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Writer, blogger, group admin, occasional jerk

Sequels

  • Twilight Holmes: Sabotage After Sunset
    Something is going bump in the night in Ponyville, cutting a path of destruction through the quiet town. It's up to Twilight Sparkle and her marefriend Rainbow Dash to get to the bottom of this.

    6,881 words · 4,206 views · 457 likes · 13 dislikes

Stories (13)

  • Spellbound Fireflies
    Rainbow Dash teaches a preteen Scootaloo how to fly, strengthening their bonds, both to each other and the ponies around them. A story about love, family, and growing up.

    77,162 words · 8,275 views · 1,060 likes · 18 dislikes
  • It's Elementary, My Dear Rainbow
    Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash awake to find themselves in a mysterious, compromising position. It's up to the brilliant mind of Twilight to deduce what series of events led them to this.
    5,972 words · 12,067 views · 1,202 likes · 29 dislikes
  • Coming Back
    Peace in the world beyond proves elusive to Rainbow, and she'll never let her friends down when they need her.
    94,318 words · 5,858 views · 586 likes · 16 dislikes
  • Twilight Holmes: Sabotage After Sunset
    Something is going bump in the night in Ponyville, cutting a path of destruction through the quiet town. It's up to Twilight Sparkle and her marefriend Rainbow Dash to get to the bottom of this.
    6,881 words · 4,206 views · 457 likes · 13 dislikes
  • Rolling With the Punches
    8,353 words · 4,736 views · 693 likes · 23 dislikes
  • Fluttershy Kicks a Puppy
    4,155 words · 7,846 views · 717 likes · 25 dislikes
  • Rainbow Rambles
    28,582 words · 5,232 views · 499 likes · 17 dislikes
  • Twilight's Hearth's Warming Carol
    16,390 words · 1,389 views · 215 likes · 6 dislikes
  • Little Wonders
    11,753 words · 7,484 views · 762 likes · 34 dislikes
  • Hummingbird Heartbeat
    9,168 words · 1,803 views · 209 likes · 6 dislikes

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Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash awake to find themselves in a mysterious, compromising position.  It's up to the brilliant mind of Twilight to deduce what series of events led them to this.

This story has sequels entitled Twilight Holmes: Sabotage After Sunset followed by Salting Snails.

Written for the Annual Twidash Contest.

Dramatic reading Part One and Part Two!

Let's Read blog by bookplayer here!

Remaster edited by Formerly Committed and Shellsh0cker.

First Published
16th Jan 2013
Last Modified
16th Jan 2013

Comments ( 141 )

#1 · 89w, 1d ago · 6 · ·

This is gonna be good. :pinkiehappy:

Edit:

It was, indeed, good.

:rainbowkiss:

#2 · 89w, 1d ago · 2 · 5 ·

I feel you could have done without the last two lines, but hey...

Despite the occasional error, this was pretty damn good job anyway!!:twilightsmile::rainbowdetermined2:

#3 · 89w, 1d ago · 2 · ·

Loved it! Nice work!

#4 · 89w, 1d ago · 2 · 7 ·

I shall read this at a later time ^.^ comments make me want to read.

#5 · 89w, 23h ago · · ·

Hahahahaaha this is one of the more amusing and adorable twidash fics I've read in a while! Here's hoping you do well in that contest my good writer!

PS - Have a mustache or three :moustache::moustache::moustache:

#6 · 89w, 23h ago · · ·

Oh bats, u so silly :rainbowkiss:

#7 · 89w, 22h ago · · ·

It was cute and funny!

I like it! :moustache:

#8 · 89w, 22h ago · · ·

Well, that was awkward, escalated quickly, stupid and sexy. :rainbowkiss: You earned a thumb.

#9 · 89w, 22h ago · 2 · 2 ·

No! It is middle school!

I liked this.

:twilightsmile:

#10 · 89w, 21h ago · · ·

Very good! I love light-hearted Twidash!

#11 · 89w, 21h ago · · ·

Had fun reading it

thanks for writing it  

#12 · 89w, 21h ago · · ·

That was very good. I love twidash. feeling kind of at a loss for words, I suppose its because the fic truly speaks for itself, and it says good things.

#13 · 89w, 21h ago · · ·

Great story, like it.  :twilightsmile::rainbowkiss:

#14 · 89w, 18h ago · · ·

I would love to see more of this vary good "the game is a hoof":twilig:rainbowlaugh:htsmile:

#15 · 89w, 17h ago · · 1 ·

Ohhhh funny and cute, its funte    ...or cunny? whatever, a good one indeed

and as always nicely done

#16 · 89w, 17h ago · · ·

Loved it :twilightsmile::rainbowdetermined2:

A nice way to start my day.

#17 · 89w, 14h ago · · ·

Witty, smart, sensible, I like it. The way you spoofed Holmes was amazing and hilarious. :rainbowdetermined2:Awesomeness approved, dear sir.

