Grayson Davidson, a man with a troubled past, is "accidently" thrown from his war-torn home into Equestria. He isn't worried about survival, his special ops training, along with his armament, can take care of that. He was in pursuit of the mercenary leader who killed his father, a cold-blooded man by the name of Nikola Brevinski. After adjusting to his new life and finally thinking he can forget his past, the old enemies of his new friends show up. Only now they have the support of someone new.
Cover picture found online. I will accept any (appropriate) fan art to replace cover picture.
This is my first attempt at a fan fiction, any and all feedback is accepted.
Rated teen just to be safe, additional characters and tags will be added when they apply.
well ill give this a fav BUT YOU BETTER KEEP THE CHAPTERS COMING that is if.. if you dont mind that is
keep up the good work! I'm liking this so far. And if you need a pre-reader, just give me a pm!
I LIKE it! Good work!
Need moar!!!
Please make more, I love where this is going
The number of dislikes is increasing...
I can only help but wonder. Why?
If it's due to lack of action, that will be fixed in a few chapters, trust me.
is so sad...... (right in the feels)
1900721 Did the music help/ add more sads?
the music adds more feeling by is a hassle to continuously replay from the middle of the reading I do quite like the story but (there is always a big
. my mustache 
and rainbow kiss 
go to you as I wait with baited breath for the next installment.
buttbut ) there is something wrong with the way Grayson just accepts that he is stuck on another planet without a way home. I also think that it would be best if you put some kind of elaboration on greysons' personal thought on all that is happening, because most of his thoughts seem to be just a personal commentary or an examination of his current surroundings and I would say something about us not knowing anything about his background, but you already covered that (very good job by the way I found his past very appealing and it leaves enough wiggle room for you to work with it) there are some, although few, grammatical errors, but I'll let the other readers find thosereply to my thoughts as necessary I like having something to write to.
h*somepony (I despise auto correct )
1901384 As far as the music is concerned, there will most likely be more when I see appropriate(to avoid scrolling to restart the music, you can right click the video and open it in a new tab so you don't have to find your place again and again). For him being accepting of his new and current situation, I know I haven't mentioned it completely and probably will in a later chapter, Equestria was a huge upgrade from his old situation and lifestyle. He does miss his step-brother and Bruce(again, not thoroughly covered but I'll get to it, you haven't seen the last of Alex and Bruce,OOPS, spoilers!), but he sees this as an opportunity to start over with a new life.
ok that is great
(still despise auto correct)
Cant wait for next chapter!
Also add the romance tag, i would love to see that.
Yeah, adding the romance tag would work nicely.
I think you should make it so he says fuck it and stays a human, or if the ponys can't turn him into a pony. Make like, an equestrian super human soldier.
1982644 I'm making it so that he can be both pony AND human. He can switch back and forth between.
Oh, I must skipped that paragraph because I looked away or something.
alicorn alicorn ALICORN ......... a hhhhhhhhhh
2006047 Don't worry. It's not happening.
Let's play a game! I call it:
"Find the Call of Duty 4 reference."
remembers story* reads chapter* sees he has become ponyfyed* great another story not to read.....because when i see storys marked as *human* i expect *human* throughout the story as intended
2046938He'll be switching back and forth. He is going to be mostly human over the course of the story, very few parts will he be a pony. That help?
1895146 ppl are dicks? Enjoy this i did
ya i can see a possible romance developing just don't rush it
Big bang theory reference !! *knock knock knock*, "TWILIGHT?",*knock knock knock*, "TWILIGHT?," *knock knock knock*, "TWILIGHT?"
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Here you go, find the two quotes from the Call of Duty 4 campaign and receive a different moustache.
Boring story with all the overused clichés of the HiE genre. But well-written and good grammar.
Gotta down vote this story is hella cliché and when I read a his I expect them to stay HUMAN!!!!
Woot! This story's been Updated
... Reads... Oooh, nice EMP twist...
Have a mustache
, or two
, or four 
... or 1, 2, 3- yeah 7 is fine(7/7)
I say Add the Romance tag . Twilight is interested in you
