A day in Equestria

by Everyday We Shufflin

Chapter 1 Twilight's morning

A day in Equestria

Hello there I am your narrator for this story. You might be asking: why is the narrator in this story revealing him/her self? Well good question you freaking idiots! You see I would like you to know that this story is about all ponies in equestrian Well at least all the ponies that matter such as the main 6 the cmc the side characters and the backround characters like Derpy Doctor Whooves and Vinyl Scratch. But anyway just letting you know so that you can get ready. Sooooooooooooooooooo ready yet? Good lets dive into!

A day in Equestria!

Chapter 1 Twilight's morning

Twilight woke up from a nightmare. "Aaaaaaaaah!" Twilight screamed as she woke up from sed nightmare.

"Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!" Spike screamed after hearing twilight scream. "Is the tree on fire?"4

"No spi-" Twilight said before she was cut off.

"Because I told you It wasn't a good idea to live in a tree!" Said the baby dragon.

"Spi-"

"I mean seriously! It's made of wood! And that burns easily-"

"SPIKE!" Twilight said in an extremely manly tone of voice. "THE TREE ISN'T ON FIRE SO SHUT UP!"

"Oh.. He he sorry." Spike said rubbing his arm.

"Uuuuuuuuuugh! Spike what am I going to do with you?"

"Feed me breakfast?"

"No you make yourself some breakfast-"

"INCOMING!" A familiar voice shouted from outside the window.

"What the fu-" Twilight said before being cut off by a cyan Pegasus crashing into her window.

"Uh sorry I was just running from-" Rainbow said before a cretin pink pony crashed through the door.

"YOU BROKE YOUR PINKIE PROMISE!" The pink mare said before charging after the cyan Pegasus.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!" The rainbow main mare screamed before flying out of the tree house.

"Uuuuuuuh what did rainbow do?" Spike asked curious.

"She broke a pinkie promise!" Pinkie shouted at spike.

"Well have fun chasing her down you psychotic killer." Twilight said.

"What?" Pinkie asked. "I'm not going to kill her silly!"

"Have you read this?" Twilight asked while holding the fanfic cupcakes up.

"No." Pinkie said. "Let me read it."

"Ok." Twilight said giving her the pieces of paper she printed out to read sometime.

About 20 minutes latter Pinkie came out of the bathroom from where she was in after twilight gave her the fanfic.

"Ok! Lets get to reading!" The pink mare exclaimed happily.

"Wait you didn't read it while in the bathroom?" Twilight asked confused.

"No." Pinkie said.

About 20 more minutes later.

"I think I'm going to be sick!" The pink pony said while running toward the bathroom with a green face.

"Y'know Rainbow read it and she didn't like it." Twilight said.

"Maybe I could find out why she didn't like it." Spike said wanting to read the fanfic.

About 25 minutes later.

Pinkie started to walk out of the bathroom where she was just a minute ago throwing up.

"Out of the way!" Spike shouted running to the bathroom with a green face.

"I think I'm going to upchuck!" Pinkie said hearing the throw up sounds of spike in the bathroom.

"Oh brother!" Twilight started "It's not that ba-" Twilight said before I cut her off trying to create comedic effect.

20 minutes later.

Twilight pinkie and spike are all in the bathroom throwing up then they stopped. "Well who's hungry?" Twilight asked the two.

After breakfast

"Hey guys I got to go get rainbow dash." Pinkie said trotting out the door. "Don't wait up!"

After the door closed Spike and Twilight look at each other.

"Hey twilight you thinking what I'm thinking?" Asked Spike

"I think I am."

5 minutes later

"Oh my gosh you suck at this game spike! And I don't have fingers!" Twilight yelled at spike.

"I just don't know what button I need to push-" Spike said before getting interrupted.

It's on the screen!

"I can't tell witch button is which of the gutar-"

"Look! Look! Just do what I'm doing!"

"I can't look at you and see what you are doing-"

"Just do it!"

"I can't-"

"Just do it!"

"Fine!" Spike said trying to copy what twilight is doing.

"You still suck at the game!"

"I'm trying! I I can't get it right!"

"Just try for once you idiot!"

"I am trying-"

"No your not!"

"Yes I am!"

"No your not!"

"Yes I am-"

"No just-"

"I'm trying-"

"Just just look at my score!" Twilight said while pointing at her score.

"So?"

"A good score right?"

"Yeah so?"

"Now look at yours."

"No I'm not-"

"Just do it!"

