Most scoff at the past, stuffing it rudely behind them as they shove through and press their gaze forward towards the future. Some never can, no matter how powerful they may be. And, no matter who they are, the past always catches up. Always.
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I can't believe more people don't love this story.For what it is your doing it very well,
2471716 Thank you, and I mean that. For what it's worth, I just started writing it for fun. I had a few delusions that it might become popular, but those were always tangential to me just writing a story I wanted to write. I don't mind in the least that people aren't showering me with roses and praise every time I log onto fimfiction.net.
I am considering setting everything on fire because they aren't showering me with rum, however. (Editor's note: I made it through a fanfic chapter involving rum without a single character uttering the line, "Where is the rum?" I treat that as a personal victory on my part.)
But really, if I wanted views/likes, I'd just need to turn it into a shipfic/clopfic:
Nix stared into the piercing magenta eyes of the lithe alabaster alicorn, his gaze tracing down her graceful face to her dainty, frosting-covered muzzle. He licked his lips expectantly.
"I bet you taste as sweet as you look, Princess," he whispered in a husky tone.
"Yes," she breathed, being inexplicably able to understand an alien language for no reason at all. Her chest heaved under the intensity of the human's brilliant blue eyes. She imagined losing her face in his flowing blonde hair, her mouth pressed wantonly into its golden depths as she fell into him. Her breath came more frequently and shallowly as her imagination spurred her desire to more climactic heights. "Though not as sweet as my other lips-"
Aaaaand I'm done. If you'll excuse me, I'm going to go shower in boiling bleach and sulfuric acid to clean myself off.
(I do sometimes consider writing a parody fic of some of the stuff I see in the featured box, honestly.)
Glad you're still reading Mr. luna_secret_stallion. I've got some procrastinating on the next chapter to do via vidjuhgames, though, so I'll see ya' next chapter!
2554671 Wow, a grammatical error that early on. And here I was priding myself on generally avoiding those in spite of writing all of this while egregiously intoxicated. Good catch, and thank you! (I'm gonna have to go with "a groan of pain" on this one. Sounds a bit more natural.)
As for the overpowered OC...I like to think I handled the matter well enough, but I guess the reader should come to his or her own conclusions about that.
Loki and sleipnir anyone