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GaryOak


Writing graduate who loves cartoon horses and all manner of silly things. Occasionally writes serious stories. A divine Swedish woman drew this avatar.

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Gary Oak writing a clopfic. Why am I not surprised? Oh well, good job anyway, and get that Poke Ball away from me.

*coughcough-Reprocussions-coughcough*

Shining Armour gasped. “But I'm over nineteen –”

Not bad, considering real life horses average between 24-30.

Shining Armour giggled into her vagina

Ah.

... :rainbowlaugh:

Also I really liked the constantly changing forms mid-sex, can't say I've read one that has done that before.

(Joke) Alt. Title: Queen Armour: In Which Chrysalis Appears And Nopony Gets Revenge
It's not often this happens. Also, ya got featured. HOW DID I KNOW?!

In all honesty, who didn't see that ending cumming?
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You are one of the few writers that explores the whole advantage of a changeling thing. Though, there are no human in Equestria fics where a guy meets a changeling and has her turn into actress Christina Hendricks.
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Very nice clopfic. Think having a changeling for a lover would be awesome with the ability to look like anypony you wanted. Think this might be the first clopfic in which Shining chose to be with Chrysalis.

An interesting Changeling piece. Unless i missed something, though, Cadance is still locked in the caverns.:twilightoops:

I proofread this.

Then I puked.

GaryMotherfuckingOak, Nice job! :D

2032957 I don't even want to know why you know that. I won't even check if you are right.

Usually it is best to avoid bringing numbers, and it is better to say that it nearly doubled in size. However since you mentioned it again later the size mention is acceptable. Still better to simply say it is big with fancy terms, but it is acceptable here.

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You know you liked it.

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What?! You don't want to make a statistical analysis to verify the interval I present? :trollestia:

Well, all I have to say is. Nice job.

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Except Cadance is still rotting in the caverns. Actually, that could still be considered a nice job, depending on your view of Cadance.

Holy mackrel, this story just got featured! My first time in the box. Thank you very much for all of your support! <3

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Relax, it's coming after EqD's Tuesday story update!
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Really? I'm kind of surprised.
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I'm not sure why, I just prefer to give specifics in that department in my writing.

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My opinion of Chrysalis?

Part of me wants to hit it. The rest of me knows better. :pinkiesick:

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Relax, she isn't still imprisoned. <3

Comment posted by IridiumHoof deleted Jan 28th, 2013

sorry but, how-the-HELL is ALL THAT a bad choice?

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He married a succubus who's trying to turn him on to wincest.

2035382 And succeded!

Just the fact that the 'word' poner was used makes me want to murder you in the face, but it was pretty good. Despite the fact that I hate stallions :rainbowlaugh:

Hmmm, I will read this later.

But no dark tag. :( not sure if want.

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He married a succubus who's trying to turn him on to wincest.

And why is that bad? It's win-win, Chryssy gets food, Shining gets sex witn ANY FEMALE OR MALE OF ANY SPECIES HE WANTS. Clearly it's THE best choise he could've even made.

Comment posted by neozigma deleted Jan 28th, 2013

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...Why was it a bad thing again ?

I lol'd, and what the hay man, always expecting that Twilight transformation to happen.

You haven't even seen


my final form

Hmms, now where is chapter two, where they do it again?:twilightblush:

Awesome writing, grats on being featured :heart:

Hot hot! Thumbs up!:heart:

yeah. a win-win. totally faved for read later. maybe even this night.

That's hot.

Why do I read these?

Oh well nice job, well written and entertaining

Commence read.

Well, go Shining.

oh God, that ending.... :twilightoops:

Oh...
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My.
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Good stuff.

((Insert Incomprehensible Babbling Here.)) - Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire

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Exactly my thoughts. :rainbowlaugh:

Why all of the clop fics with Shinning Armor, talk about him likes his the combination of Jhon Rambo, Duke Nuke and Goku whenever it comes to stamina and size?
Is it supposed ot be funny or something?

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It's supposed to be real.

In case you have forgotten, ponies aren't humans. They don't have sex like humans. They aren't endowed like humans.

Plus bug succubus is kind of a dead giveaway that this should be taken with a grain of salt.

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Listen to his name. "Shining Armor." That's like the pony version of "Max Fightmaster". A name like that, you know he eats rocks and sweats pure testosterone.

Awesome clop scene Ive gotta say, and that ending was bucking hilarious.

That...was...TOATALLY WICKED!!!!!! :pinkiegasp:

This was pretty good. Extremely better than any other I've read. Even if I haven't read any besides this one featuring Shinning Armor and Chryssi. My favorite parts was when the carriage driver walked in on them or the end with Twilight.

Tev

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