• Published 31st Dec 2012
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Clause - Yugimotou



When Sombra abuses ancient laws to kidnap Fluttershy, A winding adventure begins

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Believe it or not, a good amount of the things that happened in this story were actually because of interactive choices the anons of 4chan made by majority vote and suggestions from people such as myself.

It was a goooood night.

And a long one to.

The thread was very fun, however. Worth it.

Definitely, the way we did it might actually be the best way to write a fanfic. Normally a fic this long would take a couple weeks to finish from what I've seen. We got it done in one night. I'm guessing all the creative help of the 4chan night owls and eurofags really sped things up.

Sometime soon, We'll do the sequel.

The adventures of Gold and Braeburn at the gay bathhouse?

If you do I won't be able to help with fetishes. I know nothing about that area.

I got a great idea! How about we do a bit of story following Anon and his fall into insanity. We could call it "Through the Eyes of a Madman".

Holding true to the style this has been written in, I'm going to have Gold and Braeburn as ONE of the many subplots.

Anon, Flutershy/Sombra, and Shining/Cadence/Celeastia as some of the others.

Need to be careful not to juggle too many subplots, though.

Right, maybe you could write about what everyone was doing during the several months that Sombra and Flutters were in hiding.

That'd make an interesting interlude, But I don't think It would work as a clopfic.


"Oh applejack, I'm just soooooo worried about her! We have to find a way to help her!"

"Nawt for nuthin sugarcube, but why are ya dryhumpin' mah leg?"

It's fanfic, we can do whatever the hell we want with it. We could make it where heat season rolls through while Flutters is missing

Ahah, that is true.

But doing what we want with it, and keeping it good at the same time can be quite a challenge.

If that's what you're worried about then call it a crack fic to non-canonize it. If it's non-canon for the story then there are no limits. Usually the thing that breaks things is trying keep it canon.

I wasn't really trying to make it all THAT canonical.

Just sorta keeping it within the "Rules" of their world as much as possible.

But you're right, I think we should slowly edge further and further out, taking the stories further.

Ah yes, start serious and work our way into absurdity.

Howaboutthis;


"After being obliterated by the Crystal Heart, Only King Sombra's horn remained. Within his horn lay his consciousness, lost in a world of its own dreams. As he begins to desire for things to b different, stories and situations begin to play out in his dreams. Through living and experiencing these events, he learns. His consciousness reaches out and touches with the consciousnesses of those involved with his dreams - slowly changing their perspective on Sombra, as if he were reforming right before their very eyes."

And then his horn is mistaken for a dildo and now all his thoughs are occupied by the scent of sex :P

Oh my. That'd be one painful dildo.

How about his thoughts are laced with sex because he's a stallion. Ha!

Yeah, besides he spent the last few month of his actual life doing nothing but fucking fluttershy.

That's the interesting part.

It happened in his life, but not hers.


THAT will be an interesting thing to cover down the line. Fluttershy falling for Sombra all over again.

So I'm guessing this would be an alternate ending since sombra and flutters are still alive and together in the actual story.

Yeah, Or a Re-imagining of this story right here.

We could do this story again on 4chan and let the anons chose different paths this time around.

Also do you think you would be a good janitor for /mlp/?

Definitely a possibility for the future.

But for now I need a bit of a break, and when I start writing again, I'd like it to be on a sequel.

You're the hero /mlp/ needs, but not the hero /mlp/ deserves.

Anyway, I'll be waiting for you. It should be fun working on another one with you.

It will be.

We'll see how many days it takes for me to want to continue writing.

Just so you know I'll be going back to school soon so I can't pull all nighters.

I get back home usually around 3:30 so after then assuming I'm not doing other things I'll help you. Maybe we should set up a writing schedule.

Has I ever been on at 3:30 your time?

If so, Then we should be fine with you just getting on at 3:30 and starting up a thread when you're ready. You can handle times, I'll do the writing work.

Forgot to mention, I live in California so it PST for me.

So how far ahead or behind are you in relation to my timezone.

Anyway see you later.

Later days, Slow. See you when write time comes again

Random ending for a story I randomly chose. Perfect. And now I ship Sombra and Fluttershy. Sombrashy?
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Nitpick: The description makes it sound like Fluttershy is abusing politics to get herself sent to Sombra.

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Strangely enough, That was the picture used for the thread this story was written in.

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I'll be sure to change that.

Yugi I sent you a private message. Read it and please get back to me on that.

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This started with a completely unjustified hypothetical scenario in a 4chan thread. We just took the situation and rolled with it.

Abusing Equestrian politics, Sombra manages to get a hold of Fluttershy.

Hmmm you think they would have made a law saying evil beings cant get into politics or something... especally after Nightmare Moon and Discord and Chrystlis... Will read later.

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This is written in thread format, and was uploaded purely for the people in that thread who requested a permanent source.

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Well now, that's not a very nice thing to wish upon anyone, is it?

Mind Blown......:rainbowlaugh:

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