2117358 Really? I only know of one, and I just discovered that story after I started writing this. And, sorry that the picture has "inspiration" all over it. I had to let it out somehow, and this was the best way for me.
I'm liking the story so far, but have you thought of maybe getting a proofreader?
The writing is a little rough and could do with some revision. Mostly for your tenses. You tend to switch from present to past every few words it seems.
Can someone please answer this question for me because I'm utterly confused. Are these characters humans or ponies. Or are they like a combination of the two. Because half the times when they say "Mares." Or "Stallions." etc. Even at one point in the end it even said they had fingers and arms. Which that completely confused the Hell out of me. But over all you got me hooked my good sir. I'm just slightly confused. LOL
Did you not see the word anthro in the discription? Basically, the correct term for it is "anthropomorphic," which means that, while they look human, they are, in a technical sense, animals (in this case, ponies). They may walk like humans, look like humans, they have hands, arms, and legs like a human, but they also have ears, tails, manes, hooves, and fur like a pony.
However, you can make a case that the ponies in the show itself are anthropomorphic as well because, while they look like ponies, they can talk, think, displayed their bodies that are disproportionate to a real pony that would be accomplished by an actual human. Sorry to just confuse you there, but to really answer your question, it is a mixture of humans and ponies.
I could understand why it would be confusing if you are not familier with this sort of concept, which I'm taking that assumption. I hope this helps.
Edit: Actually, to really answer your question, just look at the picture. That should give you the idea of what the ponies looke like in this story.
2129730 Alright. I understand now I just never read any of these types of stories (What I mean is a combination of the the two species.) Yeah but good story so far.
You have my attention, sir.
oh my god if one more person writes an anthroscratch fic with this picture I'm quitting the site
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Really? I only know of one, and I just discovered that story after I started writing this. And, sorry that the picture has "inspiration" all over it. I had to let it out somehow, and this was the best way for me.
MOAR NAOW please
2117358 *CACKLES MANICALLY*
I'm liking the story so far, but have you thought of maybe getting a proofreader?
The writing is a little rough and could do with some revision. Mostly for your tenses. You tend to switch from present to past every few words it seems.
Nice. A few spelling issues, but nothing major. Let's see where it goes from here.
How dare it end this quick!
Those ings should be taken out.
should be needed.
Yeoman, out
Intriguing, i must continue to watch this story.
Can someone please answer this question for me because I'm utterly confused. Are these characters humans or ponies. Or are they like a combination of the two. Because half the times when they say "Mares." Or "Stallions." etc. Even at one point in the end it even said they had fingers and arms. Which that completely confused the Hell out of me. But over all you got me hooked my good sir. I'm just slightly confused. LOL
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Did you not see the word anthro in the discription? Basically, the correct term for it is "anthropomorphic," which means that, while they look human, they are, in a technical sense, animals (in this case, ponies). They may walk like humans, look like humans, they have hands, arms, and legs like a human, but they also have ears, tails, manes, hooves, and fur like a pony.
However, you can make a case that the ponies in the show itself are anthropomorphic as well because, while they look like ponies, they can talk, think, displayed their bodies that are disproportionate to a real pony that would be accomplished by an actual human. Sorry to just confuse you there, but to really answer your question, it is a mixture of humans and ponies.
I could understand why it would be confusing if you are not familier with this sort of concept, which I'm taking that assumption. I hope this helps.
Edit: Actually, to really answer your question, just look at the picture. That should give you the idea of what the ponies looke like in this story.
2129730 Alright. I understand now I just never read any of these types of stories (What I mean is a combination of the the two species.) Yeah but good story so far.
Since when do ponies have fingers?
Other than that. Likin it so far
2247161 dude they are Anthro ponies
when he stopped the thief this is what i heard