"Or tell her that you love her. That's cool too." Brb, lawling. And holy shit, that was awsome. One last thought that shattered mine: a whole YEAR passed?!?! Damn, 'I' don't have alot to ocupy 'myself' do 'I'?
Ok, I just want you to know. HOLY SHIT PISS SHIT!! That was an awesome chapter, I love this story, If I coud come up with an award that is better than my "Fuckin Brilliant" award, this story would easily earn it.
Well one of my thoughts to this was that there wasn't much of a buildup previously to see what might have lead Spitfire towards all of this (except the obvious hint of her not wanting to break the kiss earlier), so this chapter arrived a bit too early, as if you wrote it only to finally be true to the sex tag of this story.
I'm not saying it was a bad chapter in the least though! Things like these happen pretty much all the time (obviously in different situations), it's just that, as I said, this chapter happened a bit too fast, at least for my tastes.
But still, yay update, well written, and let's see what happens with that tape later
1919637 That's a little ironic. The chapter was actually the first thing I ever wrote of this story, but decided context was needed, prompting me to write all the chapters beforehand.
In any case, it was meant to be a sudden and fast turn, making the reader just as caught off guard at the main character.
Spitfire's side of the story will be explained in the next chapter, though.
But yay, really glad we'll get more of this story along with Spitfire's explanation of everything. Can't have enough of good stories, and this one is good Even though this scene was indeed too out of the blue
Well... that happened.
1917939 It sure did.
I think that tape is gonna be a BIG issue later....
I predict awkward and sex in th' next chapter.
Holy shit, that was crazy lol.
"Or tell her that you love her. That's cool too."
Brb, lawling.
And holy shit, that was awsome. One last thought that shattered mine: a whole YEAR passed?!?! Damn, 'I' don't have alot to ocupy 'myself' do 'I'?
Hawt.
Ok, I just want you to know. HOLY SHIT PISS SHIT!! That was an awesome chapter, I love this story, If I coud come up with an award that is better than my "Fuckin Brilliant" award, this story would easily earn it.
1917949 You better update really soon or I'm going to find out where you live and meet you at your door with a crowbar!!
I love the story
This gives new meaning to "let's have a quickie"...
Well one of my thoughts to this was that there wasn't much of a buildup previously to see what might have lead Spitfire towards all of this (except the obvious hint of her not wanting to break the kiss earlier), so this chapter arrived a bit too early, as if you wrote it only to finally be true to the sex tag of this story.
I'm not saying it was a bad chapter in the least though! Things like these happen pretty much all the time (obviously in different situations), it's just that, as I said, this chapter happened a bit too fast, at least for my tastes.
But still, yay update, well written, and let's see what happens with that tape later
I love it!
1919637 That's a little ironic. The chapter was actually the first thing I ever wrote of this story, but decided context was needed, prompting me to write all the chapters beforehand.
In any case, it was meant to be a sudden and fast turn, making the reader just as caught off guard at the main character.
Spitfire's side of the story will be explained in the next chapter, though.
Wat the fuck just happend to me?
1920947
Ah so that's why, okay, you win
But yay, really glad we'll get more of this story along with Spitfire's explanation of everything.
Can't have enough of good stories, and this one is good
Even though this scene was indeed too out of the blue
Stupid brain .... I hope she wasn't in heat or anything though if she was that would be an interesting situation
Nice chapter and very well done
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I love how brain was like.
"Ok dat bitch wants the vitamin D so peace I'm out."