Have you ever wondered just what the characters of a fanfic think of fanfics? Have you ever stopped and actually thought just what it was like to have anyone at random pluck you from canon and stick you as an actor in their little plays they make up? Well these characters know what that's like first hand. Witness the hilarity that ensues in a convoluted adventure of excuse plots and tacky cliches that the characters know from the getgo that they are in and that there's nothing that they can do about it.
Chapters (24)
AppleJack is the best pony.
Well then you'll probably like the story she tells in Chapter 6 out of all the ones that the characters do
"We are going to sleep," she told him hoisting him onto her back and trotting towards her bed, "I've read ahead in an "advanced" edition of the boyfriend book."
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160172 sorry ya didn't like chapter 7 apparently
It was more of a "Meh"
A "I don't like" would be more of a
"Alright, I'm sorry I cut you off now Twilight. But you're turn's up so no going again. You failed and can't redeem yourself." Tears began to form in the yellow pegasus' eyes.
Is this Discord being discordant, or a typo?
Kudos on the Legends3 reference, sad though it is.
Started reading this one a whim thinking it nothing more than a simple distraction for a bit, but then the blatant spite for the 4th wall (and possibly even the 3rd) turned out to be rather entertaining.
Congratulations, you have done an internet correctly.
164112 Made sense to me, though I can see how you got mixed up. Discord was insulting Fluttershy's story by apologizing to Twilight.
164628 That occurred to me, but... eh.. well it was 4AM or so... maybe I just wasn't firing all my synapses...
O.O
There are a few grammatical errors and some rough edges, but considering the theme of being generally nonsensical, I think this fic did a remarkable job of staying coherent, even when time travel came into play.
Perhaps it was the constant change of subject matter that kept me reading in the first place, I'm not totally sure.
One misspelled word bothered me more than any other though... that one, and only that one will I correct: 'soddering' -> "soldering"
An understandable mistake or typo though, it's not a frequently used word by any means.
I seriously had flashbacks to Valkyrie Profile when Twilight created her bookworld.... (to the point where I imagined Luna playing the Lenneth to Twilight's Lezard Valeth)
And did I sense a bit of Q's warped but still existing moral compass in Discord?
All in all, I was entertained. This alone is surprising considering it was initially not something I had in mind to read, and the two previous fics I started, I couldn't finish, due to boredom.
I may sound somewhat mixed in my review here, but rest assured, I found it rather good.
Last note... it probably wasn't a reference, but I definitely got an "...I just work here..." vibe from "OC" at the end there.
Nice job.
166304 I do apologize for any and all mistakes I make
after over a hundred pages of writing it gets a bit tedious. Try to go back and make sure everything's alright grammatically and all that when I upload it on fanfiction.net and such, but even then things can slip by.
As for you sticking with the story I'm always glad to provide entertainment for others
try to keep things as varied as possible plot-wise so the story doesn't get too dull. If I fall into any part where I'm not doing that good with this story I literally just flat-out admit such and flip to some other part in the story 
hopefully I can keep it up til the end though 
wat
169521 hope you didn't come in expecting to understand everything =)
I'm really glad that one part in an earlier chapter makes sense now, I had to reread that a few times to make sure I hadn't missed something, I'm enjoying this bizarre story so far.
"The thing's throwing fucking mannequins!"
Best. Line. Ever
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For whomever it was that posted the original number 16 post asking why Twilight looks like Mr. Dark from Rayman I am sorry but I accidentally deleted your comment
To answer the question, if you ever do decide to look at the story again, it is for reasons shown in chapter 10.
Hmmmm......
Deus ex machina < Chekhov's gun
Also, the world needs more dragon!Twilight fics.
Wat the hmmm.......
203462 hopefully not too bad
203495 Ioved the new chapter 5 stars I give my mind some electric therapy.
204014 You have a nice new profile pic
226398 Thank you
at first i was like
then i was like 
and then i 
160032 i lold at ur comment
oh god............lol
230708 well, glad you're apparently enjoying it for the time being
rarity seems like a bitch
I LIKE IT lets make a movie and have Samuel Jackson play in it cause you know hes in everything.
"Filly" refers to female pony children only. The word you're looking for is either "colt" (the male term) or "foal" (the gender-neutral term). You might want to fix that.
267441 me apologizes
hope it doesn't ruin the chapter 
267441 It's fixed
In all seriousness, this is like one of the greatest damn stories ever.
Nice pokemon reference.
UNICRON everypony RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
409767 What a twist
312175 That I highly doubt
But always happy to amuse 
Oh gosh. Taking advantage of it being a fanfic to do things that would normally be all kinds of awkward or even flat out messed up...I love it! I shall read onward...
417039 Hope it stays as pleasing til the end
only one more chapter to put up 
I might have been able to read this except that you fail to make new paragraphs when changing speakers in dialogue!!!
that's basic fiction grammar. PLEASE fix that, and then I'll give this story another shot.
I'm amazed you weren't called out on this yet. Unless you were in a later chapter 
but if so, Y U no fix chapter 1? 
Not to be mean, but
434179 Me did that for a while in an older fic but that got real irritating real fast
sorry 
no one's called me out on it yet in this one so congrats 
but again sorry 
just uploaded the final chapter of the story. Maybe someday I'll go back and edit the whole thing, but as of right now me done 
Again, sorry
Congrats loved the story.
434345 Dont exactly get what you mean by contests
but glad someone liked it 
I followed this story since it was first published and I can say it was one heck of a ride, and I'm glad I was here for it.
435339 And me is glad you liked it
435466
Any plans for future stories?
435491 Probably not gonna be doing any except for maybe little one shots here and there if things get me inspired
sorry. Be best to just check up on my deviant art account now and then to see if I've done anything new with the characters there 
that's the site I'm most active on 