The Final Day in the reign of Discord
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Oh wow
I really like this, what an idea! ^-^ Good job!
darn short and bitter... I like it
I like it.
I felt the drama of the story, with its bitter end and dramatic body.
And all in just over 1000 words.
You should feel good.
THIS IS COMPLETE???!!!
Very interesting, but I dun' get it. Is Discord dead, and Twilight sealed herself away, or is Discord still alive and dandy?
Fairly interesting. I always appreciate those who can tell a story with brevity. The grammatical errors made it somewhat difficult to read, though.
Very well done. I really liked the ending especially.
Touching and emotional, if a bit short and uninformative.
Not sure I really buy Twilight being able to overpower Discord with just the Alicorn Amulet alone, as implicitly I wouldn't expect it make the wearer any stronger than an actual alicorn, and we know that even Luna and Celestia combined were still no match for him without the Elements of Harmony. There's also the matter of the pony statues, when Discord explicitly stated in the show that turning ponies to stone was pretty much one of the few hings he doesn't do, although I suppose we can't entirely take him at his word on that.
Over all though an interesting AU take on events and an enjoyable read.
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Thank you.
1956547
Yes. After all, what else would you have me write? (seriously, request something, or what you'd wanna see if anything)
1956598
All of the above, and a few things you haven't conseidered.
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I shudder to ask, but which grammatical errors?
1959366
hey, like Twilight said, she was studying.
1960283 That's nice and vague...
1960283
its just the slightest bit short, thats all.
it is a good story though. its just kinda short
When all else fails STUDY!
I never felt like Discord was a bad guy. He just had a cruel sense of humor that nobody but him thought was funny. It was a little too dark for me, but it was an ok story. It was a little short but still ok.
Damn...That's jus kinda evil. Amazing and beautiful in a twisted fashion but still. damn.
Now I'm sad. I love Discord...
I'm not sure what to think. What Twi did was wrong but as the last line said:
I find it a bit off that Twilight could have a magic strong enough to kill Discord, but through the power of suspension of disbelief i was able to enjoy the story for what it is. I like it!
Have a review. An interesting idea and I didn't see the end coming, but 1,006 words really isn't enough to do the setup justice. Needs an AU tag, too.