. A male AND a female. As far as I know, I'm the first to bring a couple to Equestria. Both of these characters lived happy, fulfilling lives. They aren't emo 'woe is I' humans. They aren't bronies either.
Not only that, but they aren't WASPs (White Anglo Saxon Protestants). My characters come from a different ethnics group, and one of them isn't even American.
There is also a reason why I described them to be so perfect. Physically they are perfect for a (What I believe to be a good) reason that will be elaborated on in future chapters.
This story is going to break a lot of rules, and it is in no way a fantasy of mine. This is a legitimate story that will address complex social norms in both human society, as well as pony society.
I'm going to be honest here, I came into this story predicting a horrible story, given the bad comments, and lots of dislikes... But this is superb! It truly is, I don't usually favorite, I did go through a favorite spree about ago, but I digress. It's fine, only thing that worries me is the fact that celestia is a little too unprofessional. Getting a like, a favorite, and a follow
2535544 Just found this and so far not bad I think any dis likes stem from the fact there is a female human in the story I have only seen one other(have yet to read) that has a woman in it.(your human and you dos not count as humans there are no more then beast other then when poison joke tuners the poor fool into the opposite gender or its a item discord has left about) (woops I take that back there is a apple scratch spin of comedy that has a human female in it but I don't think it counts as the ponies in the story are human but with magic's) Any how this story has my eye and I will read on mite even fallow it and like if the story keeps as it has so far. (im sure there are other storys that have female humans in them but cant think off hand)
Wow. Personally, I felt this was one if my better stories. Yet 7 dislikes and no comments?
Is it the premise, or the execution?
Oh well...I'm still gonna move forward on this story, just so you guys know.
I have not liked or disliked this story yet.
After reading it, I can say that since it isn't a perfect display of writing prowess, you are probably going to have at least 13 Dislikes. There are 13 members of this site that go around and dislike any Human in Equestria fic they find, unless it is literary gold (in a fanfic sense that is). Don't be to upset about it.
Maybe it is because they don't get past the description, which makes it seem like this story has nothing to do with ponies.
The writing, the wish fufillment. My eyes bleed.
2538253 Wish fulfillment? This isn't a wish fulfillment story. This story is probably going to be the most anti-cliché story on this site.
I've already introduced 2 human characters. A male AND a female. As far as I know, I'm the first to bring a couple to Equestria. Both of these characters lived happy, fulfilling lives. They aren't emo 'woe is I' humans. They aren't bronies either.
Not only that, but they aren't WASPs (White Anglo Saxon Protestants). My characters come from a different ethnics group, and one of them isn't even American.
There is also a reason why I described them to be so perfect. Physically they are perfect for a (What I believe to be a good) reason that will be elaborated on in future chapters.
This story is going to break a lot of rules, and it is in no way a fantasy of mine. This is a legitimate story that will address complex social norms in both human society, as well as pony society.
ITS GOOD
How the hell does this have 17 dislikes?
It's good. Aside from the odd grammar or spelling mistake scattered throughout the story, I don't see why this has so many dislikes.
2540785 Yeah sure, lets see how deep your understanding of psyche.
I'm going to be honest here, I came into this story predicting a horrible story, given the bad comments, and lots of dislikes... But this is superb! It truly is, I don't usually favorite, I did go through a favorite spree about ago, but I digress. It's fine, only thing that worries me is the fact that celestia is a little too unprofessional. Getting a like, a favorite, and a follow
2546254 Thank you for your kind words, and I appreciate the follow.
I have to ask: What do you mean Celestia is being unprofessional?
I don't think we've seen Celestia act professional at all throughout the show.
2546272 I mean, She knows Twilight can't take a joke from her, so why would she joke with twilight? It's minor anyways.
2535544 Just found this and so far not bad I think any dis likes stem from the fact there is a female human in the story I have only seen one other(have yet to read) that has a woman in it.(your human and you dos not count as humans there are no more then beast other then when poison joke tuners the poor fool into the opposite gender or its a item discord has left about) (woops I take that back there is a apple scratch spin of comedy that has a human female in it but I don't think it counts as the ponies in the story are human but with magic's) Any how this story has my eye and I will read on mite even fallow it and like if the story keeps as it has so far. (im sure there are other storys that have female humans in them but cant think off hand)