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Was looking forward to Rarity joining
...why not just dig rarity up...
2302163 Rarities more of a vampyre addict not a zombie.
Dragondash: draconic pegasus with some magical abilities limited only to fire breath and claw extension very aggressive and a noted bounty hunter knows the killer used to be friends. Famous quote "that monster took my family from me I think I'll settle for her head" fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/184/b/6/un_named_dragon_pony_by_serithal-d55swkr.png (all credit goes to artist.)
Umbra Wraith
a slightly crazy shadow-bound pegasus with a gun metal gray coat, amber red eyes, with a red and blue mane.
can give shadows a form of half life
great chapter
cold uncaring view of life/love of the things that others fear
Pleasant Pheasant
A lanky, light green pegasus stallion with a curly grey mane and red eyes. His cutie mark is a distressingly detailed pair of eyes and a toothy smile wider than Pinkie Pie's.
He giggles often, and it is very high-pitched and happy.
Interesting. Can't wait for more.
2303739 sounds like a mixture of the mad hatter and the Cheshire cat. Love it! Any idea why he'd do what he's doing to the ponies?
An OC? Well, if you insist.
Name: Venom
Race: Pegasus
Gender: Stallion
Cutie Mark: A green cobra with it's tail the shape of a bullwhip
Appearance: Swayed back, green colored mane. Tall black body with a few noticeable scars on his wings.
Personality: He is calm and acts sophisticated in front of those around him. However, should some pony provoke him, he becomes a complete sadist and tortures the pony until he/she is either dead, or traumatized for life. Biggest factor on his viewpoints is that his sadism mixes well with his narcissistic nature. This mixture has him believe that if he can't have some pony, involving any sexual reasons or none at all, then no pony should have them. And by that, I mean make sure that they don't live to see another day.
Attitude: Although he does act calm and polite to other ponies, he is completely selfish and wants every pony to know that if he does not get what he wants, then bad things will happen. Should some pony deny him a priceless antique, they die. Should some pony deny him attention, they die. And if some pony denies him sex, you guessed it, they die.
Choice of Weaponry:
.Bullwhip (used for torture)
.Hunting knife dabbed with the venom of a Black Widow (used for murder)
.Kitchen knife (used for both)
2305263 How is it that yours is the only OC that actually fits the killer's agenda?
2305287 Truth be told, I have absolutely no clue whatsoever
2304626 Pheasant never had a father, and his mother was always quite sickly. She regretted that he would never have the guidance of a father figure, so she decided that she would protect him from the evils of the world. Pheasant never learned of death or disease, and never truly learned about serious consequences. Pheasant's mother spoiled him terribly, trying to make up for her sickness and father's absence by getting him toys and letting him have his way most of the time.
Sadly, his mother's health got worse as time went on. One day, on his ninth birthday, his mother fainted while cutting his birthday cake. Pheasant wanted to eat his cake right then, and he got upset with his mother for falling asleep. He tried to cut the cake by himself, but he was very sloppy, having his mother cut all of his food for him. He eventually got so frustrated that he threw the knife at his mother.
The knife stabbed through her eye into her brain, and she stopped breathing. Pheasant was scared for his mother. He apologized to her for getting mad, and he kept trying to wake her up, but she never even flinched.
He shouted and cried for hours. His mother had always been there for him until then, and he didn't know what to do.
Finally, when Pheasant had given up hope of waking his mother, he turned to go to his bed. He turned his head to look back at his mother, and there she was smiling at him! He had never felt so relieved in his life! With the biggest smile of his life, he jumped onto his mother and gave her a hug. At that moment, his radiant smile, along with his mother's beautiful blue eyes, appeared on his flank as a cutie mark!
They spent the rest of his birthday playing. No matter how fast Pheasant flew, he just couldn't tag his mother. This was the most energetic he had ever seen her! They sat back down for cake, but his mother told him that he would have to cut his own food from now on. Pheasant was just too happy to care that he had to do it himself, and he became rather skillful with knives.
Pheasant realized that he was able to cure his mother's sickness with his knife, and from then on, he vowed to end as much suffering as he could, always smiling. Always happy to help ponies feel better.
At the moment I don't understand why Twilight doesn't recreate Carousel Boutique in the Everfree or simply makes a cavern underneath the library, maybe recreating Carousel Boutique in the cavern or simply creating a little home there for Rarity...
