• Published 27th Jan 2013
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Necrosis - The Grimm Reaper



Twilight has been researching something sinister since the rise of the Crystal Empire. The Changeling invasion was what threw her over the edge.

Comments ( 77 )

Well shit.

Well it's a proof that shit is going down........TERRIBLY :applecry:

Oh shit. Note to self; do not piss of Twilight Sparkle who has given herself to Necromancy. -shudders-:ajbemused:

"YOU'RE GONNA USE THE ONES I LOVE AGAINST ME, CELESTIA?!!! WELL BRING IT ON!!! I'LL DECIMATE THE ONES YOU FOUGHT TO PROTECT AND BRING THEM ALL BACK, JUST FOR YOU!!!"

Everything in Bold should be removed and everything in Italics shouldn't be capitalized.
And no, the C in Celestia isn't in Italics.
Oh, and

"PRINCESS! THE NECROMANCER HAS JUST LEVELLED MANEHATTAN!!!"

I think you meant Leveled* And you really shouldn't cap it, same with the three exclamation marks.

Welp...
Celestia, you just done f***ed up.

*Reads through comments. Finds that no one has done it yet, and grins*

*Raises bottle of beer* Boy that escalated quickly.

Sorry couldn't help it.

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No....Do not piss Pandora....Twilight is dead for her as she doesn't want innocent and naive Twilight remembered as villains thus she renamed herself as Pandora

damn...and here I thought Pandora would send a dozen (or more, many more) Black Roses for the princess.

Princess you may want to I don't know start a evacuation plan now.....*laughs* oh wait its too late for you.


UPDATE QUICKER PLEASE I LOVE STORIES WITH NERCOMANCERS!

You might do to put in on the description that you've, uh 'borrowed' the cover image from someone who had it explicitly made for their own story.

Comment posted by The Grimm Reaper deleted Apr 23rd, 2014

4278194 you know what she's like.

Thus begins the Equestrian Mushroom War and the rise of The Lich... Whoops, wrong series.

4278662 yeah, so now i'm looking for the Hope at the bottom of said box.

4280931 there's always hope. that's the whole point of 'hope' is that it's always there for when you need it. besides, i', kinda hoping that twilight ultimately wins, since she can just bring back all of her friends. not to mention that if she does manage to take down the two immortals of the world, and then take over, equestria will have the deadliest being on the planet watching over it. besides, who would willingly fight someone who can bring back the dead?

4281124 well not just that, but she would know what both twilight and her new found power would be capable of, considering she created the power, and had succumbed to darker powers once herself. given all that, i'd say she would know why they should be afraid better than anyone.

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Maybe Ooo is Equestria after the war between Pandora and Celestia, and the Lich is Pandora's power manifested into a physical form?:pinkiehappy:

Shit just got real!! I thought Pandora would say "Who likes bananas now beeeyeech!!":twilightangry2:
I have to say it: I liked the former cover art better, sorry. By the way, who made that one?

4282793 I honestly have no idea. And I only changed the pic because someone suggested I give the original artist credit for it, but I can't find him/her.

A nuke? Tsk. Thats Evoker territory! C'mon, unleash a plague like a decent, self respecting Necromancer! One that targets staple food crops if you want to be a real bitch about it. The suffering shall be doubled!


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I know exactly what you mean, but that sent my mind straight to the gutter.

Did Twilight use dark magic to make a nuclear reaction to make a massive bomb, or was it pure dark magic itself that was the explosion?

Good Chapter, succinct and yet very descriptive. :pinkiehappy:

4282934 Pandora's Box, so glistening and shiny.

Let the games END. MUHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHA

"sigh"... Celestia done fucked up big time.:facehoof:

Well this is a gem of a fic. Dark and edgy, but with a good plotline to it.


All my favs are belong to you.

4481720 But of course.

4481940
It's always the magnets. ALWAYS! *Begins giggling madly*:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

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Lyrics:
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You lay down all the laws that you strive to uphold
There is life, there is death, there is suffering
Hope is the key and it travels alone
Yeah, the youth of today have no honor or valor or soul

Cannons fire
You'll conspire to take over me
Longer strides, cutting ties, you can try
The legend never dies

((FIRE THE BASS CANNON))

Shiva of the east?
More like Shiva of the deceased
Get good, scrub
What rings you got, bitch?

