Your Little Adventure

by My Only Weakness

Redo?

So, I'm thinking about redoing this whole story. Because there is SO much more that could be put into it.

For example: Have Rainbow Dash fall for you over time instead of instantly

Having Cloudchaser play more of a part in the story

What do you think?

Also leave suggestions in the comments about adding to the story

And If you want to be the editor/proofreader for it, just let me know (winkey face)

Comments

[Spectro]

Idk if you think its good to redo it

[Lil E Vanguard fighter]

personally i think it is good the way it is

[FrenziedGlint]

Sounds like a good idea

[Appledash13]

I found the whole story to be fast paced, so yea, redo it.

[Phys]

Redo it? Sure, but I'd like to keep the old copy as well though. Why? I don't know

OR MAKE A SEQUEL TO THIS STORY INSTEAD!

[The Watcher 509]

Myeeah.

I'm a bit lazy after school, so maybe I'll find the time to proofread so yeah, redo it

[My Only Weakness]

3144253
Well I was going to make a redo of this story

But if you want to edit it be my guest

[GGKKDAJF]

Warning
Grammer and spelling mistakes are in this story, You want any explanation go to This chapter

Jesus Christ, the fact that even the warning about grammar and spelling mistakes has grammar and spelling mistakes is just horrifying.