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Shadowbot739


"Even when everything destroys you, make your last stand legendary." "If you search for the meaning of life, you're wasting your time. Just live it." Those are my lines. Take it, leave it. Be happy

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Another mission gone wrong, what else is new. Its not like I got anything to look forward to, because they just want me dead. Thief, pickpocket, trespasser, assassin. I am these things, I cannot deny that fact, but they do not see beyond the methods. They will not look deeper. Watching them, what ever those things are, it is clear they are rather trusting. Maybe, just maybe its time to make a move.

Canceled due the fact that if I were to continue this I would have to go through extensive rewrite.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 32 )

How can a suicide mission go wrong?
That's the one thing I don't understand.

2020891

A suicide mission goes wrong if you don't die. :derpytongue2: So wrong is good in this case :twilightsmile:

2026808
that is one way to look at it, always good to look at different sides to things:twilightsmile:

There are quite a few grammatical mistakes. Get someone to edit it. I'm also very glad you're consistent with Chapter length. I'll give it a proper look over later.

2027738
that figures, I'll work on trying to get an official editor later on, or just rip my hair out trying at it myself

2027749 A good editor doesn't care how many grammatical mistakes you have (unless it's completely unreadable), so don't be afraid to ask "The Writer's Group" or something for one.

2027760
yeah I know you told me that already, I do try my best to keep it readable and above that:eeyup:

Huh transformation in pony that makes sense?.. bravo...

2040945
I wanted to do something so it wouldn't be like he transformed for no reason, or some strange magical property's of the area.

I still have no idea what this crossover is but good story so far

2086513
Its with World of Warcraft

Got the cliffhanger down. 11-1 like ratio, man! I'm impressed.

2091229 Well you learn after being stuck on cliffhangers on several stories on this site repeatedly. They are evil but useful. Like gravity is some times

2091244 You should make a fic about the war on gravity.

2091259 umm I had thoughts, well if I do it be a one chapter thing no doubt

OH NO FLUTTERSHY!!!!:flutterrage:

2118255
I'm going to enjoy writing the next chapter, I just can tell

SSome one killed bllueblood thank fod.:pinkiehappy:

2153764
I hated him, so I thought why not end him in my story, and I did

He talks a lot for an assassin shouldve just stabbed him in the back and be over with, jerks like Blueblood don't deserve smack talk before their end.

2154136
I do see your point, but remember, its an old habit of his to talk a little too much

2154177
At least he is still making awesome escapes and kicking royalty in the head while hes at it, and was he like naked when he appeared before blueblood or is it like ingame your clothes shift with you?

2154200
As I wrote

good thing my armor changed with the rest of me

so yes it did shift with him

2154239
ah good didn't remember that.

2154295
Yeah I had thoughts in doing it the other form but decided not to, but added that line so the readers such as you wouldn't get confused. Though more to who don't know much about how transformation with druids works.

2154326
Yep its actually a lot more complicated and whats shown ingame is a very rough presentation of how it works.

This Legion buisness actually makes sense if you see Equestria as a world with a massively higher concentration of natural magic then Azeroth before the sundering where it was all contained in the Well of Eternity and with an already existing portal into this world it shouldn't be to hard for them to break into it from the nether and repurpose it with the energies from Equestria.

2195250
Indeed the concentration of magic is higher, but less chaotic then the Well of Eternity, party why they keep trying to attack Azeroth is cause its the only place that ever succeed at fighting the Legion, though barely. I wonder how Azeroth can fight them off again if another full scale attack happens, the well is gone, the world tree is still healing, and the aspects been greatly weaken. To top all of that, the races are divided.

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If the Legion would return to Azeroth now in the numbers they did in the War of the Ancients they would win. But on a smaller scale like the 3rd war without the undead forces of the Scourge to back them up they wouldn't get very far because of how the Factions developed since then, yes there is still the war between Alliance and Horde but Varian is shaping up to be a great leader and getting more and more willing to compromise if it means less bloodshed and violence. And the only force in the Horde driving towards an all out war are Garrosh and the ones loyal to him, which are a minority, but unfortunaly Garrosh is Warchief.
The Greatest problem the Legion has atm is that they don't have a reliable way into Azeroth. The well of Eternity is destroyed, the sunwell has been purified and is no longer able to be used by them due to the Light and the Dark Portal wouldn't work either.

2197266
Very true, there is no good way into Azeroth currently, or rather for launching any major attacks at least

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