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// Redo? 
// Story: Your Little Adventure 
// by My Only Weakness 
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So, I'm thinking about redoing this whole story. Because there is SO much more that could be put into it.

For example: Have Rainbow Dash fall for you over time instead of instantly
Having Cloudchaser play more of a part in the story

What do you think?

Also leave suggestions in the comments about adding to the story

And If you want to be the editor/proofreader for it, just let me know (winkey face)