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SugarShade


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This was actually pretty well written and would be a good explanation if chrysalis ever returned

IT MUST BE SAID:
CHRYSALIS= BEST. VILLAIN. EVAR.

488343 She's a rubbish villan! She didn't even kill anyone! Neither did discord! They are both useless!

488378 Yes. I see your point. and i use a sledgehammer to break it off, a pair of pliers to dispose of any errant splinters, a file to round it down to a Stump and use the result in an inexplicably genius way to demonstrate how few fucks I give about the opinions of a pile of scab-water.

AND THAT LADIES AND GENTLEMEN, IS WHY YOU DONT FUCK WITH MEEEEEEEE
:trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:
*Puts on sunglasses*
YEAHHHH!!!

488393 *Sigh* You claim victory without actualy wating to see how I respond?

Firstly, the term "Scab-water" doesn't actualy offend me in any way, as it isn't actualy part of the english language. Nor can you have a "pile" of water. Basic physics make your statement void.

Secondly, your punctuation could use some improvement. Even six-year-olds know that a sentence needs a capital letter at the begining. You should try to work on that.

And finaly:
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488442 good. In my opinion, the more people happy (in one way or another,) the better.
Troll or no Troll you need happy happy joy joy.
#EDIT: People can't take Jokes for what they are these days. I don't set out to hurt people, it only happens on occasion due to the fact that despite the Ingenuity of the english language, it often falls short of describing emotions, or in this case the... (laughter?) I felt when writing this.
##EDIT: Oh. OH. You actually thought there to be Malice behind these words? I see... And of course, your first reaction to a jab at your person: Immediately look for mistakes. :ajbemused: Nice work there Einstein. OLDEST TRICK IN THE BOOK, Although it isn't really a trick, is it? Why am I the one correcting my own posts? It's YOUR job to be the overly possessive spiteful forum post proof reader.
###EDIT: lol. you said 'pile.'

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Both of you, stop before I use her. I mean it, I didn't bring any Tranquilizer this time.

So, yeah, I think a well deserved, "moar" is required. Moar pl0x!

This story seem more realisitic in it portrayal of Chrysalis than most others I've read over the last day or two. Most other stories had Chrysalis starting to have a change of heart or a willingness to help right in the 1st chapter. :twilightoops:
That seem too OOC, IMO Chrysalis would try her normal changling nature to try to use and control whomever she came across, like in your story.:twilightsmile:
Of course in later chapters she most likely will change for the better, I just hope you do it slowly and logically, and not just suddenly "zap" I'm now in love, I must be good from now on.:facehoof:

"And really, she just wanted to fuck."

My avatar is my reaction face.

Fox

488628 Story's marked as "finished", and it seems to be good as that.

BEST CHANGELING CLOPFIC EVER!

In each other's arms?

Yes.

That is all.

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I see you pulled that out of your ass, where else do you keep
your conveniently hidden launchers?

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493122 Amen to Luna's responce..

Awesome one shot. Loved everything about this!:raritywink:

488378
Katz is best I tell you, BEST
But Taurus Bulba was no slouch either

I think I'd have liked to see this all taking place over the course of a few days, personally. But I guess I'm kind of a romantic at heart. :raritystarry:

491291 i have a discord! images5.fanpop.com/image/photos/31000000/Discord-Fan-art-discord-my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-31069385-900-761.png but he is currently busy making it rain chocalate rain on celestia right now... so yea.. good luck with shooting people with a luna launcher!

1133038 do you think you could point me in the direction of any royalty romance stories you've possibly found? can't seem to find any... it tends to go like this... "hey" so and so said "hi" luna/celestia said "wanna go upstairs and fuck?" so and so said "yes" luna/celestia said (insert clop here)..... so yeaaaaaa kind of a luna fan as my name tells so yes send me any of dem types of stories you can find if you think they good plz k thx

I kinda wish this would get continued

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Well, they don't have to be in each other's arms, I guess, but being in each other's rear legs would be a little awkward, no?

Or did I just make an accidental sex reference?

488442
I know this is ancient, but I couldn't not point out that one can, in fact, have a pile of water. You can make a pile of ice easily enough, after all, and ice is literally just water. Also, under the correct conditions even liquid water can be piled.

She even had the gall to wave her backside around, taunting her with her perfect double wide.

“Her precious Princess must have something to do with it,” she muttered darkly. “No mortal pony has an ass that perfect. Thick and shapely...”

Stupid sexy Twilight :twilightsheepish:

Wow, what a terrific story! This was so well written and moving. Both Chrysalis and Hayseed seemed true to their characters all the way through. Yeah, I was able to recognize the male character even though you didn't name him. You did a great job in your imagery, your pacing, and your description. I would definitely recommend this story to others to read. And this is by far one of the better Chrysalis stories out there.

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His name was Sawdust; hers was Chrys.

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I stand corrected. You're right. His name was only listed th one time in the story so I assumed this was about Hayseed Turnip Truck from the show.

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