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Y'know, the interactive pony doesn't help.
No Rainbow, I'm only here to irritate a friend! Go... foxy-box Fluttershy or something.
Only 4 or 5 chapters? Considering how many mares there are in just Ponyville you could probably go least double or even triple that number.
Please hurry with the next chapter
...big mac why are you so foorish, you have seed this situation many a time SHAMFUH DISPRAY!!
rapetastic cant wait for next chapters
You idiot, Macintosh! Don't trust any mares, not even your sister!
Like it
As soon as rarity showed up I was like... Fucking drugs Macintosh don't let her in. It ain't worth the risk. But hey twilights gonna be there and you know you want it.
Commence read.
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Also this is brilliant
Out of all of them u trust rarity
More just more
"Reading this fic may cause you to feel the need to poop. This is normal."
Wat.
Also, I really want this to work out. Maybe have him confess to Twilight, and then she realises the mistake and they go off together? Make love, with no rape? I really loath rape, but then it is not my place ti impose that upon you; so I wont. However, could do me a favour and tell me if there will be rape? I'll not downvote out of spite or anything silly like that.
Also, if there is going to be rape, this will need a dark tag.
SixRoller, some romance, but mostly comical clop.
Stay tuned however for a Twi/Mac ship I'm putting through the grinder for quality.
This chapter Is filled with so much fuck (literally)
Looking good so far. Don't know why Big Mc would try to avoid this time of year. I'd look forward to it alot lol.
Wow, good timing, just finished rereading first chapter
Wincest?
That's not going to go well...
1901108 Well...
Woohoo that was so good.
Whelp, shit.
moral Macintosh is best Macintosh!
I smell foalcon.
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All right then, you go screw ten girls in quick succession with no breaks. And each girl wants more as soon as you're finished, so you're being treated like a breathing sex toy more than anything.
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Well, this story has failed my expectations. I began reading this with the understanding that Macintosh managed to get himself out of each situation only to end up in a worse one. Clearly that was not the case as you said that there were 5 chapters and he did the deed after one and a half. What makes it worse is that you had such a brilliant idea that made this story stand apart from all of the others about being in heat that I've read before. The idea that Macintosh wasn't merely avoiding the heat stricken mares because he is to kind to take advantage, or get mobbed, or get one pregnant. The gold medal you dropped was that he was protecting something far more valuable. His virginity was something I wouldn't have guessed in a million years! I was we'll aware that he was going to give it up eventually but you jumped the shark too soon. I'm not going to pretend that I know what's coming next, but the truth is, I doubt it will hold as much ground as the premise of Macintosh's original problem with protecting his chastity. I doubt the following situations will be as threatening or severe to Macintosh. God Damn! I couldn't tell you how hyped I was for chapter two! That cliffhanger in chapter 1 was epic! And the title for chapter 2 almost made me put this story in my favorites because it felt that intense of a moment like everything was on the line already and the story had just started. I can see how talented you are and who knows, maybe I'm wrong and you have something special in store. Oh well, in the end my opinion doesn't matter. I'm just one guy who had a problem, I'm sure everyone else loves it. I'm just voicing my opinion. I won't vote this down, but I don't see myself on the edge of my seat for the future of this story like I did before.
1902411 That actually would probably have been funnier, to be honest. Especially if he did end up with twilight at the end. Oh well.
Unless he hasn't came before on account of her being so...ahem...fast.
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Also, "semi-rape-turns-into-consent-because-he's-a-guy."
The validity of this statement disturbs me. It's also the reason I clicked on this story, cause that was damn funny.
Man, I hate to be that guy, but I have to... rape of a man by women is still rape. Think about it this way, if the genders were reversed, and, say, Big Mac and Caramel were drugging and having sex with Twilight, this story wouldn't look as good...
Ah, what do I care. It's hot. Please continue.
I already felt the need to poop even before reading this.
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What this guy said.
Just cause its a bunch of females raping a male, does not make it unworthy of being referred to as rape, nor does it remove any of the social stigmatization or any other aspects from it. Come on guys, I thought you were better than this. If the roles were reversed, and one of the female cast was getting raped by a group of males, it would be down voted and flamed straight to hell.
hahahah. RUN MAC RUUUUUUN!
1902606 I concur, write more.
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Going by the description, I had expected more of Big Mac dodging out of town. I'm sorry to say that I am a bit disappointed by the road this story went down so quickly. Oh well, still a thumbs up for the overall idea.
Reading this fiction will cause me to poop? No worry, I'm already reading this on the crapper, so I'll be fine.
Good. I think you can add a bit more suspense to this story and more chapters as well. You are a good writer and I think you should continue.
Big mac has left his swag on
This fic is great, your "action" scenes are particularly great, love your style. Amid this torrent of sex and heat though... I can't help but hope that Big Mac manages to tell Twi how he feels. Bit silly now, but still.
Oh celestia no what if the cmc see!
I was hoping that he would of found a way out of that situation and kept this story from becoming typical...sadly that didnt occur. Your writing is good and I enjoy the style I was just let down a bit.
There's no way that they're not pregnant now.
Or at least, I hope they are. That'd be amusing.
Haven't even read a single word and I already find myself asking ....... "wut?"
Hnnnnnnnnnnng!
This fic is a giant bucket of awkward.
Nuff said.
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Ah! I say, much better!
no leave him alone
