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Twilight, Rarity, Applejack, Fluttershy, Pinkie and Rainbow are invited to star in their own TV show, playing as no pony but themselves. They are warned not to read any of the fan fiction, or look at any of the fan art, but the temptation is too great...

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You had to have them read Cupcakes, didn't you......You have totally ruined Pinkie's and Dash's dreams for the rest of their lives, scared Fluttershy senseless, and saddened Twilight, Applejack, and Rarity. That I dislike. However, besides that I thought the story was quite funny, so overall, not bad. If you hadn't thrown in Cupcakes I would have been perfectly fine with it, sorry.

Pretty good, though it seems a might bit rushed.
I would've been happy if they'd found one good, actually made by a fan not troll fiction, like My Little Dashie. :twilightsmile:

You know..I expected Rainbow to Jump Pinkie after they saw Cupcakes.

#4 · Jan 17th, 2012 · · ·

welcome to the bony world gals

Thank Celestia they didn't find Rule 34.

Oh Celestia why,,,, :trollestia: Cupcakes. Not even once.

Other than that i loled a lot :rainbowlaugh: Very good job.

Oh goodness, it starts with talking about the sun. :ajbemused:

This is amazing. 5/5. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

JN

The Big Buck Theory? Furfriends?

Tracked, watched, favorited and stored in my soul forever.

I don't know. I personally think they dodged a bullet. Think about all the SpikexTwilight and Big MacxApplejack fics there are, let alone fairly graphic clop fics with the CMC.

I think that would've been worse

Just think, what if they read Princess Molestia?

Dear god... :twilightoops:

“Well I don’t know about all of you, but I don’t find our fans very funny!”

... You were laughing for, like, TEN MINUTES STRAIGHT when you found out you'd been GREY.

Lucky. They didn't find Tumblr, or R34, or Sweet Apple Massacre... You know, for a fandom based around ponies, we sure are a twisted lot.

I have to hate this for Cupcakes, but love it for hilariousness.

136159
Agreed, the amount of horrifying things that you can find on the internet make it all the more of a reason for me
to be ashamed for being born a human.

Its no wonder really why we haven't found any aliens yet.
If said aliens looked at us and our planet from afar,
They would most likely think; "Fuck that! I'm not going THERE!"

i like how you threw in a 'yo dawg' before they even got on the internet. unless that was unintentional.. in which case, awesome stuff :pinkiecrazy: i also enjoyed how rarity is a marshmallow 'because shes white.' hahaha its reverse racism!

interestingly enough, i dont think cupcakes is even on this site. (im assuming its this site, the tags all match). rainbow factory and cheerilee's garden are, tho. :pinkiecrazy:

great story, dude. you should take a few stars. they're getting too rowdy for me.

...lol :rainbowlaugh:

id love to see rainbow dashes reaction to reainbow factory :rainbowlaugh: that was a good story you sir obtained a shiny new fav

135885 Christ! Think about their reactions if they saw THAT!

Oh my, awesome story! I'd like to ask though, was the comedy "Through the Eyes of Another Pony"? I recognized that nyan cat part in the sky and the marshmallow revelation round the campfire.

This story Exploits all those fics out there that we read most of the time.
the satire in this was excellent
Hope to see more from you in the future
(Just some criticism The beginning ran a bit to long):fluttercry::twilightblush:

136572

I believe so. That was exactly what I thought

I haven't even started reading yet... And I know for a fact this is going to be EPIC.

Just the idea to write such a fiction is... It just makes me feel warm inside. :rainbowkiss:

135815 My Little Dashie... BEST piece of literature I've ever read... And I read a LOT. :D

Damn, well at least they haven't read anything i've made yet, seriously the amount of halo content i produced on FF.net would scare the living heck out of people. And also the MLP story i've been planning is based around anthro-ponies, which raises the question, how come there aren't that many anthro/humanized stories? (Well not that many.):rainbowhuh:

136159 I'll have to agree with you there bro. I honestly can't picture the sweet things doing anything well....not PG. At the end of the day its still a kids show thankfully we have fics like My Little Dashie and Pirates for a Day to bring back the heart felt innocence and purity that we have come to know and appreciate and reminds us that we all are still kids inside. Needless to say it brings out the light in us. If not for this show I never would have known that writing was fun.

Am I the only one here who feels bad for Film Reel?

I kinda feel bad that that was just a one-shot; it would've been funny to see chapters on the girls finding different fan-fictions and seeing their reactions and whatnot. But, overall, it was pretty funny; I loved the parts with romance mentioned (that whole section was hilarious), but...wow, "Cupcakes". Can't say I blame you; that's where MOST people go when referencing something. It sucks, but...hey, it's popular. I'm glad even the ponies know that that would never happen; like Grease Brony said above, it's still a kids' show and they would never, EVER do things like that! Pinkie's insane, but not THAT kind of insane; she's the good kind of insane that we all know and love. I thought all the characters were perfectly in-character, and while a few of the parts were rushed (the days passing, the parts on finding and explaining the fan-fictions, etc), but overall it was a nice little story. :twilightsmile:

As guilty as I am about it, I agree with the message of this story. A good chunk of this fandom is... questionable, in true loyalty to the wonderful show and its universe.

