Her Happily Ever After
Her Happily Ever After
By: Dal
Original "Smile" Lyrics By: Amy Keating Rogers
Cover Art By: Aniritak
"… and just as all hope was lost, Twilight heard the call of friends echoing up from the chamber's stairwell. Her eyes went wide as realization struck her with the force of a falling star. The spark of friendship arced through the depths of her mind, unlocking part of the power that resided within."
The sound of snoring broke Princess Celestia out the trance she had found herself in. A unicorn filly lay napping beside her, the events of the day finally taking their toll on the rambunctious youngster. Celestia smiled, the scene evoking old memories of a certain lavender unicorn, and lifted the sleeping filly onto her back.
"You really are a special one, aren't you?" she mused while walking down the halls that lead to the academy's dormitory. The halls opened to a massive open-air atrium filled with hanging plants and beautiful tapestries; on the edge hung a balcony overlooking the castle courtyard below. Sounds of laughter greeted Celestia's ears from a group of ponies, piquing her curiosity.
Below her were six ponies: her sister, The Stars; and her friends from Ponyville. They were busy preparing the castle for the coming celebration tomorrow, which would mark the hundredth year since Luna's return. One hundred years. Even for one as old as she, that Summer Sun Celebration still felt like it happened yesterday. Pangs of guilt began to reemerge when her gaze fell upon the Elements of Harmony.
It was all her fault that they were here now. It was her fault for damning them to share the same curse that only herself, Twilight, and Luna should have to endure. Celestia had forgiven herself for the events that happened eleven hundred years prior, but not this; never this. With a sigh she continued on her way. Her thoughts drifted back to her five friends.
Over the last century they all had left Ponyville to join Twilight. Time and time again, they had proven themselves as Equestria’s greatest champions. Under their vigil, the country had entered a golden age not seen since the times shortly after the Sun and Moon first defeated Discord. Even the dreaded Everfree Forest had been cleansed and resettled with the help of the ten great leaders of ponykind. Her ponies were the happiest she had seen in many generations, yet she still felt awful over the price at which it had come. The sight of her student's room snapped Celestia out of her daydream. With a golden glow she tucked her precious cargo into bed and wished her sweet dreams.
Tomorrow was going to be a long day; two back-to-back holidays tend to take a lot out of anypony. She once again lost her self in thought about her failure that lead to the Elements current plight. No pony should have to see what she and her sisters have, and no pony should have to sacrifice as much as they. She had eons of practice to deal with the rigors immortality brought, but not them; not her five innocent friends from that sleepy town.
Walking through the grand halls that lead to the royal quarters, she could not help but notice how amazing the night sky looked. For a millennium she had not gazed at the vibrant canvas her sisters created; each time she had tried, the pain of loss plunged its icy blade deep into her heart. Thanks to those five the blade had been removed, only to be taken into their own beings.
"GAH!" Golden wisps of energy flew about the halls from her exclamation. "Why do I keep losing myself to these thoughts? I made peace with Luna a hundred years ago, I even forgave myself for what I did. No- Had to do. Yet I still can’t forgive myself for a choice they made themselves. Did they not know what it would mean to stay on this plane for so long?” She stormed into her bedroom and flopped into bed in a very un-princess like fashion.
"Maybe talking to them about this tomorrow is not the wisest idea, but I really need to have this burden lifted off my shoulders."
She closed her eyes, and sleep quickly took her into its not so merciful embrace.
Princess Luna was sitting in her bedroom, eyes ablaze in a soft blue glow, searching the kingdom for nightmares that may be plaguing her beloved subjects. A tremendous wave of force tried its best to break her concentration, only through considerable force of will was she was able to maintain her magical trance. Whatever had disturbed her was close, and it was powerful.
"Who in my realm could birth such a terror?" she asked as she quickly found herself being drawn to the castle.
"Celestia? Why in the Heavens would she have anything to fear?"
Luna dove into her sister's dream, and found nothing to her liking. Everything was grey and washed out, images distorted and misshapen. Luna stepped further into the dream, finding herself in a familiar yet haunting place; the ruins of the once majestic city of Everfree. In its sundered center lay a little white unicorn, tears streaming down her immaculate face.
"This is what I have done to them, Sister. " The filly spoke with a soft voice filled with regret. "In time this is all they will know: loss and sadness."
