Every time Twilight Sparkle tries to read something, headaches come. Cringes worthy of speaking twist her mind. They are an absolute torture for her because she can't do anything against them. She can't study, she can't read and worst of all, she can't prepare for anything princess Celestia will be throwing at her.
Spike is having more than enough of it all and makes the wise decision to call in help from the outside. But the problem is, that there are only rumors of something called 'a shattering of minds'. Though one mind in the land, knows exactly what it is. Twilight's mentor, princess Celestia of Equestria.
Is the unicorn able to save herself, or is her knowledge her too dear?
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I am having no idea how this idea came to a stand, but it was something sitting for quite the long time in my 'work in progress' folder while it was done for so long.
Please fix this horrendous butchering of the English language.
1840354 Fine... Give me 5 minutes please... Note to self, don't work on a FIMFiction release of a story with 30 hour of no sleep behind you.
1840358 Yeah, always good to rest up first.
Then your best work shines through! Well, mostly.
1840362 *chuckles* Mostly yes. Changed some things up, and just hopefully it is better now, if not, I would like to hear your suggestion for it.
1840365 Alrighty.
Interesting... very interesting. The ending was a bit sudden but still pretty well done, and good job on showing the relationship between Celestia and Twilight.
1840372 I thank you for the compliment darling. Granted the ending could have done a little bit different, but this was the best in my eyes, giving the reader place to think what would happen afterward, something I love to do in my story.
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I understand, one can see this going many different directions such as Twilestia or a mother/daughter relationship.
1840456 Indeed my dear, though I prefer the mother/daughter relation, I leave it up to the reader.
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And I could go either way.
1840537 That is can yes.
1840539 I have a story idea for you Rarity Belle a story about Twilight Sparkle losing all her memories do to a tragic incident(like her mind shattering or waking from a comma) and having to go thru all of the frustrations of having to try to remember anything of her past even her name. Please do a story like this
3451179 The concept of the story is something that interests me a lot. But I know of a story with a similar plotline called 'Asylum' or something the like. I haven't read it myself, but I think, I think I might be able to do something along the lines of it of what you purposed here.
However, and this is the biggest but there is, it will take time. Not just a week or a month or something, no, sadly I'm speaking in terms of 6 months ahead. I just have stuff pilling up and up around here and need to get that sorted out first, before continuing on other writing projects. It will be saved in my idea bin, but no clue when it will be released. Or even made.