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You have my attention, sir.
oh my god if one more person writes an anthroscratch fic with this picture I'm quitting the site
2117358
Really? I only know of one, and I just discovered that story after I started writing this. And, sorry that the picture has "inspiration" all over it. I had to let it out somehow, and this was the best way for me.
MOAR NAOW
please
2117358 *CACKLES MANICALLY*
I'm liking the story so far, but have you thought of maybe getting a proofreader?
The writing is a little rough and could do with some revision. Mostly for your tenses. You tend to switch from present to past every few words it seems.
Nice. A few spelling issues, but nothing major. Let's see where it goes from here.
How dare it end this quick!
Those ings should be taken out.
should be needed.
Yeoman, out
Intriguing, i must continue to watch this story.
Can someone please answer this question for me because I'm utterly confused. Are these characters humans or ponies. Or are they like a combination of the two. Because half the times when they say "Mares." Or "Stallions." etc. Even at one point in the end it even said they had fingers and arms. Which that completely confused the Hell out of me. But over all you got me hooked my good sir. I'm just slightly confused. LOL
2129098
Did you not see the word anthro in the discription? Basically, the correct term for it is "anthropomorphic," which means that, while they look human, they are, in a technical sense, animals (in this case, ponies). They may walk like humans, look like humans, they have hands, arms, and legs like a human, but they also have ears, tails, manes, hooves, and fur like a pony.
However, you can make a case that the ponies in the show itself are anthropomorphic as well because, while they look like ponies, they can talk, think, displayed their bodies that are disproportionate to a real pony that would be accomplished by an actual human. Sorry to just confuse you there, but to really answer your question, it is a mixture of humans and ponies.
I could understand why it would be confusing if you are not familier with this sort of concept, which I'm taking that assumption. I hope this helps.
Edit: Actually, to really answer your question, just look at the picture. That should give you the idea of what the ponies looke like in this story.
2129730 Alright. I understand now I just never read any of these types of stories (What I mean is a combination of the the two species.) Yeah but good story so far.
2117358
Jesus christ yes
Have some fucking originality people
yay anthro!
I'm not completely sure how to fix it, but I know those are wrong.
that's
Yeoman, out
2142794 As far as I've seen, there are only three or four out of hundreds of stories.
Besides, if you have nothing positive to say, please keep your mouth shut and your hands off your keyboard. Good stories with regular updates are starting to get fewer and farther between.
2142794
I really do not see the problem in using the same cover picture, no matter how times it was used. Does it really bother you that much that you have to agree with one of the moderators of the site?
How come I'm getting a strange feeling here.
every time I read a fic here with ponies drinking, they all get a hangover and end up in a strange place.
2143152
The first one should be
"And, I won't"
Or
"And, "I'll not"
Either way it's "I will not."
2144425 Thanks!
Yeoman, out
Here comes the climax
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OUTBUCKINGSTANDING...
That is all.
AMAZING!
SO. . . AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AAAAAMMMMAAAAZZZZIIIIINNNNNNGGGGGGGGGHHHHNNNNGGGGGGGG
My one comment for until I'm done with these chapters, and this has to do with the story thumbna:
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Oho, great, fine sir. But my comment from before still stands,
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2162149
Okay, okay! Keep it in your pants. I'm writing the next two chapters right now and I'm looking to see them publish by next week. My Celestia. If that last chapter was enough for you lose your shit, I hate to think what would happen when we get to the you-know-what.
2162389
Okay. Sorry, I'm just surprise by the reaction from everybody. I mean, the story has been out for about a week and a half, and I'm just one away from getting 100 favs at this moment. My other story on this site has more views than this, but nowhere near the amount of faves or upvotes. As of now, this is my most successful story that I have written for any site.
Keep the greatness coming it takes a lot to get me going on a story and sir you have what it takes.
Would there be more soon?
Since when do ponies have fingers?
Other than that. Likin it so far
We want more and we want it NOW
2160868 You again! is she finally dead?!
awesome, can't wait for more :)
Now,Let The Clop,Begin
Seriously Though,I Am Really Curious What His Cutie Mark Is.(Did You Mention It On Previous Chapters?If So,I Am Sorry,For Being Forgetful.
)
... Continue
OUT BUCKINGSTANDING.
Quality writing is worth the wait.
2249420
No, I have not. As a matter of fact, your guess is about as good as mine.
Seriously, I do have a couple of ideas of what it would be, but I have to figure that out first before we get to it.
2249736 Good Luck,Fellow Brony.
*Salutes*
2249304
God dammit stop following me! I'm working on it!
Very good keep up the good work on the story.
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WHAT THE FUCK IS TAKING SO GOD DAMN LONG FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERRRRR!!!!!
2262727 Wow talking in caps does not make you look cool and I'm sure the author does not like It either so calm yourself and learn some patience it will help you a lot.
>>ProStoryteller
Your right. Sorry everypony
Sorry mr writer
Pwease try to update faster.
....next chapter please? D:
Damn you to Tatarus for leading your faithfull readers on like that.
So, when's the next chapter ready?
Look good on ya keep up the good work i see what you are doing there so she is the one who got attacked and he saved her but he does not relies it just yet.