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This story was amazing, there was stunning details and not any noticable mistakes, though some people disliked it, i think its because you said vinyl eyes were magenta, which i have no problem with even though i think their red, but its still amazing, keep it going
2089165 thank you for the comment. i fixed the eyes, seeing as i didn't know if everyone still liked red eyes or they all went to the magenta. And i will probably be making more to this story. thanks for the review!
YES!
THAT PIC.
Is the reasin I'm reading this fic
rating will come later
2089197 No Problem, I always though that the red eyes made her look so much cuter, and that it made her unique. -TmanDuchesne
That's my profile picture!
Awesome!
Me gusta
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I feel like this isn't the last time I'll see that cover image, as it isn't the first. Putting this on my read laters for now.
Just before my head gets filled with fuck, why's the name 'Alex'?
hmm... great fic, dont read much antro-whachamacallit so not a fav but a definate hoof up,
1 thing, you mation stranda of saliva, I see this somuch in fics, not a bad thing but just thought I would point it out
Elixir
You need to end dialogue with some sort of punctuation.
Anyways, this story is incredibly telly. There's nothing to it other tan "I did this" and "she did that" You tried to take a subtle approach and avoid any hard words like penis or vagina, but all you managed to do was make it broad and hard to understand.
Vinyl is.... painfully OOC, and Alex is the perfect example of a 14 year old boy losing his virginity to the timid school slut that's never fucked anyone before but knows exactly what to do.
What the fuck is this? I don't even...
Look, author, you tried, alright. But this is not good. All of the speaking lines feel forced and flow about as choppy as the Colorado river. I honestly don't know how or why this is in the featured box, but it shouldn't be.
2089165 I disliked it because it was bad. I actually like any-eyed vinyl. Besides, if dislike a story because of a pony's eye color, that's messed up.
2089316 I hope you didn't upvote it for the pic too
2090145
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
Do you realize how idiotic this sounds?! Vinyl has no character, dammit! She can be portrayed however! I swear to God, this pisses me off so much!
*Goes outside and kills self*
2090145
There is no such thing as out of character for Vinyl since she has no previously established canon personality other than she is a DJ that does electronic music. If something doesn't match with your head canon that's your problem.
2090243
2090259
I really should have clarified. she's out of fanon. By now, after two and a half years of fanfiction, her character has basically been defined and rounded by the fans.
it's like Soarin's cutie mark. All the artists agreed on it being a winged lightning bolt, and was actually made his real cutie mark in the show.
2089165
Why does everyone argue about the eye color. I just say they're red, no arguing with those who say magenta.
2090277
Well, I'm glad you clarified. Sorry, but, everytime someone states a character with no character is out-of-character makes me want to punch something. Really hard. Then cry because it hurt.
2090289 Not to uh... burst your bubble or anything, but they appeared magenta in the season two finale.
Also, any unicorn's magic emulates their eye color, and Vinyl's magic is magenta.
2090317
*Appears to have ignored that*
not bad. really not bad but i was half expecting sexy dubstep or romantic techno or lovely trance. meh oh wells lol!
what is this doing in the feature box
what have you done you bastard
what did you do to the real feature box
Exemplary example of the FiMFiction userbase: few comments, fuckloads of masturbation (as told by the amount of likes and favorites)
2090145bro give him a little credit....it wasnt awful you dont need to be so harsh on the guy...
2090461 But it was awful. I'm not going to candycoat anything. if people can't handle the truth, then that's their problem, not mine. I tell someone when a story's good, and I tell them if it's bad and I don't let a single thing bias my decision.
Y'know... I'll have to read this later.
2090317 Whoa whoa whoa... Unicorn magic is the same colour as their eyes? I've been a Brony for years and I haven't noticed that.
But wait, Celestia's eyes are purpleish and her magic is yellow in the theme song! I haven't really cared too much to focus on the others.
2090538 yeah, everyone but Celestia. Next time you watch the unicorns, pay attention.
2090565 Dang. I'll definitely look out for that.
2090289 i dont argue, i dont mind magenta, i was saying other people do, i just think red looks cute
2090243 You're pissed off by that?
I was terrified by the cover art!
It looks so UGLY!
FUCK YEAH ANTHRO PONIES~!
2090145
i tend to avoid commenting to people specifically but i got three things for you buddy.
1. Vinyl is charctered after myself in this so dont go slutting her up thank you
2. That couch thing? Yeah. I do that.
and 3.
First shot at romance. Wanna diss it any harder?
2091059 um...
I don't even know who you are.
There is nothing wrong with the couch thing. I was talking about the wording of that sentence, it's terrible.
...
I assume you're the author under a different account? because I see no reason for you to get ridiculously offended and as snappy as you just did.
2091085
Er no. Im the authors girlfriend.
2090739
I used the same cover art for my fiction. Whatchutalkinbout
2091093 um... Okay, how in the hell was I supposed to know that? It's not like I was trying to insult you or anything.
This only backs up what I said earlier. Vinyl is not Vinyl at all, it's just you with the name Vinyl slapped on it.
That clothing does not appear to be of optimal Wub producing capacity, Vinyl.
2091098 What's wrong with its FACE?!
2091107
and vinyl doesnt have a personality thats canon. Not really that big a deal if shes not the "ideal fan-created" vinyl. Especially since i HAVE been told by people that i act like that vinyl most of the time
2091117
Uhh. That's a snout. You know, ponies have those things. When they get anthro'd, they still keep them.
2091119 You know what. I'm done. I really wasn't expecting the author's girlfriend to throw a fit at me because I left my review of the story. I was never trying to insult you because I never even knew you fucking existed, so back off.
2091124 ... WHY?
It's a snout, on a human body!
Pieces of two different puzzles that don't match.
2091144
Do you know what anthro is? I think you need to re-evaluate your question.
Anthro = humanization. Not complete humanization - they keep certain traits. Hence why she has her snout.
Haven't had a chance to read yet but feature box means it's on my list. I'll say this though, if the story is half as entertaining as the reactions to a bit of criticism then it just may be worth the read.
2091163 Yes I know what anthro is.
It's just... ugh.
It looks so ugly! (and kinda scary)
This is beautiful, a very heart warming and seductive clop fic
2091181
The art is actually quite well done. Maybe it's your perspective. I find it very elegant, beautiful and quite sexy (most dat ass). I actually enjoy a lot of FoxInShadow's work, as well.
2091198 Yeah, we're definitely seeing this differently.
.... now that I'm complaining about furries again.
Where's Regi?
(goes off on an adventure)