Luna placed a comforting wing around her sister's smaller form. "Oh really? This is what you think will happen to them? No, this will never happen again. Nothing like this will ever happen again." The ground shook as thunder echoed throughout the blasted landscape.
"Yes, sadness may rear its ugly head every once in a while, but their friendship will always be there to soften the blow. Do not weep for them, dear sister, for there is only joy in their hearts. And in mine."
Celestia looked into her sister's eyes, nothing but happiness danced within her sibling’s soul.
"I still need to talk to them, our curse is not an easy one to bear. You most of all should know this."
"You can be a real silly filly sometimes, Celestia. You know, you really should smile more often, depression does not suit you one bit." Luna stuck her tongue out after that bit of playful goading. "Fine then, speak to them in the morn. Do not be surprised by their answer though. Now get some sleep and leave these images where they belong; the past." The two sisters embraced each other in a tender hug as the foreboding dreamscape collapsed and faded away.
Luna awoke a short moment later, panting and coated in sweat.
That was no normal nightmare. Only once have I felt such an intense dream, the one that ended with my mind shattered like a pane of glass. I must find the others soon. I'm sure that Pinkie will have a glorious plan to brighten Celestia's mood.
Taking a deep breath, she trotted off in search of the her other sister and her friends.
A little while later the seven of them were gathered in the royal dining hall. Luna had explained what she had seen in Celestia's dreams, and of course the others had pledged their support to bring an end to her nightmare. Just as Luna had predicted; Pinkie's plan was glorious, even if it drew Applejack’s ire.
"Really now? The whole city? I knew you could do it back in Ponyville, but all of Canterlot? You are crazier than a woodpecker on Applebuck Day."
"You betcha! Oooh! this going to be so much fun! Just you wait, we'll have Little Miss Sunshine positively glowing by the end!" Pinkie chirped while bouncing around in excited anticipation.
"Well since Luna thinks it will work, and you have a very long track record of proving me wrong, I'm right behind ya Pinkie."
"Oh my! I'm worried that she is worried about me, and I don’t want her to feel that way, and she will worry that I'm worried and-" A soft squeak escaped Fluttershy's mouth.
Twilight made three quick scratches on a sheet of parchment. "Excellent! Luna and I will provide the music, Pinkie will do whatever she does, and the rest of us will do our best to make Celestia smile."
Rarity wore a flat look of disapproval on her face. "Darling, it’s three in the morning and you are still making checklists? One hundred years and some ponies never change."
"All I know is that it’s going to be totally awesome! I haven't had a chance to do this for so long. What? Don't give me that look, I like other things than flying you know." Rainbow rolled her eyes.
Luna nodded approvingly. "Alright then, we all should retire for the rest of the evening. Our goal is known, our plan is set, and we will not falter. Twilight and I will inform Shining and Cadance of our meeting in the morning. Goodnight everypony."
The seven tired ponies made their way to their beds, thoughts of tomorrow dancing in their heads as sleep claimed each one.
Luna and Twilight awoke earlier than normal the next morning. Both of them headed to the entrance of the grand city to intercept two very important guests. The howl of a steam locomotive's whistle signaled the approach of Princess Cadance and Prince Shining Armor. The train slowly made its way into the station, and a moment later the empress and her husband disembarked. They found two very unexpected ponies there to greet them.
"Princess Luna? Twilight? I did not expect to see you two waiting for us. Is there something wrong?"
Old memories of an ancient and vast library clouded Twilight's mind. It wasn't until she first returned to the empire, and the wonderful tomes therein, that Twilight learned there was a deeper meaning to her brother and sister-in-law's relationship. Celestia had been quite literal when she said, "If the empire is filled with hope and love, those things are reflected across all of Equestria."
"Not at the moment," Twilight winced as her book-filled fantasy faded. "We just have a little surprise in store for Celestia and we figured you would like to be apart of it."
With their greetings exchanged, they made their way back to the castle. Luna briefly informed them of what she had seen in Celestia's dream, and the plan the seven of them had devised.
"You can't be serious!" Cadance and Shining Armor yelled in unison.
Twilight smirked, "You two haven't been around Pinkie Pie enough. Now if you would excuse me. I have to wake up our last guest."
Twilight cautiously entered the massive cavern that was the heart of Canterlot Mountain. Torches lined the hewn stone walls, flickering in the intermittent gusts of humid air. It had been thirty years since she had been here. She knew he wouldn’t like this, but she knew he couldn’t live with himself if he wasn't there for her.