Lyrics:
Climbing out back the door, didn't leave a mark
No one knows it's you, Miss Jackson
Found another victim
But no one's gonna find Miss Jackson (Jackson, Jackson)

You put a sour little flavor in my mouth now
You move in circles hoping no one's gonna find out
But we're so lucky
Kiss the ring and let 'em bow down
Looking for the time of your life (gonna find out)

A pretty picture but the scenery is so loud
A face like heaven catching lighting in your nightgown,
But back away from the water, babe, you might drown
The party isn't over tonight

Hey, where will you be waking up tomorrow morning?
Hey, out the back door, goddamn
But I love her anyway
I love her anyway, I love her anyway
Out the back door, goddamn
But I love her anyway

Miss Jackson, Miss Jackson, Miss Jackson, are you nasty?
Miss Jackson, Miss Jackson, Miss Jackson, are you nasty?
Miss Jackson, Miss Jackson, Miss Jackson, are you nasty? Are you nasty?
I love her anyway

Oh, where will you be waking up tomorrow morning?
Oh, out the back door, goddamn
But I love her anyway

Way down 'til the fire finally dies out
You've got 'em wrapped around your finger
Watch 'em fall down
There's something beautiful and tragic in the fall out
Let me say it one more time (tragic in the fall out)

Hey, where will you be waking up tomorrow morning?
Hey, out the back door, goddamn
But I love her anyway
I love her anyway, I love her anyway
Out the back door, goddamn
But I love her anyway

Miss Jackson, Miss Jackson, Miss Jackson, are you nasty?
Miss Jackson, Miss Jackson, Miss Jackson, are you nasty?
Miss Jackson, Miss Jackson, Miss Jackson, are you nasty? Are you nasty?
I love her anyway

Oh, where will you be waking up tomorrow morning?
Oh, out the back door, goddamn
But I love her anyway

Climbing out back the door, didn't leave a mark
No one knows it's you, Miss Jackson
Found another victim
But no one’s ever gonna find Miss Jackson

I love her anyway

Miss Jackson, Miss Jackson, Miss Jackson, are you nasty?
Miss Jackson, Miss Jackson, Miss Jackson, are you nasty?
Miss Jackson, Miss Jackson, Miss Jackson, are you nasty? Are you nasty?
I love her anyway

Oh, where will you be waking up tomorrow morning?
Oh, out the back door, goddamn
But I love her anyway

So...does anyone in her cult/army have even a little bit of an issue with her nuking an entire city of civilians?

Rarity:: Well you did just blow up a city and murder tens of thousands of civilians, but part of being a good friend means sticking by your friends, even when they're clearly insane, omnicidal maniacs.
Fluttershy: That's right.
PInkie: Yep!
Rainbow Dash: Sweet Explosion!
Everyone Else: We're honestly just here for the crazy sex parties.

Then again, she can apparently rez ponies even if they've been reduced to dust, so I guess all casualties are only temporary. You can justify a whole lot of atrocities that way.

After reading further, I retract my statement about the fan-art. Those pictures are awesome. I foresee a moral dilemma of "Pandora" if she is forced to fight against Spike or Shining Armor, since (like Applejack) they are the last legacies of what was once Twilight Sparkle. If she is eventually taken down, I would suspect that Pandora's last wish would be for Twilight Sparkle's memory to be preserved as the Element of Magic and student of Princess Celestia and for all her crimes to be placed on the shoulders of the Pandora persona - much like Luna and Nightmare Moon.

Also, I would really like to see a scene describing Luna, Celestia, Spike, and Shining Armor's reactions to Twilight being the Necromancer.

i really hope this updates soon. i want to see what happens next!

4530547 Sorry, but i dont think this will get updated for around a year since i have been reading necrosis since it started lol

Can't wait for more...

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

Ohoho!! The new cover art is awesometastic!:pinkiecrazy::rainbowkiss::moustache:

"My spies discovered her location and I sent Spike out to meet her. I've had enough of these war games. It's time to show Twilight how much trouble she's gotten herself into." I replied, holding a stern expression in front of her.

What... I don't even... how the hell did Celestia expect this to go down? Did she think Spike would, emotionally, guilt-trip Twilight into surrendering? By force, beat her and drag her back to Canterlot? Through reason, convince her that this campaign is of no benefit to anyone? All I see is Celestia deliberately antagonizing Twilight by sending one of her oldest friends to fight her, taking away the only thing she had left.

Celestia..............

:twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD :pinkiecrazy:

5473717 k. Was wondering if this story is still active?

5473886 yeah, just in the dead zone right now, pardon the pun.

god its bee just forever since i have read this story i re read it and i fell i love with it again dude delete the chapter of the nuke thing and restart from entry desolation ( because frankly the nuking chapter made no sense, well sorta with the spike thing but still) ad i beg you to get that writers block out of your head and start writing because this story is the the story that started my fanfiction reading craze so plz start this again i know no one comments on this anymore but they still love it post more plz

-- Muffinlord4life king of the ninth dimensional muffin plane

5477067 Hurry your ass up and get more chapters written.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

Well fuck... nuclear weapons? How on Earth even?
Well this has gone from sad to total shitstorm!

Good job man! Keep it up dude!
Can't wait to see more from ya!

No more to read? FUUUUUUUU
...
Uh... Time to stare at my update box again!

6053418 I had the same reaction :fluttercry:

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liek if u cri evrytiem

need more such a good story

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