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Nice.
Beautiful.
Awwwww.
Cute.
I find the idea of the corrupted and somewhat insane/evil necromancer (whose goal is to cause a devastating war) writting such a letter kind of funny too.
It's like Arthas saying "Tomorrow I kill everyone in Lordaeron and resurrect them but today... Today I just wish you an happy Thanksgiving !"
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I'm glad I got up this morning to read this.
darn, was kinda hoping AJ was gonna join the cult, but i guess that wouldn't work. all of twilights fears about clestia using her family are very well founded, as we have seen in the past.
I remain unmoved by this. My heart must be as dark as Necrosis. That is if I even have a heart...
Damn this emotionless state I have.
A nice change from the last few chapters of nothing but Twilight wallowing
but on a serious note i cant help but feel all of the drama has been lost since Twilight revealed herself, nothing has gone wrong, none of her friends have gone against her and everything has just gone swimmingly. there is no conflict apart from the funeral crashing and that prison break chapter with Luna that was more of a casual "hey, hows things?" than a confrontation. there is no challenge for Twilight, she just causally escapes Canterlot jail on a dragon and flies away and Rarity seems to have been brought back for no reason. and remember the murdered we were all worried about? no? me neither.
"hey, Rarity, i know your probably wondering why you are all rotten and covered in dirt?"
"nah, i'm good...what!? Twilight has become a powerful necromancer and is overthrowing the royalty whom i adore!? "
"yeah"
"whatever... whats for breakfast?"
rant over.
i adore the way that Twilight's necromancy is starting to become too powerful and is seemingly eating away at her own life force and body, possibly forcing her to take other's life force to sustain her own and i would love to see how she would cope with that idea. just one more step into the darkness Twilight.
i kinda also wanna see how Trixie is progressing in more detail as its not like her to just accept that twilight her lover is more powerful that her? are there no secret plans revolving around out-performing our dear necromancer? i certainly am looking forward to finding out.
dear Santa, if i am to receive just one present this year, let it be that Celestia and Spike have spent the entire time hiding away and getting fat on ice cream in Celestia's bedroom because little Twilight sparkle left them.
3667194 Well, most of those issues will be solved in the next chapter.
Great Story!
Twilight at this point reminds me much at V from V for Vendetta.
3749465 very old OC, I realized how dumb the character was, and I've pretty much completely abandoned her completely by now
please, in the future, ignore my comments that are more than a month old
3749877 Meh, we all have our Brainfart moments, I even made a OC nicknamed Gorefeathers xD
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Actually the only difference between the two sentences are "qui travaille" and "travaillant" which both means the same thing.
And whoah! You dug my comment really deep. I don't even remember posting it xD
I just spent the last few hours reading this.I'm hooked.Big time.I love the journal entries, mostly because it adds great charecter to twilight.More please.
I honestly believe this is one of the best fan fics I've ever read, and that's saying something considering the how many I read.
Good luck and keep up the excellent work.
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agreed
Awww sheet, that was touching.
Nicely done, once again.
Is this bad that this story inspired its own sort of sequel in my head (i say sort of since one its not done two i using my own ending for it but it a continuation of this world)