Sorry mate, but this was awful. I understand you may not like Rarity, but that is hardly an excuse to write a character so very out of character. Yeah Rarity's kind of a snob, but she's not a prick like that, man. I'm sorry, but I just can't sit by and let a bad characterization go un-spoken.
Other than that you're story's not half-bad. Very enjoyable.
You motherbucker. Rarity is best pony!! also,just because you don't like her,it doesn't give you a right to make her a awful person. Now go sit in the corner and think about what you did!
Well then.....
There are times I really wish I didn't read the Author's notes...
Fuck You...
Sorry mate, but this was awful. I understand you may not like Rarity, but that is hardly an excuse to write a character so very out of character. Yeah Rarity's kind of a snob, but she's not a prick like that, man. I'm sorry, but I just can't sit by and let a bad characterization go un-spoken.
Other than that you're story's not half-bad. Very enjoyable.
You motherbucker. Rarity is best pony!! also,just because you don't like her,it doesn't give you a right to make her a awful person. Now go sit in the corner and think about what you did!