This story is a sequel to The Art of Magic II: Secrecy of the Facility
Madness is said to eventually take hold of everything. It will ravage through a mind like a hurricane over land. Yet only the ponies outside of the comfortzone are able to bring that mind back from the doom it had sunken in. Perhaps a lesson not many will learn through the gears of time. But crisis knocks on the door of both the Magic Facility and the infamous unicorn city of Tol Ret Nac.
With Rarity having gone crazy from the waste products, she has not only become a danger for herself but the entire factory as well. Those trouble together with the protective shield around the city failing more as time comes and goes, the cocktail for disaster is ready to be served. And in what a fashion that would will be done by those around Rarity herself. Old colleagues, new enemies, new hierarchies and time running out. The days are counted for the infamous Facility whether it is liked or not, known or unknown.
Just what would be the very final sight for the final battle that would be fought by the ponies involved in the mess? Though what truly is going on high in the tower of Platinum herself, is a mystery for everypony and best left untouched for those who have nothing to search there. Sadly enough, none of them understand the meaning of that.
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The last story in the trilogy and a direct follow up to the second story.
Cover art created by Softpurple.
Once this one is done i will give you my good feedback. I say good because i know this will be amazing
5004355 Works for me. I plan to get this sucker done within 4 weeks as I just want to be done with the series as a whole. Not because it's bad per say, but it has been going on for over two whole years.
Makes sense. Cant wait to see how it turns out.
5007513 It's all done actually. Every story I upload, I can guarentee that it is done from start to finish. But to release a 40k word counting story at once isn't really something that's going to be helping me personally. hence the whole release schedule.
Behind the scenes I'm already working my next epic tale with our beloved friends.
You have outdone yourself mrs. rarity.
5007809 I, kinda tend to do that, from time to time...
Its alright sugarcube (he says it too oddly)
After having finally sat down and reading all three stories to this series I thought that asides from a few spelling mistakes here and there, overall I thought you did a good job in composing this story. I thought you did a good job with the characterisations of Rarity, Twi and Trixie. I thought the overall plot to this story to be interesting and I admit that it was actually cool to take the whole "pegasus+test=death" principle (that had produced so many horrid prequels/sequels/endings) and to turn into the direction of Unicorns failing said test and then getting killed was indeed a cool idea. I really liked your OC's that you created.
I wish I had honestly read this a lot earlier because simply put I really liked reading this and I think you are one heck of a good author, and damn you definitely know how to write a good dark story. I shall dive into your other works and indeed comment when I can.
Keep up the fabulous work Darling!
-Frost
5602490 There is nothing else that I can say, outside of a massive thank you for the comment. While it is true the plot has been overused, I still managed to give it my own little spin. Something that seemingly worked out for the better. As for the OC's, having just canon characters in there isn't really something too interesting, now is there? OC's, especially this bunch, are something I love to create as they all have strengths and, especially in these tales, have massive flaws.
Time come and goes they say. One only has so many hours per day that can be used to do things. And as I say more often then not, my stories don't go anywhere, they just grow larger in size. Once more do I want to thank you for your words as they are something amazing to read. Dark stories have made their way to my specialty shall we say and I hope you will enjoy my other works just as much as you did these three.
That I indeed tend to do my dear. That I indeed tend to do no matter what.