Daring Do, the famous explorer only heard about in story and legend. Little is known that she does really exist. And she is always on the hunt for treasures and a bit of fame. But her latest expedition, is one that is turning all of her tables around.
With the finding of a statue within a temple hidden in a jungle, everything turns sour for her as she has released forces upon herself. Forces that will go to any length to retrieve that what she has. But as always, it is only the tip of the iceberg. For much is hidden below the surface.
Daring must set everything on everything to bring this to a good end, if there even is going to be that.
Chapters (3)
okay first off: editor. get one. second. why do you use emdashes for dialogue? it makes no sense. also (and this is just personal) but I hate it when authors put pictures right in the middle of the story. it disrupts the flow for me big time. but biggest complaint? get an editor. it'll make this story 20% better (no actually it'll make it better than that, I just wanted to use the Rainbow Dash line)
Yeah, i looking for editor right now. I can explain about emdashes. In fact it is common in my language. But it seems that the dialogues in English stand out not same. Thanks for the comment. Next time I'll try not to make this mistakes.
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2141635 I'll let you know, a lot of professionally written books I read use emdashes for dialog.
Hey, you should put this up in the weekly writers competition! http://www.fimfiction.net/group/202471/weekly-writer-competition
I love the story!
3976398 Interesting idea
But it says that story must be completed and i have many chapters in my mind that must be written 