This is just hysterical. Love it. Hilarious concept with flawless execution. :yay::yay::yay:

when it came to the part where it said "most popular, cupcakes" I couldn't stop laughing for about five minuets imagining the horror that awaited them!
Great job sir, you've made something great here!
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136932 I also feel that this could have gone several chapters with more details, maybe add how the show was filmed, mane 6 dealing with some stalker ponies (I can see somepony following Dash..).

I really wonder, what would have happened if they read 'tragic' fanfics? Like ones where mane six or other ponies die? That sure would be depressing to read.

Whilst this is a good story, I can't help but think it could have been better if you had introduced them to some of the good fics...like twos company threes a crowd or after that fateful night

Good thing that they didn't read Fallout Equestria.

At least they reacted towards cupcakes the way I thought they should have... They are lucky they didn't see the flash version by ocarinaplaya on youtube.

...... Oh sweet jesus, what did i just read....... Good story, don't get me wrong, very funny....... Until cupcakes........ Oh dear god, cupcakes..........

What I am wondering though is why they didn't look at any crossover stuff? Like with One Piece or Transformers. Now that would have been epic. It is also a shame that they threw out their computers and television sets. They don't know what they are missing.:fluttershysad:

Oh, not this agai--

*looks at fic image*

Rainbow Dash is smiling? This I gotta see.

137130 Aaaand...dreams crushed. Goddammit, there are a hell of a lot more popular fics than Cupcakes! Hell, you can't even LINK to that fanfiction anymore in most areas!

Ha ha ha, very funny, very clever. Some good observations here and I'm still laughing so that's definitely a good sign!

135911 :rainbowlaugh: < literally....

People need to be more original with their opening scenes. :trixieshiftleft:


Cheers
~iraqlobstah

136999 Yeah, agreed. There could've been so many places to go with this. Fans actually acting out fan-fictions on the ponies, crazy stalkers, the ponies getting "influenced" by the fan-fictions (that aren't tragedies), the filming of the show...there just left a LOT to be desired. I mean, yes, it was good...but it could've been SO much more.

Well, think about it. What if there was another world out there besides ours (which is very possible). What would YOU do if you found out that those "other" people were writing stories about YOU that involved you dying and stuff? I would think it would be a very creepy and horrifying experience, huh?

dose this count as braking the 4th wall?:rainbowhuh:

Times Gabriel's reading difficulty happened: 0 *Dash Awesome.avi!*

I liked this for the satire. I suppose this is also why I...well I don't read a lot of Fan Fiction :twilightblush:

Then again, it does make me wonder what the MLP Cast thinks of us. One can only imagine it's probably not good :facehoof:

Reading this I was reminded of the Terry Pratchett novel Moving Pictures, in which the world of movies is harder and more sinister than actors believe it is.
I had been wondering what the pony's reactions to Cupcakes would be, and I think they were represented rather well. I especially liked the sitcom references. "How I Met Your Mare" was very funny!

0.o: man, i read a fanfic a day and this made me feel kinda.....dirty.
ToT: i guess we can sto-
7_7: no no no belay that thought
0.o: but
7_7: no buts, we got about five of these stored up i'll end you if i can't even upload one.
-_-: ok just shut up and upload one already.
7_7: i-i can't
^v^: but why? i read some and there ok
ToT: yeah the new one is pretty good
7_7: I HAVE DYSLEXIA OK!!!
ToT 0.o -_- ^v^: really?
7_7: yes, but writing is my greatest passion
^v^: well there are proof reader
7_7: yeah guess (breaking the 4th wall) hey anyone want to help me-
ToT: us
7_7: *sigh* help us out?

good stuff, and no twilight, we love you, but love comes in all forms. Sometimes love involves a tub of jello filled with a pair of twin contortionists, two midgets, and a specially trained donkey. :trixieshiftright: :twilightoops: :facehoof:

136999

I actually LIKE how the author said "Screw this, I'm not writing that. Wham bam now you're famous live with it."

Oh wow, look at those views. I was not expecting this at all :pinkiegasp:

I finished writing this at about 3 in the morning, so that might seem why the ending is rushed (it is). I originally planned for them to look at fan art and discover Rule 34, but... eh.

Also, about the Cupcakes reference- I know a lot of people are tired of it showing up everywhere, and I can agree with that to some extent. But when it came to choosing a fic, the other dark ones were Rainbow Factory, Sweet Apple Masacre etc. which I couldn't really use (in their TV show, Big Mac and the CMCs don't exist). Cupcakes is infamous; most people have read it, and if not, they've heard about it... I really do think it's the most popular fic. Along with My Little Dashie, which again, wouldn't fit in with the context of this story.

136572 I've actually never read 'Through the Eyes of Another Pony', so I guess I unintentionally referenced it? :rainbowlaugh: I have got to read that now.

Thanks for all the comments and ratings, I am completely shocked this gained so much attention :derpyderp2:

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