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ScousePone


You will always be a loser and that's okay.

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Promising, i'll have to keep an eye on this

2357695 Thanks! I'll try to write more as soon as possible.

2358045 Thank you! Hope you enjoy what's left to come!

So... How will Soarin' tell her his real name?
I'm sure in the middle of their fun or maybe when he wakes up, forgetting he has a cover name.

Oh the possibilities :pinkiehappy:

Is it human or pony? Cause you put in 'mare, stallion and pegasus' but then put in 'hand and trousers'.

I really like you story though! It's a masterpiece!!

TTFN!
Ta Ta For Now!!

this seems ok im not much a fan of anthro

2372725 It's anthro. When it comes to clop, anthro is easier to write for me.

Hello again. Keeping it up with good fics. This one seems promising good first chapter and great job on Soarin's characterization so far faving so I don't miss anything

2381778 Thanks! Hope I can get the next chapter up soon. I was on break, but with me being back in school again, it's harder to find free time. It won't be too long of a wait though!

Well, Dash sure is going fangirl now.

Shouldn't she be mad he lied to her? Aw fuck it! HES A WONDERBOLT

2389216 Soarin has manners; he'll handle this.

Well, that was short, but fangirl Rainbow Dash...:rainbowkiss:
Yeah, she'll be happy to be with Soarin'

2418833 It's not over yet!

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I know, but the way Dash is being, she basically wanted to have Soarin' all to herself. And an immediate end would mean she got her wish.

Either way this story is coming along really well. I like what your going with it. Only thing I saw in this chapter was here ( “Wow! I can’t believe Spitfire you take a vacation! She’s so, how should I put it, intense.” Dash said.) You forgot let in between Spitfire and you. Still great story. Can't wait for the next chapter.:twilightsmile:

2419937 Thanks for pointing that out! I'll make a quick edit.

*clears throat* who drinks Black Coffee when they have a hangover? It makes the headaches worse! The headache is caused by a lack of well water, this causes the brain to shrivel up (slighlty) which causes the pain. Drinking Caffiene makes it shrivel up more! Causing more pain, the best way to get rid of the headache is to drink lots and lots f water to re-hydrate your system!

pet turtle named Tank

*cough-Tortoise-cough*

2426140 I don't drink, so I just went off what I've heard. As for the turtle/tortoise dilemma, I thought Rainbow kept calling Tank a turtle in that episode, I could be wrong though.

2427546 she called him a tortious by the end...

2430347 I suppose you're right, might make an edit

my reactions: :pinkiegasp: I THINK SOMETHIGN BAD IS GONNA HAPPEN

I wounder it celestia saw because remember she watches EVERYTHING :trollestia:

2443454 She Probably Couldn't See For The Lights But She Was Staring Straight At Them

2493001 Anthro fan? Good!

Caught by a shy pegasus.

Good story, and at the end :twilightoops: caught in the middle of the act. Keep making more this story is great I'm liking and watching you

Comment posted by wolflover418 deleted May 6th, 2013

Me like the beginning of this...

OMG I can't wait to read chapter 6 :twilightsheepish: . when is it coming out I'm so exited :rainbowwild:

2547970 I'm aiming for this weekend!

hahah i love how u just stopped there. I would be surprised if it was Spitfire

OMG another awesome chapter :rainbowwild: keep it up your one of my fav now

WOW that second to last paragraph was long!:rainbowderp: I liked this chapter a lot, you took a break from the romance and gave us a montage of friend-shipping, and for that you have earned three lovable Dashie's.:heart::rainbowwild::heart::rainbowkiss::heart::rainbowwild::heart:

2600362 I wanted to bring out the William Faulkner in me, though I think I used sentences properly!

endd?? reader demans sequal

2639745 Maybe a little later on down the line!

end? :fluttercry: . OH I got an idea make a sequal :rainbowwild:

2640693 There's a few stories I want to write first. After those, a sequel is a possibility.

Yey! A possible sequel after stories!:pinkiehappy:

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