"Spike. Spike? SPIIIIIKE!" Twilight wasn't one to use the Royal Canterlot Voice, but she saw its appeal as it always managed to get things done.
Two white masses lit up in the depths of the hollow, dwarfing the violet alicorn.
Spike raised a gigantic claw to scratch his ears, and bellowed in a forceful voice, "Ow Twilight, you know how much that stings. Ugh. How long have I been out any ways, feels like only a couple hours."
A guilty smile grew on Twilight's face, "Uhh, only thirty years."
Pale green magic began to cascade over Spike, his body reducing in size till he resembled the striking bipedal form he had imagined so long ago. It was a spell he had learned from Twilight, a necessity after he figured out that the love and friendship he possessed was far more valuable than any treasure or hoard.
"So what's up? You know I needed a nap after our last little adventure."
"Something is troubling Celestia, and Luna says it is very serious. Like Nightmare serious. She also mentioned that Celestia's best friends would be the only way to help her."
"You can count on me!' Spike saluted.
"I knew my number one assistant wouldn't let me down."
Rays from the sun cut through the partly cloudy sky, reflecting off the golden domes of the city's many towers. Blue banners adorned with a moon had been hung beside the many yellow sun-marked ones from the day before. Today was a somber holiday, one of family and remembrance. Celestia both adored and hated it. With a huff she returned to the ornate wooden table her friends and family had gathered around.
A palpable aura of mirth filled the room, try as they may, it wasn’t very often all eleven of them would find themselves together. Pinkie was busy tending to the assorted baked goods she had made with some of the Cakes’ old recipes, Spike and the Elements were busy catching up on the three decades he had missed, and the Lords of Crystal had found themselves in deep conversation with Luna. There were two constants between them: laughter and smiling faces. Celestia tried her best to keep her finely honed shell from cracking, but the tears behind it were threatening to overwhelm her.
It’s now or never.
The soft yellow glow of Celestia’s magic enveloped a glass and spoon, ringing them to gather the others attention.
"I'm pleased to see everypony is having an amazing time. It has been so long since we have had a chance to be together and it is apt that we are today. One hundred years ago Luna was returned to us through the colossal efforts of my sister and the Elements. The years preceding that day were the darkest I have ever known. So dark, that even I came close to succumbing to the same despair that had claimed Luna." She glanced out to shining city sprawled out before her, "And I very well may have, if it wasn't for the wonderful ponies we have all sworn to guide and protect."
The back of her throat was dry with trepidation, yet she had to press on.
"I have a confession to make. Lately I find myself experiencing the same feelings from those old days. This time it’s not over the loss of my sisters, but over what I have done to you five."
She raised a wingtip to point at the table end that seated Twilight and her friends.
"You five should never face the long test of time my kin do. I have forgiven myself for Luna's fall, but never for what it meant for you. It was my fault that we chose to use the Elements in the first place, and its my fault that you five were given the spark of an immortal life. I know the immortal's curse. I would never wish it upon my greatest enemy, much less the friends that are so close to me."
"Please. Please forgive me for what you have lost."
Twilight and Luna perked up, this was the chance they were waiting for
Twilight cleared the frog out of her throat that Celestia's speech had conjured, "We have a confession to make as well. After last night we saw how much you were hurting inside, and we vowed that we would bring an end to it."
Applejack approached the now dejected looking Princess of the Sun.
"I will only tell you this once, and you best bet it’s the truth coming from me. Leaving Sweet Apple Acres to the next generation of Apples was the hardest thing I have ever had to do in my life. Family is everything to me, and it’s family that lead me here. You lead me here, you lead us all here."
One by one the group surrounded Celestia.
With a quick flap of her wings, Rainbow Dash made a loop in the air; landing in front of the beleaguered alicorn. "I could never leave Ponyville, or my friends hanging, and now I never will!"
"You give everything for this nation, and now I have the opportunity to do the same. Just with a little bit more... pizzazz as it were." Rarity’s eyes sparkled like the diamonds that adorned her flank.
"Your infinite kindness to every being has always been my inspiration. I can nurture and tend for creatures across all of Equestria, now and forever. Oh just it makes me so happy!" Fluttershy said, cradling an imaginary creature in her forelegs.
A stern yet caring look formed on Pinkie’s face. "Losing friends is never easy, and when you are friends with everypony; it gets really tough sometimes. But then I look within my heart and know that deep down they are still there! Oh Celly! Being able to bring a smile to ponies' lives has always been my dream. Now it’s a dream that will never end!"