It would after all be quite easy for her wouldn't it?... And I can probably come up with many more ideas as to what she could do to return Rarity AND keep it secret:
For an example she can recreate Carousel Boutique (I'm kinda liking this track) in the changeling hive by using the changelings and then activate a portal from the hive to the Everfree, her library or to the real Carousel Boutique so that Sweetie Bell CAN INDEED grow up with a sister.
And with your skills as a writer I'm more than convinced you can take ideas like these and turn them into reality, if not there has to be several more ideas from other readers that you can do this to.
2305410
That it so eerie... I LOVE IT!
2305410 Very interesting back story, but there is just one thing off about him.
1. You say he vowed to end the suffering of other ponies, yet we are talking about an OC that killed two bearers of the Elements of Harmony. Is he supposed to be a hypocritical mamma's colt ,insane, or both?
My OC didn't need an event that involved his parents to make him who he was. Venom was raised by his unicorn father who never bothered to shelter him from the truth at all. Through out his young life, he knew there was evil in the world, but he thought there was not enough of it. Driven by the possibility that he may have been lied to, Venom vowed to show every pony that there is evil in the world. Even if it means bringing pain and suffering to those who will deny him from anything. He even went as far as torturing his own father to death without leaving a single trace of evidence in the crime scene.
When he became a full grown stallion, he embraced the sadistic, evil side that consumed his heart. He even started to become narcissistic the moment he rose to nobility. Venom wants you to know that he is a force to be reckoned with. He will find ways to make you exploit your weaknesses, mess you up psychologically, and is a strategic master in any form of combat. If anything else needs to be said about him is this. He has a good reason why he hates everything that is good in the world. Plus, he is only out to fulfill his needs, and what he needs is to show every pony that there is evil in the world. In fact, Venom has been doing it so much, he is almost to the point of wanting to become a god of pain and suffering.
I'm just making it simple and clean over here. Your OC is only doing this because he thinks it's making ponies "feel" better. Mine, on the other hoof, is only doing it out of his own reasons and beliefs. With a little dash of selfish desires.
2306645 I prefer insanity to evil. I just wanted to throw out a possible murderer that wasn't named something like Limb Collector or Starkiller or Dark Demonlord Bloodmane Nightraven. If there's one thing this fandom has to work on, it's subtlety.
2307384 You know, I agree with you on that one.
2365612 your own meme? lol.
2365704 touche
2365702
What can I say....
Hmmm a Oc huh.
Name: Midnight Breeze
Race: Pegasus
Gender: Mare
Cutie Mark: a crescent moon with a shooting star trailing the inside curve
Appearance: lavender coat, a lime green mane, hunter green eyes and wears a small black top hat with a orange ribbon tie around it.
Personality: a silly and ditzy mare who loves playing practical jokes and loves playing games. the problem is her bi-polar disorder. The other her is a very cruel and has a inferiority complex, if she starts to feel lower then someone, they must be brought down.
Attitude: Midnight is very sweet and enjoys having fun and practising astrology. Unfortunately her other half is the polar opposite. She is cruel and merciless. But she enjoys using the telescopes for different reasons....
2366076 so basically Pinkie Sparkle?
2366246 ......if ya want.
2373672 This is Bubble and Squeak
as for that error, thanks, I'll fix that up.
2378351 Well it should be obvious as to his prefference.
2303739 First thing that comes to my head when read the name is this game blendogames.com/images/atomzombiesteam.jpg
2423119 Bloodshadow?
Just... Just read that over again.
BLOOD SHADOW.
What Twilight should have done is run over to Rarity's body, claim to find a very weak pulse, and teleport away with her. Patch her up, raise her, and claim she was only mostly dead and it's such a good thing Twilight got to her in time to heal her. As long as they get Fluttershy (the only pony who was at the scene first and might have checked her pulse) on board, there's nobody to contradict them.
OC's? sad I don't have one who could fit... I don't think you're accepting any anyway 8'D
NO! Not Rares ;w; Damn that killer, sob.
Nice job man... nice job.
She'll be missed.
What?
Seems like that's the case, even in real life.
7581471 Poop.
7926548 Fan-fucking-tastic.