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That shipping
Nice pic i'd say.
Very nice I like the paring .
A good overall plot, the story was well written and thought out, however as much as it was well written I just couldn't get the 'Believability' factor of this. Why?
Yes the Wonderbolts are Rainbow Dash's dream, but she would NEVER abandon her friends like that - not for 10 years straight, that goes completely against her ingrained loyalty to her friends, on top of that if she was in love with Cheerilee as you portray, there's no way the Element of LOYALTY would abandon her.
So although a good stand alone, I feel it asn't true to the characters.
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I agree with everything you stated here but despite that I still enjoyed this. Strangly...