Celestia collapsed on the floor, a shocked expression hid behind a mask she was desperately trying to maintain.
Luna knelt down to meet her sister's face, "I told you not to be surprised by their answers."
Dragon and pony alike collapsed on top of the solar reagent in a massive hug. Her regal facade was obliterated, tears began to stain Celestia's once unblemished face.
"You fools," she sobbed. "You know not of the pain I have suffered."
"We do sister," Twilight and Luna whispered, "And that’s why we had a little something extra planned to make you smile."
Magenta magic swirled around them, and the group vanished.
A loud pop heralded the arrival of the entirety of Equestria's royalty, ponies everywhere dropped what they were doing and proceeded to gawk at the very unexpected sight. They had ended up outside the main gate into the castle and on the road that lead to the city's square. Several royal guards began to panic as they fled back to the castle to fetch their superiors and reinforcements for the "unscheduled" outing. Pinkie Pie then produced a megaphone seemingly out of nowhere.
"Alright every pony! Princess Celestia has been feeling rather down the last couple days and we will need your help to cheer her up. Just follow our lead!"
Twilight turned to her friends, "We have known each other for a hundred years now. Has anypony figured out how she does these things?" Varying degrees of no were her only answers.
"Alright hit it you two!"
That was Twilight and Luna's cue to start the music that would accompany them along this little parade. Waves of magic flowed from their horns eliciting an all too familiar tune to play throughout the city.
Celestia glared at her sisters. "You wouldn't dare."
"Yes we would, and yes we have. Now enjoy yourself!" And with that, Pinkie grabbed Celestia's hoof and sprang into action. She landed next to a couple who had remained awestruck by the sudden appearance of the most powerful ponies in the land.
My name is Pinkie Pie (Hello!)
And I am here to say (How ya doin'?)
I'm gonna make you smile, and I will brighten up your day-aaay!
It doesn't matter now
If you are sad or blue
'Cause cheering up my friends is just what Pinkie's here to do
'Cause I love to make you smile, smile, smile
Yes I do
It fills my heart with sunshine all the while
Yes it does
'Cause all I really need's a smile, smile, smile
From these happy friends of mine
Pinkie Pie returned to the now dancing group of her friends, and with Celestia in tow they began marching to the main square. Ponies from all around had lined up in the streets to watch the spectacle unfold. Celestia couldn’t believe what was happening as a singing pink blur circled around her.
I like to see you grin
I would love to see you beam
The corners of your mouth turned up
Is always Pinkie's dream
Pinkie's song was beyond infectious; ponies in the street started moving to the magical rhythm, grins plastered on their faces.
But if you're kind of worried
And your face has made a frown
I'll work real hard and do my best
To turn that sad frown upside down
More and more ponies of every race and standing began pouring into the streets, smitten by Pinkie's singing. Twilight and the others started to belt out lyrics at the top of their lungs, and from the bottom of their hearts.
'Cause we love to make you grin, grin, grin
Yes we do
Bust it out from ear to ear, let it begin
Just give us a joyful grin, grin, grin
And you fill us with good cheer
Darkness swept across the city while the music changed to a more somber melody. Only a patch of faint moonlight remained, illuminating the Princess of the Night who lay in middle. The mass of dancing ponies halted when the artist of artists' voice filled the air.
It's true, some days are dark and lonely
And maybe you feel sad
But friends will be there to show you that it isn't that bad
Rainbows rushed along the gloomy sky, terminating in a brilliant flash at Luna’s hooves. Gone were the shadows that had encircled her, replaced with eight ponies and dragon. Luna found a gentle purple hoof helping her up off the ground, embracing her in a heartfelt hug. Pinkie’s song returned to its whimsical self as the group formed a line and marched on.
There's one thing that makes us happy
And makes these long lives worthwhile
And that's when we talk to our friends and get them to smile
Celestia was struggling to maintain what little was left of her poise, too focused to notice the smile building at the edge of her mouth, or that her pink guide was leading her the middle of the marching line.
I really am so happy
Your smile fills me with glee
I give a smile, I get a smile
And that's so special to me
Most of Canterlot was watching Pinkie's procession now, and every single pony had a grin on their face when they passed by. They had arrived at the main street in the town's square, ponies lining it from edge to edge. Spike had maneuvered himself to the center of the pack during this time, and while his friends started a new verse, he let go of his spell. With a poof, the entire group was now riding on his scaly back. From their new vantage point they began waving their forelegs in the air, directing every bit of goodwill from the gathering crowd to Celestia.
