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Shadowflash


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Comments ( 153 )

I reserve all rights to first post.

Anyways, enjoy this fic. Critique it, or whatever. Feedback is appreciated. I think I kind of rushed the clop in this. Your opinion, though.

1678906

It has your name in it.

Be grateful when it gets posted! :flutterrage:

:rainbowkiss:

Eh, it's okay. Nothing too special.

i shall read this later in a secluded corner of my room

, but I'm tensing every body in my muscle to make sure she goes first :rainbowhuh:

1680991


Shit. Lol. Thanks. This was unedited, to be honest. I don't know where my editor is. :pinkiesick:

1681900

YEEEEES. Spitfire is best non-mane 6 pony.

1681938 I think Vinyl is the best non mane 6 pony:trollestia:

It's like I have a dog in my brain yelling 'Squirrel!'

Up reference.

YOLO REFERENCE FUUUUU

1680876

Maybe, but it's still okay. Nothing to get too excited over, but I like it.

I am interested in seeing where it goes, and what you do with it.

1685480

Nopony noticed the 'Dr.Who' reference. :c

1686108

Well, it's just a one shot... Until I realized that it could use another chapter. :rainbowkiss:

1681912 agreed.

oh, and I think it would have been better to leave Anthony as an anonymous human.

1700579

If this was second person, I would have. I just... I'm not good at second person yet. But, I understand the pain of Anthony. :facehoof:

Oh god the references! (Faux feint)
More please good sir:moustache:

1702240 it's all right. except my brother's name is Anthony :rainbowlaugh:

1702439

I hope somepony noticed the Dr. Who one, at least...


1702460

Looks like your brother...

*Takes off glasses*

Got a taste of fire...

(YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAH!!)

1702534

Suddenly; Fireflash appears and bangs Spitfire!

(YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAH!)

Second hand bitch?
Bitch please if I'm correct your Canadian therefore your the worlds bitch.

1706079

Well, not only that, but the part about Smith. :rainbowkiss:

1706607 have no fear for now it has been noticed (dramatic pose)

Mmm. I like it!

I especially like how you introduced Humans in Equestria! It's better than "Human bones pone" and there's no background on how that Human arrived in Equestria.

1754590

I wanted to try something different. Thanks for enjoying it! :rainbowkiss:

*slightly confused :P

But overall, I got the references (YOLO, Up, yes, Doctor Who...) so you get a like

:moustache::moustache::moustache:

1783660

Finally, another person noticed the Dr. Who reference.

New chapter soon. Got 2k words ready for it. Just writing out the rest. :rainbowkiss:

1783757

Which reminds me... I should be helping my friend with his suspense story :P

1783840
N-new chapter? ...

...

...

Have my heart and my soul.

Umm... actually, all I can give you is a I.O.U #241

1793109
This also means I need to read the whole chapter... hehehee, I mean, RE-read it... yeah...

Maybe I'll find that doctor who reference.

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