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1913473 DAMN YOU SWINEHOUDT
why is there a sex tag?
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Because he stole my sweetrole.
~Edward
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what a punny joke... see what i did there?
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No lollygagging.
~Edward
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vocal... you're starting to russell my jimmies
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I used to be an adventurer like you, but the a took an arrow in the knee.
~Edward
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My cousins out fighting dragons, and I'm stuck with guard duty.
~Edward
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vocal...wat u r doin...vocal stahp
Suggestions and improvement ideas are welcome.
I don't know why a sex tag is there. But we can always drive the story. Prepare for impact!!!
Once again ideas, criticism, improvements and collabs are always welcome.
the story is good
the comments made lol
The grammar is a bit off, but I've read worse
Will improve, this section was rushed mostly by deadlines. Thank you
Thank you once again Doctor for your comment will do more on your likeness so that readings in the future will be a better experience.
So much vodka!
Okay since this is quite possible but the station had plenty of power after they left ands before they launched the rockets Richthofen switched bodies with Samantha and also those yellow eyes they saw were fluffy... the first hellhound and also killed Maxis and Samantha but fluffy was pregnant when she was turnes so she gave birth to living/dead puppies that are the hounds you fight also they did have spacesuits on unless you did those glitch where they can breath in space and all but 1 can have the hacker... plus Maxis was trapped IN the mainframe but hitched a ride on the rockets while Samantha was trying to live also they should have all the wonder weapons made which are the (in order of appearance since world at war) raygun, the wintershowl, the wonderwaffe-dg2, the thundergun, the scavenger, the vr-11, this gun that shrinks zombies but has a complicated name, the wave guns... srry I'm a zombie nerd and i tend to ramble but they would keep the best weapons...bplus richtofens insane because he kills lots of people before and during the zombie outbreak... there i go again
Thank you. I remember it all now that you have given me a reminder. its just that I have been away from it all for a long time because of the increasing amount of work and I had little time for the major parts that I left out. But thank you again, your comments help me improve and make it more accurate.
That Richthofen creeps me out just as much when the medic wants to try an experiment.
I'll never look at butter knives the same again.
I miss the zombie gang ;"( why bo2? Why?!
nope wait untill element 115 kicks into gear.
Eyup!
OH NOOOO!! I just remembered Dr. Maxis and Sammantha the ponies are doomed. MWAHAHAHAA!!!
2012133are you sure? When did the wintershowl first appear in the zombie game mode? Who killed Peter in shi-no-numa? What happens at the beginning of naucht-der-untoten? Where is naucht-der-untoten in WaW and bo2? What are the crews last names? Why can't they remember stuff? Why in black ops Nikolai's eyes start to turn white in ascension? Why does takio remember some? What is richtofens first name? Also no Google's!
Thank you hi, Like I said in earlier comments corrections will be made and criticism are welcome to those who think it is incorrect . So I will try harder in the details. Thank you for your comments they really help.
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alternate universe... and the thunder gun is actually a sonic cannon emmiting in terms, an EXTREMELY deep bass drop which messes with the air in essence creating a wall of sound, and im even more of a zombie nerd
2012133 are you sure? When did the wintershowl first appear in the zombie game mode? Who killed Peter in shi-no-numa? What happens at the beginning of naucht-der-untoten? Where is naucht-der-untoten in WaW and bo2? What are the crews last names? Why can't they remember stuff? Why in black ops Nikolai's eyes start to turn white in ascension? Why does takio remember some? What is richtofens first name?
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First, howl in the asylum, second, you win history wise, um nacht is WaW germany, Bo2 is near the lakes by Ao51, and ask me moreabout tech and easter eggs
2012332 naucht is in. 2 places in WaW... in the missions its the airfield in japan but zombies its in Germany bo2 its in the cornfield in America (WTF IS WRONG WITH THAT PLACE?!?!?!?!) Richthofen actually was expirementing on the other three when the zombies broke out so they lost there memory so tank forgot, Nikolai was part zombie but the vodka helped him out, takio lost some memory, correct on the asylum (verruct) its tank dempsyy(easy) Nikolai belinsky, Edward Richthofen(easy) bit i forgot Takios... at the beginning some soldiers are flying back home when the meteor hits somewhere nearby sending a shockwave that crashhed the plane and they escape into the building, Richthofen after the zombies broke out went to peterr in shi-no-numa and told him and Peter threatened to tell the government what has happened so he milled them and after the other three went home they were sent to help Peter with the zombies only to meet Richthofen (you will notice the characters except Richthofen slowly float to the ground when it starts... its late right now so ill think of some more questions and ask them tomorrow
deal and its takio masaki
I'm back!
2164097 RRRRRRRRRICHTOPHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEENNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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You spelled his name wrong mate.
2164627 Well, I didn't think an Australian could be a Nazi. Btw, shouldn't you been in your van throwing piss at people?
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That's only on work days and for fruit shop owners.
Samantha controlls the dead but tthe bolt of lightning of 115 could of killed it... im not going to bother any more about tbe moon easter egg... it is the Wonderwaffa DG-2... takeo doesnt speak in third person all that often (when takeo goes down) " I require some assiastance!"
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the original team got stuck on the moon. remember?
1936187 LOL This is too hilarious! Some minor mistakes but still awesome!
Y U NO CONTINUE?! I MUST SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT NAOW!
Great concept, poor execution. You should be careful when writing.
I'm back! And I assure better execution for your better enjoyment!
Samantha and Richtofen switched souls on the Moon Easter Egg. But in this Richtofen is his normal self. Aw what the hell. *like and favorite*
I'm actually writing a similar story but reversed you should check it out if you want that is
It's called New world, Utter hell.
They don't seem that surprised that their ENTIRE PLANET WAS DESTROYED!
Impossibruuuuuuuuu!? I can't believe you did that mien froind, this is coming from someone who is mainly German by the way