'Cause we love to see you beam, beam, beam
Yes we do
Tell us, what more can we say to make you see
That we do
It makes us happy when you beam, beam, beam
Yes, it always makes our day!
Come on everypony smile, smile, smile
Fill her heart up with sunshine, sunshine
All she really need's a smile, smile, smile
From these happy friends of mine!
The entire city let loose after that, a single mass of multi-hued bodies bursting with happiness and song. Applejack was impressed, Pinkie really did manage to get the whole city into her act. The mob quickly formed a circle around the dragon and his passengers, singing with them as they swayed back and forth under the waves of positive feelings. Only one pony was silent, the dumbfounded white alicorn at the center of everypony’s attention.
Come on everypony smile, smile, smile
Fill her heart up with sunshine, sunshine
All she really need's a smile, smile, smile
From these happy friends of mine!
Pinkie could feel joy-laden air pouring into Celestia, but a great deal was still left unfocused. Her voice rose above the singing masses.
Yes a perfect gift for me
Is a smile as wide as a mile
To make me happy as can be
A blue aura began coalescing around the energetic pink pony.
Smile, smile, smile, smile, smile!
The aura intensified after every word. Pinkie's eyes were locked with Celestia's, as she unleashed the Element of Laughter's power.
Come on and smile
COME ON AND SMILE!
Celestia found herself speechless, euphoria streaking through every nerve of her body. There was only one thing she could do under the pink mare's onslaught.
She smiled.
Her coat began to take on iridescent shimmer, growing brighter and brighter with each passing moment.
"I told you she would be glowing at the end of this!" Pinkie yelled to her friends.
Visions of her friends filled her mind. They had been telling the truth. Yes they had all felt great sadness, but the compassion they felt for each other always won out. Celestia realized how foolish she had been. She hadn't doomed them to eternity of loss and suffering. No, it was quite the opposite.
"Quiet everypony!" Celestia's royal voice rang out, silencing the crowd. "Thank you Pinkie. Thank you my loving sisters. Thank you my dearest friends. And thank you my loyal subjects. One hundred years ago I sent my then student, Twilight Sparkle, to learn the magic of friendship in Ponyville, and it was there she met these five ponies you see before you now. I thought I had doomed them to the same life of misery I had endured during Luna's banishment. I was wrong. Today I am the student."
A halo of golden light framed her against the now clear blue sky.
"Dear Luna, Twilight Sparkle, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Spike, Cadance, Shining Armor. Today I learned that the friendship we share is more powerful than even I had ever imagined possible. So strong, that what I thought was a curse to bear, was in fact my greatest blessing. I wouldn't trade the time we have together for anything in all of creation. Your thankful sister, Celestia."
The now radiant alicorn found herself in the arms of her friends, tears not of her own creation now staining her glimmering white fur. How she hadn't seen this before was a mystery to herself. The last century was the best times of her extensive life, her ponies were happy because their leaders were happy. She had a family now, and one that would guarantee that no ill would befall their kingdom ever again.
Celestia once thought she had her happily ever after, taken away by the same madness that had threatened to consume her only scant moments ago. Fate had chosen today, the hundredth anniversary of the Sun, Moon, and Stars' reunion, to let her know she had truly found it.
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That Pink text... MY EYES.
Was sweet to see a continuation of that story though, it really was sweet, yet so open ended. Good job.
There is a cost to immortality, but when you no longer have to bear the burden alone the cost is lessened. Celestia is lucky to have two loving sisters, so many wonderful friends, and entire nation that wish to see her smile.
Thank you for sharing this.
"Celesta was struggling to maintian"
Do I really need to point out the typo in this?
1886954
Good catch, I may have done some last minute editing on my phone
great sequel
just one question: are the other Elements alicorns too now or are they just immortal ponies now?
1886932 What you said.
This story was really, really good. I don't really know what to say, it was just amazing.
1887078
This what?
Just immortal ponies. Only those fated to rule get the horn and wings, can you imagine an alicorn Pinkie Pie?I'm leaving this subject up to the reader now.
