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Thx for the height reference and GJ
Oh, wow, a human comparison chart. Very interesting. Nice work on the first chapter.
And that 'healing liquid' from Star Wars has a name: bacta. The more you know!
So based on the chart Twilight is at the perfect blow job height.
um you MAY or MAY NOT have gotten the height wrong. people are still trying to figure it out. like one source goes by apples and according to that celestia is around 6,0 with horn. knowbody except hasbro really knows their heights. but celestia is at LEAST 6,0 so that is the lowest i heard.
but then again you said "my world" meaning it can go your way.
for the record try "makeing him work for it" meaning if you were planing to have the clop in the 2nd or 3rd chapter. don't. there is MANY reasons why he would not (if he is average). 1.it is a animal species meaning from a normal persons perspective it is beastiality at least until the person realizes they are a lot like people and it is not actually beastiality. 2.he just met her. and 3.he most likely wants to go back so it would not last. (then again the reasons are for if your character is a "average joe".)
668602 it is either bacta or becta either one is close enough. i see you decided to inform him.
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............................Awesome.
Well this is amusing.
like it keep going
Interesting story, and i do like the height reference.
well the science is interesting
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Like I said, I believe self-inserts are like records of one's desires and wishes, so we'll just see how it turns out. I will say, however, that while the second chapter will get a little more into it, I will not be exploring the deeper facts of Chrysalis (No pun intended) in later chapters. Or at lest, that's what I plan on doing.
Also, what's the matter? You don't want to explode too soon?
i like the story so far, and i must say, VERY Interesting way to get to Equestria
number 50 YEAH!!
this is actually entertaining for a clopfic. keep it up!
Thank you all so much for supporting this FanFiction! I never knew I would get so much support! True, to some, 107 favorites and 52 likes is a pretty small number to throw a party at, but to me, it's everything.
Once again, love you all! Cheers!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
I blinked... what you gonna do about it?
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688962 I still blinked and I am still alive. I am the 1% who survive a Weeping Angle attack.
I like this!
Cheers
the wing boner grows lolz
We got one lucky human here.
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The man in the diagram has an angry face on his butt.
Also, interesting story.
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That always seemed weird to me, there's a hell of a lot of people out there with definitely nooooo love in their hearts, just avarice or malice (and sometimes they just born crazy and schizo
Maybe if you're an old geezer with heart problems I guess. I think it's more likely you pass out from a lack of energy, then simply wake up on your own, with a timberwolf gnawing at yer gut, or in a cocoon!
meh, it's alright
I enjoyed it
And I thought stealing from NC was clever too, unfortunately for me Chris is my brothers name.
I DEMAND MOAR!
ALL IN GOOD TIME I AM VERY BUSY
Oops, too loud?
Great clop sir! Not only is it decently paced it also is slightly more complex then the average smut.
I give you three mustaches for that.
So sorry the chapter is short and not on par. I was really battle bruise when I wrote this, and I am still very very sick while typing this...AND it's late at night. I felt so sorry for you guys to wait for such a long time that I just had to finish it. Talk about development hell!
Don't worry, I'll make up for it with a blog post I'll within the next day or so. Keep your eyes peeled.
In the mean time, to make up for such torture...have a silly song I made up based on a song I heard from an old Disney cartoon that's about fatty foods and lard.
The only thing I see that needs to be fixed is the "rear buttocks" part in the fourth paragraph. it's rear or buttocks, but not both. Unless he has some kind of weird front-butt that needs to be differentiated from the normal one.
dang you had it rough, and the chapter was acceptable along as you'll be able to get back into the swing of things when your of better health........
I'm very glad you are back! I was really starting to miss this story. When I get some free time I will look for mistakes and I will make sure to post them.
Back from the doctors. Found out I also have an ear infection
What have I done wrong
The only thing I can see now is that you add the quotations right after the commas, they need to have a space in between. But, I'm just a Grammar Nazi, so I nitpick. I hope you feel better soon
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Well you ARE 42, the answer to life the universe and everything, so I must follow your instructions
"let’s not go to Canterlot. Tis’ a silly place…"
Is that a monty python quote i see?
Made me
and 
at the same flippin' time!
Excellent chapter
I love the reference to MP, too.
I found a few mistakes and misspellings while reading, and I'll point those out below.
When explaining who's speaking during dialogue ("...brothers and sisters roam free.” She enthusiastically said to me."), there needs to be a comma directly after the end quote and the following letter need not be capitalized. Once again, I nitpick :P
"...did she look cute when doing that,” It reminds me..." she did*, and move the quote over a space.
It's "lie down", "lie next to me", "lie back", not lay, or at least I don't think
I found a good amount more, but I don't want to hog the comment space. Let me know if you want me to send you a message with everything I found
Hmm.....
is the only thing that expresses my fear of the title 
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Send me a message please. It will help me rather greatly, thanks, since I am the only one who is working on this fic and isn't very keen to finding mistakes, PLUS I'm sick and its sucking out my life force and will to do stuff.
Help me Obi-Beta_Failure, you're my only hope...[/endtransmission]
strangest ideas you say? well i think ideas you get through, well lets say 'strange' ways, can be some of the best, at least in my opinion
I say indeed a jolly good chapter if I do say so myself. The descriptions do help to picture the scenery as if it were a video! (Well, my mind works in funny ways so why not?) =3
You can never go wrong with a Monty Python joke.