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Comment posted by MarshmallowSundae deleted Feb 19th, 2013

NO TWILYCORN?! HERETIC!!!

:flutterrage: "GIVE ME YOUR CUM!"

Comment posted by xDan deleted Feb 19th, 2013

I have a feeling spike is gonna find what is left of the punch....or when he sees the mess he is gonna just blow a fuse in his head after scratch shows him the vid

i just want to see spikes face when he sees the mess:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Woooooow.
I hope there is a sequel. That was just HOT!

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Sorry, bro, but the mane 6 was a one and done kind of thing. I might do another clopfic, but based on the reactions I've been getting it might be a waste of time. So we'll see.

"I want to come inside, Rainbow Dash!" Fluttershy projected.

I chuckled. well played good sir. have a moustache
:moustache:

This story definitely gets points for making me laugh. Seeing Fluttershy demand cum assertively was probably my favorite part. However, this story reads like a freight train. The pacing is incredibly fast, there are numerous punctuation errors, and Vinyl Scratch is there for some unstated reason to hang out with the mane six. The clop itself also left me confused in places (are they standing on hind legs to hoof themselves at the end?). I give this story a thumbs up for its comedic value but I would love to give it a reread after an editor has gone through and spruced it up a bit.:twilightsmile:

“I want to come inside, Rainbow Dash!”

Punctuation saves the day from futanari! :rainbowlaugh:

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No. Do a sequel. This was beyond brilliant. Please. :pinkiehappy: Also, maybe have Twilight plan it again, and, for science, cast a spell so that they all will remember the night. :pinkiehappy:

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Haha, it's funny how people get that reference, yet nobody has once mentioned "Rainbow Dash always dresses in style."

But where was Spike? I thought the title was a pun...

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He was away in Canterlot masturbating to griffon porn.

The clop was okay, but this story sucks a little for lacking the one character who can do unique things with his fingers and tongue. Plus it just sucks that Spike missed out on this at all.

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"Waahhhh. Where's my dragon porn?"

THIS IS SO GOOD!
:moustache: <-- was he hiding in the closet or something?
Combining it with my fav. music made it sooooooo much better!:pinkiehappy:

Am I the only one who noticed that Pinkie NEVER actually drank any punch!? :pinkiehappy:

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Umm, she was the second one, after Rarity. She took a sip, then took the entire shot, and then took a single bounce into the middle of the group.:pinkiecrazy:

“I want to come inside, Rainbow Dash!”

dat 4chan reference. :rainbowwild:

2144312 when you yelled heretic, i read that in a halo grunt's voice! XD

Oh dear Vinyl scratch! I hope PonyVill hasn't got YouTube :moustache:

Fluttershy had so much going through her mind. Maybe a small drink would help sooth her?

...
Reeeeealy? After all you just saw?:facehoof:

are people still that hung up on alicorn twilight

BLEACH ALERT! BLEACH ALERT! BLEACH ALERT! BLEACH ALERT!
We are out of bleach.:rainbowderp:

“Well, duh!” Rainbow Dash smirked. “Rainbow Dash always dresses in style!”

*MLP Gen 3 flashbacks*

Fluttershy rubbed harder. “Give me your cum!” As soon as those words left her mouth, Pinkie began to orgasm in a cascade all over Fluttershy’s face, dripping like a waterfall. “MMMMMMM!” the yellow pony chimed, rubbing the vaginal fluids all over her. “Anypony else gonna give it to me?” All five ponies in unison stood above her, forcing their hooves as deep and quick into their vaginas as they could.

1:00- 1:06
https://youtu.be/083T3OngVaA

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