1887089 I meant it to be like: "Yeah! What you said." I'll just change it to actually say that.
1887092
Yes I can and at least in the case of Denim Blue's "Duties" it is not as scary as you may think.
1887186
Thank for clearing that up, and thank you
...I...Wow, I can barely se what I'm tuping.
It has been a while since a song lasr ùmade me cry in joy...Good job, Sir...Good job.
1887092
Oh god. Equestria. Save it!
But, in all seriousness, this was a really sweet story. Loved the use of the smile song. By an odd coincidence, I actually had it playing on repeat before I started reading this. It was awesome. Great story. you should write more stories in this timeline!
This is Australia...
1887192 Actually Rarity's still refusing to come to terms with the idea. I'm not looking forward to her breakdown. Of the Mane 6, I think only Applejack and maybe Dash have deal with it, and it wasn't good to watch.
1887942
Great story. you should write more stories in this timeline!
I intend to, I have ideas for at least two more stories in this setting. I'm just waiting for the season three finale to see if I need to start tagging my stuff alternate universe.
I loved how this finished, especially after reading Sun, Moon, and Stars. It was the perfect close.
Celestia was "doomed" to happiness as soon as Pinkie Pie got involved.
Honestly, why does anyone bother to fight the irresistible force? "Futility, Mr Verdeschi." Oh, no, not another reference!
1887092
Well, mine has Pinkie in Celestia's body, does that count?
Anyway, still a nice story. We need more uplifting stories with Celestia and Immortality.
The opening credits gave away how it'd end. It didn't matter. Tears of joy anyway.
Awesome story!
DA FEELS!
Love love love there's just so daw I must see a 32 chapter story continuation. Do it do it now
Finally something who does a bit away with the immortality is such a horrible curse thing. I mean yes an immortal in a world of mortals has to face sadness, but it being such a horrible curse? Esspecially if your not alone? I mean is there anything that would stop someone from commiting suicide if they really meant that?
With an immortal pinkie pie sadness should prove impossible in the long run^^
T-Up
All the more reason why Pinkie Pie, to me at least, is the best pony.
1887092>>1887192 I sort of remember another possible one maybe. I think it was called So you've grown Wings or something like that.
good story mate
BTW, GUESS WHO'S STORY GOT FEATURED!?
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dammit.. Now I want to see the events of this universe of Twilight's awakening as an Alicorn and her friends finding out about their immortality.
1890193
Wow, thanks everyone! I'm glad so many people are enjoying it
I loved both this story and its prequel. They're intelligently written, have a very interesting story, especially this one, and even though not everything is explained, it just feels natural that way.
I do have one small complaint with this story, and that is that Celestia acts like a bit of a whiny dick.
dal turn in your gangtag you're off the force
1890583
No
1890491
I know what you are getting at, but I thought she was handling a century full of guilt rather well.
oh great lord.. this is such an awesome story.. hope there will be another story to this awesome piece of work
I absolutely love both the stories. And I am going to embrace this story line as my head canon as long as season 3 and 4 don't contradict them.
I really hope you write another sequel or write a story about various adventures the have during this 100 year period
They're gonna kinda wish there was an immortal stallion or two out there after a while...
" Twilight and I will inform Shining and Cadance of our meeting in the moring. Goodnight everypony."
Wait a moment, if it all happen 100 years after Luna was cured, it mean:
1) Mane 6 parents are dead and probably some of they friends are dead too or worse case scenario they are old like Granny Smith, should not it turn down mane 6 spirit a lot ?
2) I can understand mane 6 to live long because of element blessing, but Shining Armor never received one, and he was older then Twilight, should not he be dead and Cadence be in depression because of it ?
As much as I can understand that mane 6 managed to deal with they sadness ( option 1 ), I do not get it why Shinning Armor is alive, I take it as plot hole.
Masterfully done, it felt like watching one of the episodes and i for good or bad your story forced itself into my headcannon.
If you are thinking of writing some more, it would be great to read about their royal everyday shenanigans. Those stories made me think of all the fun stuff that could be happening.
Celly/Luna sisterly bonding? If you are not pranking your siblings, how can they possibly know you care?
How is Flutters doing and how did her care for animals evolve over the years?
Rarity and her fabulous fashion fantasy?
Rainbow doing other things then flying?
How on earth did AJ avoid going loco in her coco without apple bucking?
Twilight... well... she's probably still nerding out after all those years and loving it to boot.
And pinkie.... i'm kinda afraid to ask.
