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I liked this. Might as well point out these two flaws.
"The time she spent in front of the mirror could very well have been a good half hour ,she was so meticulous." - Comma Placement
“Wait,what?!”, Dash groaned, feeling him start to tense up." - Spacing error.
Thanks for the read.
Nicely done
Love it! xD
nicely done
Rainbow Dash is one of my favorite characters to use in clopfics.. <3 Fluttershy being second , and Applejack the third.
The end was just.... Whuuuut? She didn't want one but he did... Uhhhh...
Not bad but at the beginning you more seemed to be describing Rarity then Rainbow Dash.
1823211 I agree
Yea I dunno, an apartment? Since when did she live in one, especially one not made of cloud. Sitting 30 minutes in front of a mirror and purposely being "fashionably" late? Not really things Dash would do, or even think about really. I could see her getting ready for a date, especially one with Soarin, but only because he's in the Wonderbolts, but it would be minimal effort at best.
awesome story 10 pinkies
yes. Soar x Dash is best ship.
Are these Rainbow and Sorin's foals? There names are: White Whirl, Sunrise Brisk and Cloud Puff.
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Sure looks like it. :)
Taste the Rainbow....sorry had to say it saw the refrence to Skittles....
Stupid, sexy Soarin!
Oh dash pretty soon your gonna have twins HA HA
I ship it
Can I make a sequel to this?
I'm making a sequel whether you like it or not
*approves*
Seriously though, good fic!
Sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel!
Taste the rainbow soarin.
Tastes like skittles.
HA!
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Yes sequel pleas!!!!!!!!
5527002 lol that joke thou i love it never got tiered of it hahaha
I will never eat skittles again XD
I’m tempted to question what happens next.
Will there be something added onto this?
I find it interesting when others write Soarindash sex one shots. At the end of the story, Soarin cums inside Dash and you never find out if she gets pregnant or not. I HATE THAT!!! Just saying.