Heartfelt, and a gradual leadup. Here's one reader hoping that all will be well, and the three of them will become lovers together! Monogamy, and the jealousy it causes, are soooooo overrated!
2167157>>2167107 Nah, this is a time honored tradition in porn. If the married couple is getting bored, you invite the babysitter to have a threesome with you.
It's becoming more and more obvious that the twins aren't his. If their marriage was on the rocks before she was pregnant, considering her attitude now, I wouldn't be surprised if she went looking for intimacy elsewhere.
Before he gets a divorce though, he should get a paternity test done in secret. Have the results sent to a private P.O. box. That way, if they aren't his, he can take everything in the divorce.
Unfortunately, you've set him up as the one who isn't business minded and his wife is, so he probably wouldn't think of that and will end up being taken to the cleaners in court. Please let the divorce lawyer he talks to/has been talking to think of that.
And yes, I REALLY want Cup Cake to lose the divorce badly, and for there to BE a divorce.
Wow....talk about a serious and heart warming talk, you done seriously very well. Damn, this is so amazing that it draws you in, and it's very detailed, you're doing a very, very great job Shit, wonder if this would make the two become closer because of what they had shared
1st was that the Cakes were having marital troubles even before the kids; a whole bag of possibilities can be taken from this, most being covered by other so I wont go into it.
The 2ed however, no one seems to be talking about, witch is what Mr. Cake said to Pinkie. I know.... he said a lot to pinkie. I mean, one particular thing he kinda just throw in during the talk. He said he refused to fire Pinkie Pie, despite their financial problems. Him saying he implies (to me) that his wife wasn't with him on that. That maybe she wanted to kick Pinkie out but he wouldn't let it happen. I don't want to get too, too into it but this alone makes what Mrs. Cake was implying last chapter more sensible in a lot of ways; Some having a good shoot be be brought to light next chap.
2170079 I'll be honest here, I didn't even have your second point in mind when I wrote it. But I sure as hell would love to adapt it. Providing some tension between Pinkie Pie and Cup Cake would definitely help move the story in the direction I want to take it. Thank you for the idea!
Here it is, "The Talk."
And no, this has nothing to do with that shitty CBS show.
Man, the marriage is on the rocks.
Heartfelt, and a gradual leadup. Here's one reader hoping that all will be well, and the three of them will become lovers together! Monogamy, and the jealousy it causes, are soooooo overrated!
You know what this calls for? A Threesome!
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C'mon! You know you wanna...
2167026 And if that picture is any indication, the babies will somehow be involved...
2167107
No! Not the babies
2167157>>2167107 Nah, this is a time honored tradition in porn. If the married couple is getting bored, you invite the babysitter to have a threesome with you.
2167157
FUCK NO! I concur. If this includes the babies, I'm out.
But this story is progressing rather nicely. I can't wait to see what the next chapter has in store.
Shit is gonna go down
2167607 They say hand all the time on the show...
Anyway, glad you like it so far!
It's becoming more and more obvious that the twins aren't his. If their marriage was on the rocks before she was pregnant, considering her attitude now, I wouldn't be surprised if she went looking for intimacy elsewhere.
Before he gets a divorce though, he should get a paternity test done in secret. Have the results sent to a private P.O. box. That way, if they aren't his, he can take everything in the divorce.
Unfortunately, you've set him up as the one who isn't business minded and his wife is, so he probably wouldn't think of that and will end up being taken to the cleaners in court. Please let the divorce lawyer he talks to/has been talking to think of that.
And yes, I REALLY want Cup Cake to lose the divorce badly, and for there to BE a divorce.
Wow....talk about a serious and heart warming talk, you done seriously very well. Damn, this is so amazing that it draws you in, and it's very detailed, you're doing a very, very great job Shit, wonder if this would make the two become closer because of what they had shared
2 Things caught my attention.
1st was that the Cakes were having marital troubles even before the kids; a whole bag of possibilities can be taken from this, most being covered by other so I wont go into it.
The 2ed however, no one seems to be talking about, witch is what Mr. Cake said to Pinkie. I know.... he said a lot to pinkie. I mean, one particular thing he kinda just throw in during the talk. He said he refused to fire Pinkie Pie, despite their financial problems. Him saying he implies (to me) that his wife wasn't with him on that. That maybe she wanted to kick Pinkie out but he wouldn't let it happen. I don't want to get too, too into it but this alone makes what Mrs. Cake was implying last chapter more sensible in a lot of ways; Some having a good shoot be be brought to light next chap.
Good chapter and...
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2170079 I'll be honest here, I didn't even have your second point in mind when I wrote it. But I sure as hell would love to adapt it. Providing some tension between Pinkie Pie and Cup Cake would definitely help move the story in the direction I want to take it. Thank you for the idea!
Glad I commented then. I wasn't going to but changed my mind and did it last second.
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awww that was nice story ^_^
most clop fics or fics that have sex in it never have a chapter with this
So glad I put this on "read later" a few weeks ago. Great story so far. Update soon!