• Member Since 17th May, 2017
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LucidDreamer


I am the lucid dream

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OMNI:Well that was interesting
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I LOVE IT!

Interesting, Imma fav this.

It seems pretty good so far. I'm interested...That's it, I got nothing more to say.

... you know oddly enough I saw myself in this chapter, my average work week actually.
Boss: do this shit( fry some nachos or dumb shit)
Me: Okay

Boss: *something entirely unrelated to me*
Me: Sorry
Boss: STOP APOLOGIZING!
Me: Sorry...

*insert Django reference here*

I read this, I saw a pony and a changeling in need of a hug and a ton TLC... I hope this has a happy ending but eh, I just want to see how this plays out.

huh, sounds familiar.
oh wait, he seems like my recent emotional status in a nutshell.

good grief this is not Russian literature - it's basically about suffering of both an author and a reader

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*putting my literature glasses and start reading, after finish i put them away*
Its like all Goth romantic Albums created life and turned into that fanfic.... Also.....Why Latent Dream sounds like Eeyore in my Mind? 0o

Also, i know its early but can i ask for more? I like the way you type ^^

interesting

YAAAAY love it!!!!!!!!!!

Oh, I have to see how this goes.

Good start, I love it.

Are you going to continue it, or close it as a short Slice-Of-Life?

The Monk

9009012
I plan on continuing it. Perhaps today if I have time.

A gurgling grumble echoed from the former queen's barrel. Chrysalis his sed in annoyance and glared at her stomach. "I know." She growled. "Of all the times for my magic to give out..."

Typo: his sed
I assume you mean "hissed" instead of "his sed"

9009496
Thanks for catching that.

Wow... This is only the first installment and I'm hooked. :derpyderp1: Impressive as always Sanguine Dream. I look forward to seeing where you take this. :pinkiehappy:

calling the subversion now-
she falls for him.

From what I know of depression, is that everything just becomes the exact same boring experience. You don’t feel sad, you just feel nothing at all.
So of Latent is suffering from depression, then Chrysalis is going to be surprised that she can’t just make them feel anything she wants. Especially if things get to the point that he doesn’t see anything but boring crap in his future and starts to wish he wasn’t obliged to keep living.
If this is from personal experience, than this could go great.
Though if you are still going through depression or fighting it, just know that people can help you actually feel again and not just have everything be boring crap.

Well, there's definitely a good premise here. Hopefully something more will come out of it.

Well...i liked what i read? Um....i hope for more?

I've always thought this kind of story had potential. I imagine that Chrysalis has never actually had anyone love her. The real her, I mean. She's used to putting on disguises and hiding her true self. This opens up a lot of possibilities.

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good for you I have a story based on that concept in the works pm me if you want details

It wasn't too bad, and I liked it, so I'm gonna be keeping an eye on this.

DF

While a bit too quick paced and direct, in my opinion, it is certainly interesting.

Tracked.

"I'm going to fix that my pet. When I'm done with you, You'll only care about me!"

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9158075
This made me really happy. Thank you for this. :twilightsmile:

....... I need to know more. :raritydespair:

Welp. Time track it and hope one day it updates again.

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