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I'm so going to enjoy this.:) :rainbowwild:

I just knew it was going to be them roleplaying, and you didn't disappoint.:pinkiehappy:

I came.

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Shouldn't your testicles have shriveled up and turned into dust by now? :rainbowderp:

1749397 I've got some stamina.

Ripped off of My Little Slave. :trixieshiftleft:

No Blood, No Gore, such a shame :pinkiesad2:, but it's really good written. Good job there :pinkiehappy:

:moustache:I don't usually like this kind of stuff, even if its just roleplay, but for some reason :yay: this is Great! I'm not sure if its the brilliant descriptions or the excellent dialogue or the way you build up tension and suspense but the whole thing is super effective. I liked seeing Big Mac act in such a dominate and cruel way, a complete turn from who he is normally, and still have the personality of stallion we all know and love. Fluttershy was great. Her character is always cutest when she's afraid or shy and its no different here. All in all this is not the kinda of fic I would have expected from you or that I would like but I am happy to say that this surprise was awesome. You rock my fellow writer. See you in Brighter Days!:eeyup:

Where is the brutal dismemberment?:applecry:

read "My Little Slave"
Much longer and had way more clop :p

1749455 I certainly hope you did. After all, I aim to please:pinkiehappy:
1749377 Yeah, I just can't bring myself to write a full rapefic. I'm not COMPLETELY like "that guy". Hope you enjoyed
1749381 Isn't that sort of the goal of a fic like this? Well I'm glad you took pleasure from my hours of soul crushing writing.
1749546 I'm going to assume this is a bad thing? Question, did you read before you judged?
1749796 Not sure if you enjoyed or not:ajbemused:
1750827 Blood and Gore ain't really my thing, but if you want it might I suggest http://www.fimfiction.net/story/56178/Fluttershy%27s-Love
1753741 As I said, that isn't my cup of tea, look to the above response if you're into that :pinkiehappy:

1754392 thank you for the Link, I'll read it right away:pinkiehappy:. Also, I hope you'll do some more good fictions:raritywink:, I really liked this one :twilightsmile:

1749455 I shall be the first to admit that yes, I have read My Little Slave, and yes, I also drew inspiration for this fic from its long chapters. However I did not "rip off" that fic. Look around you. Common themes are everywhere, we grow from the ideas of others and we form our own as time progresses. I'm sorry if you feel like I stole from The Mysterious Fluttershy Fan but I assure you that among the many things that I am, I AM NOT a plageriser. I also apologize if this is a bit long winded and defensive but I'll guard my fics to the teeth. Also I drew inspiration from BronyStories, he does some dark shit too.
1754085 As have I.....multiple times. Read the above comment for more thoughts on this. The full purpose wasn't just the clop however, but also the FlutterMac...but the clop did have a lot to do with it.

1754486 Ehh...
Write some Flutterdash and I will be pleased...
(message me when/if you do :p)

1754392 Also, dat avatar:
I came.

I had an idea they might be roleplaying, but that theory died the more I read, my mind was blown at the end! Very good! :yay:

I had no fucking idea of what was going on all the while and I dont know what the fuck I read, only that I liked it

First, we have this paragraph...

Fluttershy sobbed as she swallowed the last of her dignity and began to pull his cock deeper into her own mouth. She forced herself along his length until she was only centimeters away from his crotch and she’d managed to stuff as much of his dick down her throat as possible. Then she picked up the pace, pulling her head back and then diving back in at a rapid speed, allowing the tip of his cock to hit the back of her throat time and again. She stopped with her nose pressed against his waist, twisting her head from side to side to play with the shaft in her throat and let herself choke around his member, swallowing her spit to lube his length up thoroughly. She could feel her collar tighten dangerously, as her windpipe was filled with stallion cock.

And then a little while later, we have this paragraph...

His fully extended member stretched all the way up his mid section, and almost to his torso. Fluttershy realized, with horror, that the amount she had taken into her mouth and throat hadn’t even been his full length; he’d been holding back the whole time. His member twitched and throbbed as if it had a mind of its own, and was waiting to be satisfied.

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It just don't add up!

That being said, the ending on this was really sweet. :yay::heart:

I always knew these two were some kinky freaks. It's always the quiet ones. On a related note, any chance that you will do one with Fluttershy being the dominate one?

I have to say I was a bit skeptical to the "dark" warning, but it ended up in pleasure for both so i got to say I liked it. :pinkiesmile:

make part 2 but fluttershy is the dominat

I found a few minor mistakes but they arent going to take away from the MAJOR TOTAL AWESOMENESS of this awesome story. I love you!!!!!! :pinkiehappy:

I wuved it! :rainbowkiss: This is the first time I've seen a fluttermac fetish fic. I must say, I would love to see more!