1891625
Shining Armor and everyone in the Crystal Empire crystallized thanks to extreme magical radiation from certain unshielded, heart shaped artifact. Who needs elements of harmony for loooong long life when you are turned into a living mineral.
And yeah, Shining IS a plot hole. What kind of BBBFF forgets about delivering wedding invitation to his little sis.
1891705
Wow, but with that theory, it mean all crystal ponies would leave for hundreds of years ( without need of curse what seal them or something ), so it mean that there is no place for fillies in Crystal Empire or overpopulation will destroy the empire form the inside.
I still think that Shinning Armor should be dead, it is fate that Cadence choiced herself when she married Shinning and filly should be all Cadence would have left from it.
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Naw, it turns out that being a living fossil is the best possible contraceptive. Problem solved.
And even if that's not the case, having an immortal princess of love as the main squeeze had to come with some benefits (other the the kinky ones.
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I agree with Verdigris. His comment is mine.
I love it. It shows the depths of Celly's personality and insecurities, it tells what it needs to without saying much, and it's very nicely done. Good work.
1891625 Because the story was nicer and more touching this way. That or you could go read..uh, forget the exact name, but it Field Studies of the Alicorn Reproductive system or something like that.
It has its own....interesting way of showing how that works.
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The point is that this story here was meant to show that Celestia is worried how immortality would hurt mane 6 ( watching loved ones dying, children's overgrowing they parents, and how mane 6 managed to deal with it ).
However this story end up to be very sugar like, there is no good reason why Shinning Armor would still be alive, Cadence should have to deal with it as immortal who married mortal if I can say it that way, and ponies from Crystal Empire survived 1000 years only because they were sealed, you can not have entire race long living without decreasing they numbers, for example dragons, they live very long but they have drawback like not enough food and space for to many of them, I just do not buy the reason why Shinning Armor is still alive.
1892122 No, I get it, I really do. Like you said, no whole species should survive that long.
Dragons, despite longevity, are shown to be highly competitive, and I'm sure that while younger the games are tail wrestling and king of the horde, become much more dangerous and lethal with age. That would obviously keep numbers down.
My thoughts are probably leaning towards the fact that even with Shining Armour still around, Twilight and Co. will lose their families after a time, their current friends, and everypony the know in their original set life spans before obtaining immortality will die, but that wasn't the point of the story.
The story was that even though you do have to suffer through said things, you will, in the end, have eachother.
Shining does not have a good reason for being around, but things happen and stories can be convoluted sometimes. Hell, I hate the start up to my story "From Ashes" because I have a nod to the slipspace device from Halo:Reach with Jorge because I couldn't think of another non-magical way for somepony to travel through time. I personally disliked using said plot device but didn't want to deal with the fancy crap that went along with insinuating that the Main Character had the magical ability to 'just time travel' when having a problem.(mostly due to my hate for any OC alicorn and their tendency to be far too overpowered)
Similar to my issue, the author probably didn't wish to try to figure out how to deal with a sad depressed alicorn at the same time as another sad depressed alicorn, making the easiest solution to leave Shining Armour alive and well for the story so that the focus could be on Celestia and how she feels, as she is the main character.
Therefore my deduction is that it was simply easier to write in Shining Alicorn rather than try to find a way to deal with him dead, just as I settled with a otherwordly device rather than magical prowess.
Hope this clears things up a bit, that or shines some light into how it might have happened in the authors mind.
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Shinning and Cadence were only mentioned once and they not played important role in the story, there was no need for author to mention them or put them in this chapter, but I agree with the rest you said.
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I intentionally left his immortality vague, wouldn't want to spill the beans on a story I plan to write down the road. I will give you a hint: if the others are embodiments of certain virtues, think of who the two baddies SA and Cadance have vanquished. After that story, not having them here would seem like a plot hole. So I figured I would leave it to the reader for now. Sorry if it caused any confusion, I may go and rewrite that part sometime later.
1890850 I know Celestia is more justified in her whiny dickness than, say, Frodo Baggins, but it just always frustrates me when a character whines about the same thing for the entire story. That is a nitpick obviously, and I didn't dislike Celestia's character in the story, but that was just something that annoyed me a little bit.
I know its only five but how can anyone really down vote this story?
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I'm surprised It has only received five!
this story is soo full of sunshine rainbows and happiness that i'm pretty sure it glows
1891766 Wait - what? Somepony AGREES with me?