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COUSIN JAY ORANGE from Manehatten comes to Ponyville for business and pleasure. After arranging a deal with Filthy Rich, he sets up a date for himself and Big Macintosh with the spa ponies, Lotus and Aloe, but nothing seems to go as planned. Also features Pinkie Pie, Mr. and Mrs. Cake.
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Going by the description, this needs a romance tag
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And the title also says Double Date.
interesting
hope you let us know what happens
I love tis story dude you make awsome stories
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Sorry, that's all there is.
I imagine that Jay goes off to Appleloosa and has a hell of a time with Braeburn though. I bet those two could really tear up the place.
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Thank you kindly.
I'll be posting some author's notes over the weekend. Applejack would not be happy with the sources of some of my "inspiration".
Very cool story! Jay reminds me of Barney Stinson: he's a bit of a douchebag, but not so much so that he becomes unlikeable. Have some moustaches!
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Yeah, Jay just needs to mature one day. I keep thinking of bringing him back for another story, but it's not well formed enough.
And just to prove how un-hip I am, I had to look that up "Barney Stinson". Ah! Dr. Horrible.
My strange personal connection to him is via a trainer for an IBM product: our trainer, native Australian now California resident, entertained us with various tricks between sessions. He's a member of Magic Castle and had talked with NPH several times.
2456312 Well, I had to look up Dr. Horrible, so we're even.
And yeah, you should totes do another story about Jay! I was pretty disappointed when I saw the 'Complete' tag after reading the last chapter - I would have loved to read about Jay's last night in Ponyville.
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Well, I hoped you enjoyed it. May I ask how you found out about this story?