1754516 I do believe that is the point of Clop:pinkiehappy: glad you liked it
1754530 Sorry but the answer to that is a detonate No. I don't do FlutterDash, anything so yeah it ain't happening
1754739 That's fine too
1754872 Mind blowing was the pony of this fic. I'm glad you enjoyed and that I made your hypothesis come true.
1754974 LOL, doesn't mattter, read Clop. Don't have to understand, just enjoy
1755324 That GIF made my life so happy, you don't even know. Glad you were excited :pinkiehappy:
1755677 BobtheLurker, why your message no appear? I would love to deceive your input, if you can redoubt it that'd be fabulous :3
1756602 I've been tinkering with the idea but for now the fic is considered complete. I'm working on the reverse way though.
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1762651 Sorry, why skeptically of "dark" rating?
1764389 Maybe, but no guarantees whatsoever
1773348 Damnable those minor mistakes >: ( ahwell I'm glad you enjoyed the fix itself. I aim to please
1780171 I was really happy to say I can call first for the FlutterMac fetish fic catagory. It was more or less the point of doing it really (besides that I'm a sick bastard and love to help others get off o. This shit.)

1755692 *sigh* I knew somepony would catch that sooner or later. First off I would like to say that my face when you commented was lit up like a friggin Christmas tree:pinkiehappy:. Then I saw that you caught that and got a little sad:raritycry:, then saw the end and was happy again (considering you're definately on my tops list of Fanfic writers the moodswings were ok).

Now for the justifications.

The second paragraph States that he had been holding back, believe it or not some guys can hold back a full on boner for a while and in this case it's what Macintosh did. He was saving up for the finale. Hope this clarifies anything :twilightblush: and hope to hear from you again.

1754427 Hope you enjoyed Flut5ershy's Love. Its definately one of my favorite FlutterMac fic's ever:pinkiecrazy: and you can check my homepage. I got two more five, one a regular FlutterMac romance, the other is more soft core clop (more FlutterMac) thanks again for the read.

1785171 I'll see what you have in store :raritywink:.

1785136
I don't want you to think I have nothing but negative things to say. It's just that the "domination fantasy role play" isn't one of my favorite clopfic scenarios.

When it comes to the subject of domination and rape, I prefer it to be genuine when its within the confines of a story.

Rape fantasies are like shampoo. I won't settle for shampoo. I demand real poo! :rainbowderp::pinkiesick:

But I digress...

I enjoyed the story, even if it wasn't quite to my tastes.

And, like I mentioned earlier, the ending was friggin' hilarious. :pinkiehappy:

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I have no input, this freaked me the heck out! Not my type of story but good nonetheless. :eeyup:

Will it be getting darker from here? :trixieshiftright:

1785062 I normally don't like forced sex, but if the subject gives in to the pleasure its okay. :twilightsmile:

just read it agian...... LOVE IT.:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Well you know that Im not a Fluttermac person, but congrats its on my read later list dude. :twilightsmile:

OH GOD,I THINK I'M GONNA PUKE! :pinkiesick:
P.S. THIS IS THE WORST STORY IN THE WHOLE WORLD.:flutterrage:
:ajbemused::flutterrage::twilightangry2:
I THINK IF FLUTTERSHY READS THIS STORY YOU'LL MAKE HER ANGRY AND CRY.:flutterrage::fluttercry::fluttershbad::applejackunsure::fluttershysad:

1835477 I have warned you about this multiple times. I wash my hands clean of any disgust from you.

1867565 *rubs back of head...umm...ok...sorry?

1867587 The worst? :rainbowderp::raritycry::raritydespair::trixieshiftright::twilightangry2::twilightoops::fluttercry::ajbemused::pinkiesad2:
Did you enev read the whole thing? I mean it had a happy ending and it turned out Ok for her...I don't think she'd cry, it's Big Macintosh and :yay::heart::eeyup: just finish it if you havn't and then get back to me. Sorry you didn't like :fluttercry:

you are MY GOD!!! :heart:

1884176 LOL I take it that means you're into the whole "gratuitous sex" thing :twilightsheepish:

hell ill like anything as long as its hot and this story took my standards and triple-rainboomed them to canterlot :rainbowdetermined2:

I think I just found a new favorite! great job!!!:heart::pinkiehappy::twilightblush:

lol, nice ending. one of my fovourites!! :eeyup:

I'm not one for clop :P But that was really good! xD The ending was so cute :yay::eeyup:

That image looks like Futashy.

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