#18 · 89w, 11h ago · · ·

I had a lot of fun reading this. Some of the best TwiDash I've read in a while.

#19 · 89w, 10h ago · 2 · 1 ·

That was very well written :pinkiesmile: I loved how it all was a misunderstanding :rainbowlaugh: I just could imagine how crazy Twilight got when the magnifying glass was lost :rainbowlaugh: At the end it was very cute how you got them together :twilightsmile: well done.

#20 · 89w, 9h ago · · ·

>>1967771

Yeah, sure ya do. :ajbemused:

#21 · 89w, 9h ago · 5 · 1 ·

I found one pretty major problem in your story:

It's tagged 'complete'

Please correct this as soon as possible.

:rainbowwild::twilightsmile:

#22 · 89w, 8h ago · · ·

>>1969709

:rainbowlaugh:

This shall remain a standalone story.  However, if an idea strikes me that I can't ignore, I may write more stories in this same continuity.  Detective spoofs are kinda sorta extremely fun to write.  And I can't get away with only writing Twidash hook-up fics; we need to get some already together stories up in here!

#23 · 89w, 7h ago · · ·

Well done.

#24 · 89w, 6h ago · · ·

Well, I certainly had a fun time reading it. The moment where they found out what happened was priceless!

#25 · 89w, 6h ago · · ·

... That was pretty good. *Clicks like*

#26 · 89w, 5h ago · · ·

This was very good, it had a believable (and hilarious) premise, the characters were well done, and the events felt well paced and well described.

#28 · 89w, 3h ago · · ·

>>1969706

>> Subsolar Drift

Yeah, sure ya do.

This had me rolling :rainbowlaugh:

#29 · 89w, 3h ago · · ·

And they lived happily ever after! :twilightsmile::heart::rainbowkiss:

#30 · 89w, 3h ago · · ·

Twi actually reminded me of the Holmes from the new movies. Nice.

#31 · 89w, 2h ago · · ·

That was perfect, oh my! :raritystarry: Very fun to read, I could only imagine the ambition you must have felt when you crafted this story :twilightsmile:

#32 · 89w, 2h ago · · ·

>>1969706 :twilightoops: Well played.

#34 · 89w, 2h ago · · ·

your doing Coming Back? awsome I hadn't notice you were the same author. I love that fanfic. keep it up.

#35 · 89w, 2h ago · · ·

Oh god this was hilarious.  Is it wierd that I expected it to be Pinkie giving them something with a dilluted form of the love poison?

But the misinterpretation driving them crazy, and then that reveal at the end!  You have been faved!

#37 · 89w, 1h ago · · ·

Star ... check

Thumb up ... check

:twilightsmile::rainbowlaugh:

#38 · 89w, 48m ago · 1 · ·

Twilight dies at the end?! How could you, you monster! I thought this was a light-hearted comedy romp!

#39 · 89w, 16m ago · · ·

>>1971952

Yup, she dies everyone dies eventually.

#40 · 89w, 16m ago · · ·

This was awesome, very cute. There are so many Dark/Gory/Mature/Sex/Etc... stories out there that I really missed stories like this. Ones where the girls just get to be themselves and do cute stuff. :twilightsmile:

#41 · 89w, 13m ago · · ·

>>1972148

Celestia, Luna, and probably Cadence don't.

#42 · 88w, 6d ago · · ·

Hilarious:rainbowlaugh:

#43 · 88w, 6d ago · · ·

A very mysterious and compromising position? ME LIKEY! *Read later*

#44 · 88w, 6d ago · · ·

:rainbowkiss:

#45 · 88w, 6d ago · · ·

So...Awesome....:rainbowkiss:

#46 · 88w, 6d ago · · ·

Saw the resolution (that nothing had happened between them) coming from a mile away, but that's the pleasure of this story, isn't it? It's the journey, not the destination that matters.

I loved that they went through town and visited all their friends, finding out about different adventures at every turn. The real mystery for me ended up being why they were watching one another so closely. Wondered if Pinkie had drugged them.

Thanks for sharing such a pleasurable story with us :pinkiehappy:

#47 · 88w, 6d ago · · ·

I haz giggles:pinkiehappy:

#48 · 88w, 6d ago · · ·

At least this didn't end with Twilight falling off of a roof.

#49 · 88w, 6d ago · · ·

awwe thats so cuuute

and Twilight brush your mane :ajbemused::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

#50 · 88w, 6d ago · · ·

Saw it coming a mile away, but that doesn't mean I am disappointed, far from it. This was a well put together story. A sequel would be quite funny, with the explanation and all coming into play.

Spike glanced up from the pile of books he was sorting.  “Oh hey, Twilight!  I was wondering where you went off to.  When you came in last night you asked me to remind you about the note you tucked behind your ear.”

Twilight’s eye twitch was back.

I was just thinking about death stares at that point, I think Twilight must have looked a bit like this:

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