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Warriorman10


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The Mane six have decided that they want to take the next step in their lives and look for their special somepony. but now matter how much they try they can't find anypony compatible enough in Equestria. so Twilight goes to Princess Celestia to talk to her about the situation. She suggests that they go to the human world to have a look for potential mates. the story is told by one of the men that gets chosen by one of the girls. This is not a Clop FIc!

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Ha Ha! Wish Fulfillment!

Standard self-insert fantasy where the author puts himself into the story and winds up fucking a pony. Or in this case a humanized pony. It's generic and has been done many times before.

On a technical note, you need to capitalize things like "I", the start of every new sentence and other proper nouns. And every time you have a new speaker you should start a new line.

Falcon 7. it may have been done before but this is just my version. and unfortunately, i don't microsoft word, so i have to use a notepad program and it doesn't correct it as i type it. when i'm typing i just keep going and type away. my apologies for the grammatical errors. the notepad doesn't have a auto correct either. so i don't notice unless i re-read it. which i usually do before i submit it. but sometimes i miss some things.

1876820 Download Google Chrome and then use Google Drive. It does have auto-correct features, though they aren't as good as MS Word.

1876820 That's no excuse, there are plenty of free spellcheck programs out there.

Also, PROTIP: to actually reply to someone's comment (so they receive a notification about it), hover your mouse on the top right of the comment you want to reply to. Click the speech bubble icon that appears, and you're good to go.

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Ha Ha! Excuses!

Your excuse is that you don't have an application that checks your spelling for you? Here's a clue for you and it's free, learn to spell. It's something that was taught in school that you capitalize every proper noun and at the start of every sentence. It's simple. In fact it's so simple that we learned it in the first grade.

This story is good. I request MOAR!

It's ok at the least. You need to capatilize your I's.

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