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Wall of text. Most people don't like that. If adjusted, more people will give this story a read.
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I second this notion. This story may be worth reading, but it's nigh impossible to do so whilst it is in its current state.
Wdf he raped fluttershy.
well the story is a bit rushed.
It still made me lawl though.
Wait, the human just started having sex with Fluttershy while she's sleeping? Uh... what? This is poorly paced, and I could barely read it. It's mainly the format, but there are other problems.
Not the best work i've seen... I've seen worse. I mean, I shouldn't be the one to talk, the story I am doing is still being made but, this could have... been better... + What the flaming fuck? He rapes fluttershy and this is in the "teen" category? Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Change catagory to mature, please
Da fuq am I readin'?
influenced by magic maybe? i mean something tells me that doesnt normally act like this... hopefully next chapter will give his side of the story... and why the hell he is acting like that to... also it is rushed and clumsy SLOW THE STORIE DOWN!!!
choppy sentences are choppy.
Its 28 th of april and theres no nw chapter Y U LIES?