Most scoff at the past, stuffing it rudely behind them as they shove through and press their gaze forward towards the future. Some never can, no matter how powerful they may be. And, no matter who they are, the past always catches up. Always.
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Hey i see u finally in the green with the likes and dislikes awesome! Your doing a good job on the story man keep it up.
Cool, epic, amazing... no words can describe how awesome this chapter was.
P.S. I really don't mind if you make Nix over powered.
2132282 Heh, yeah, haven't actually gotten a dislike since that first chapter. (Probably helps that I went through and cleaned it all up the other day.)
2132308 Wait'll you see what I've got planned for next chapter, heheheh.
oh, this, is fun... Tyrant Tia... Oh ho ho... I have seen, and I have enjoyed... I will say, Nix is shaping up well, and good idea about choking his powers. Hmmm... I LOVE ET!
This is a great story, funny, yet seriously hilarious in other moments, and updates at a nice rate. Points for you mister author, fav'd and thumbed
2133085 Oddly enough, Tyrant Tia wasn't even my original plan; there was originally a terse but diplomatic conversation between Celestia and Phoenix about his rudeness, but I couldn't make it fit right into the story, and I also wondered why Celestia kept putting up with Nix's bullshit. Things kinda snowballed from there. Also neatly ties up a later plot point that I was having trouble justifying, too. Guard-Captain Glancing Shock and Ridge Dancer came about in a similar spontaneous manner, actually, and now they're integral to the story I wanna tell...funny how it all works out.
2133280 Thanks! I can hopefully provide a bit more variety to the humor (and better characterization for the ponies, which I feel is a bit lacking--especially Celestia...can't write her very well beyond pastry binge-eating) when Nix finally gets out of the dungeon. (I think I at least did a passable job with Pinkie Pie, so far.)
That was one of the most epicest things I have ever read.
2932040 I can't wait to write more of that pink mare. She really is one of my favorites.
Dude, fucking funny as shit. Like really dude
3576725 Thanks! I can think of a few chapters that are funnier than this one, actually, including the one I'm working on now...