Your Little Adventure

by My Only Weakness

Re-Write

So some of you might not know that the re-write is up so here you go

Re-write

Comments

[Thebravenorse]

I'm the 100 like. Do i get a prize

[beastlybiscuit]

loved the story and my own dyslexia seemed to have canceled out any spelling mistakes in my head guess to wrongs do make a right in this case :), looking forward to finishing reading the sequel and the rewrite.

[SwordOfWieldThe3rd]

5442998 Actually, no. You on there's you used quotation marks instead of This thingy'

[Icy Creation]

I am not going to read the rewrite because it cannot be better than the original.