"No-"

"Just do it you wimp!"

Fine! Spike said furiously while looking at his score.

Yeah you have .5 and I have over 500

"How are you that good?"

"With magic!"

…"I'm leaving!"

"You can't quit on me!"

"Goodbye!"

"Fine! Be that way!"

"Ok!" Spike said as he left the tree house.

"Ugh! He is such a brat!" Twilight shouted.

"Twilight!" Shouted Applejack from behind

"Aaaaaah!" Twilight screamed as she jumped up. "Ugh! You know someday somepony is going to invent something where you know we are here!"

"Psh! That aint going to happen".

"Right!" Twilight said annoyed. "What are you doing here?"

"I think I may have been cursed again."

"That's the twelfth time this week! And it's only Wednesday"

"Ah know."

"Ugh! Lets get this over with so I can get back to playing guitar hero!" Said the purple mare.

"Yes lets!" Said the orange pony who wanted to not be cursed.

"Remember when I kill you will have to moonwalk away from the light." Said twilight.

"Ok!" The orange one said.

Twilight got out her shotgun. "Ready?"

"I know we've done this eleven other times" Applejack started "But I still don't know if this is that good of an idea-"

BANG!

Applejack plopped dead on the floor.

"Now Applejack moonwalk away from the light!" Twilight shouted and Applejack did so.

Applejack got up from the floor.

"There ya go!" Said twilight. "Now pay up."

Applejack gave her 13 dollars.

"I'll be rich in no time!" Twilight smirked.

"Oh look at that it's twelve o-clock I best be on my way." Said Applejack.

"Ok bye!" Said Twilight ready to get back on guitar hero.

To be continued.

Next time on A day in Equestria: Fluttershys morning.

Author's Note:

Ok yeah this was pretty bad. But it was b4 I was "ok" at writing fics. The next chapter will be better. if you dislike this story tell me why. I'll try to fix my problems. If you like it. Tell me what you like. Do those both in the comments below.

Comments

[Mr Pones]

I deeply loathe these kinds of descriptions.

[InkTapper]

2118520 LOL did you even read the fic?

[Mr Pones]

2119437 captionsearch.com/pix/g74c9tvreu.jpg

Well don't feel offended that I didnt read it, because it usually takes something special (even from very well written fics) to catch my interest. I simply said the description was not to my liking. Preferably, you could maybe put a brief synopsis of the storyline/ events of your fanfiction instead of the "lel XD so randumb :DDDDDDD!!!111!111"-esque amalgamation of words you have there.

[Everyday We Shufflin]

2119483 ......... OK I overreacted. But the first sentence was the storyline/ events of my fanfiction. I just made that crap up as I wen't along. The description is so that you know what your getting into. in this case, It's so you know that i'm just having fun with it. It might not be fer u but don't go bitching about the description. It's the story that you need to bitch about.

[CDFA]

I'm going to be more brash than usual.

There is a difference between "Having fun" and being stupid.

FIMFiction is a site meant for serious fanfiction. If you want to publish something silly, go write this and either post it on a silly place like your deviantart or something or just share it among friends, because it's not really welcome here.

Having fun while writing would be like writing a comedy with a silly plotline. Still great writing, but the storyline is silly and original. Your intro right now just makes the story seem like "omg im sooo randum xddd"

It doesn't make me want to read the story. Also, it makes you seem like a VERY young writer (like, 11-14), which implies immaturity, which is no fun.

Fix the description, and fix the story (which I'm assuming based off of your description is absurdly "silly" based on your description). Yay.

[CDFA]

Also

Hello there I am your narrator for this story. You might be asking: why is the narrator in this story revealing him/her self? Well good question you freaking idiots!

#rood

[Everyday We Shufflin]

2120154 As I said before. This was my first story I had ever written, I just wanted to get something out there. I had no idea how fanfics work I looked up everything I could but found nothing. And I can post it on this damn site if I want! I it's not welcome here then why was it approved? Also i'm 13 I was 12 when I wrote this. Now i'm going to go play Charlie Brown music and be sad.

WAIT A MINUTE! YOUR TELLING ME I'M STUPID I'LL KILL YOU! I'LL KILL ALL OF YOU! YOUR ALL DOOMED!

Seriously though I'm sorry i'm a bad writer, and I am a very hateful person I never meant to be so bad a this and stupid. This story was only meant to pass time and it was meant for more younger viewers *puts piece of paper down* Sorry.

Btw happy valentine day.