somewhat AU. With her career coming to an end and nowhere else to go, city pony Rarity must move to Ponyville. Can she ever learn to get along? Especially with somepony who is her polar opposite like Applejack? Eventual Rarijack.
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Really nice start. Must keep track of that story
Interest peaked, going to track.
Tee-hee. I don't think I've ever seen a "what if Rarity was the unicorn who moves to Ponyville, instead of Twilight" story before. Maybe this will be more about the magic of fabulousity than the magic of friendship, but in any case it is very cute.
Awesome right off the start, Props man.
I love the Rarity character in this story.. And I admit, I HATE HER SO MUCH! (Geez I went brain dead for a second, I thought so much was one word for a little bit, work brain work!) However I like Applejack character a lot, Pinkie is as much random, only one problem.. When she talked to Rarity she wouldn't be standing outside only, she would be still hopping, sometimes moving back and forth. But that's your opinion, I wish you good luck, tracking.
It's a good premise, and well written so far.
The origins of Rarity.
Tracking this, definitely.
dis gonna be gewd
I can only imagine what this would sound like to those who track this.
"Attention, [you],
A new chapter has been added to A New Chapter!
Click here to go see it."
1938948 LOL, that is like, 50% of the reason I named it that :P
1936831 I totally agree (not about the hating Rarity thing, I LOVE RARITY :D) about the Pinkie thing. She's always moving in my head, but I haven't found a good way to transfer it to text yet, so I'm glad you caught that, sorking on a oneshot to work on that in :) I was worried about AJ, but I guess its okay, we'll see if I can keep that up XP
(Also I totally try to combine the words "each other" into "eachother" all the time so you're not alone lol)
1941667 Glad to hear that, I wish you good luck on making Pinkie move.
Red = Change
(Also, mover? did you mean more? or newer? Just saying, I am a editor and I don't think that fits in.)
1942342 It's mover, as in ponies that would move her things into her new home...y'know what I mean? But yeah, "the" would sound better there :) I'll have to change that later
1942408 Ah, that makes sence (Brain Dead again.. GAAAHH)
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Is this going to be a Rarijack? If so you've piqued my interest.
1973344 Yes it will be
eventually
1974684 Very good. I shall continue to watch, eagerly, for updates. I wish to put this particular Rarijack into it's proper category.
And oh dear oh dear. Heh. Nice 'fish-out-of-water' feel you've got going on.
This has a good start and I am very interested in how Rarity and Applejack will get past being at each other's throats.
An update?
I love this story!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
ScatMan
Go on....
I'm waiting...
Better not take a week...
Or else I'll murder you...
1987004 Lol, I'll try to get it out quicker this time, just for you
I WILL NEVER FORGIVE YOU FOR THIIIIIIIIIISSSSS!
Ok, in all seriousness, you have a great story here, take all the time you need to sort out real life first, then come back when you are free and write more.
I love this.
Happy to see that Rarity's backstory is introduced. Can't wait to see what happened to her.
And what will happen with her and Applejack, of course.
NO! *Thousands of Likes turn to dislikes*
Just kidding, this is still an AMAZING story, with an awesome plot.
Keep up the hard work.
2050310 DAT PLOT.
2050326 AMAZING PLOT!
Edit: Dat tail.
HHHHHNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!
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Sweetie belle made me change my dentist appointment....
Another great chapter!
I love this story.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Nice continuation. I liked the ending and eagerly await more. I love the whole entire Spike not meeting Rarity part. But I also thought that this was maybe pre-Twilight Sparkle being in Ponyville so I wouldn't of remembered Spike. Anyways, continue onward my good author and continue to write good fanfiction.
I have a feeling those dislikes came from the people who just hate the concept of Rarijack. Whatever, their loss
Anyways, keep up the good work, I'm interested to see where this goes
2138237 I thought so too
I'm not actually upset about it, but I did manage to bully out 2 more guilt likes 
It's got great build up and char devopement Riba.
Keep up the good work!
2631534 D'aww! Thanks
I will 
so any chance of this story being updated?
Awesome! More please!
Wish this had been continued.... :(