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So... Twilight reads a r63 romance about herself and Luna. Interesting premise, but the descriptions were awful. The beginning was boring as hell and tried to be artsy... and then you end up with gems like "sounds of liquid being squashed between her hooves" and "spraying her juices freely into the cold night". You might also consider proofreading your stories for typos before submitting. This was more of a rushed stub and not a real story. Take your time, don't try too much and you'll get better. And watch less hentai - ponies or people don't work like that.
1769630 >Implying I took it seriously
Never wrote porn, slapped this down, never will again. I somehow lack the qualities to appeal to the minds of those in the rush of hormones. Okay, and now in proper English, I did proofread it and ran it through a spellchecker, without results.
It's actually meant to be a story between OCs, which just so happen to carry the r63 names of her and my very own favorite OC's mom. Yes, I went that far. Coming to think of it, you can basically ditch the whole fic except for the last paragraph, it's all about that, being secondary literatury to SatN.
I am very much aware of both human and pony biology, just to redeem myself. However, it's porn. You are not anatomically accurate in porn.
1769656 As you lack the "comedy" tag, yes. I took it seriously. If you want to write a trollfic, at least try to be funny. Now this was just bad writing that you try to excuse as "not really trying". If you don't even TRY to write well, why should I even read your stories? FIMFiction is not meant to be a place where you can blurb half-finished story ideas for people to cringe on. That's what blog sites are for. If you want to improve and learn from critique, then I suggest you actually listen to what your comments say and not just jump in to defend your collapsing castle.
Oh and if you write a story about OC's, use the OC tag.
1769701 I'm sorry, I couldn't hear you over the sound of crappy ass fics being dumped onto the site.
Comedy doesn't mark trollfics. It marks comedies. Just sayin', yo.
I do read and think about all comments. I just think yours is not doing it justice as much as it could. If you want an example of my serious writing, go read other works. (NOT Fed in Darkness, mind you, that's trolly as fuck.) Shadowed Through Dawn, Splitting aMid the Night, such stuff.
Also, I suggest that you check out the recognition from other people, for I believe that you sir are being oversounded.
Pretty well written and short. I liked it.
I love this story. Please keep writing
1774222 I will. In the meantime, you can hit that stories button and go read my various other short stories, the contest winner, the novel...
Basically what I'm saying is there is a lot of me available on this site. I don't think you'll run out soon
horny twilight is best twilight
Decent.
Thumbs up 'cause I came.
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>yfw
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Shit, if I looked like that I could just fap to myself all time, no need for ponies
Short and sweet, love it.
No need to over ananalyse it as some people might do, just read and enjoy the ride. (not in a sexual way)
1777668 Odd. It's actually all about the sexual ride. That and venturing forth into the lands of writing clop, though if you would ask past me (and I can, thanks to my
powers of personality shifting,) about what he/she expected this cloppy oneshot to become while showing them this, they'd certainly have answered, "NOT THAT!"
Hell, you can ask present me. Is it not somehow depressing that this single story, as mentioned, a barely thought through clop oneshot, has more views and better ratings than any other of my fics (excluding Sparky, but that's due to 4chan and it'll probably overtake that soon as well), even occasionally quite many bundled together. Hell, it almost doubles up on the people who have read this compared to just the first chapter of my novel.
Oh yeah, did I mention that I wrote a novel and you can find it under http://www.fimfiction.net/story/34188/Splitting-aMid-the-Night? Well I wrote a novel and you can find it under http://www.fimfiction.net/story/34188/splitting-amid-the-night. You'd like it, it's all about the Night. Sorry, couldn't resist. What I'm trying to say is this fic is basically secondary literature to that. It's set in the same universe at about the same time (which is chapter 49/50), designed basically for that last paragraph, to give insight where I could not with Midnight. Well, I guess she could use the extended Pegasus Eye and - NO!
Basically what I'm saying is you have now entered the madness zone and need to write all of my works in order to get some understanding for what I do. And also to have a pretty neat time, as I am told. And you are also a doodoohead for liking the work of two days rather than the novel I spent my last seven months of free time on. Though, you could make that up... you probably know how.
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Naa i don't say the story wasn't sexual it was more in enjoying the ride as in reading the story and letting the story flow through your imagination.
And the whole thing, that your clop has more views and more likes.
Well there are various possible explanations, The "normal" non-cloppy stories may have a more picky audience, There are a lot more "normal" stories what would flush your story from the lists on the main page very quickly.
Maybe there are more clop-readers then other readers. (kinda doubt this one though, but its a possiblity)
Maybe readers have lower standerds when rating clop. (nothing personal i'm completely neutural and speaking about clop in general)
And about not liking your novel, i had no idea you actually existed, i blame the flashfloods of stories and chapters for that one. Plus i can't read everything, right Pinkie?
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And if you feel sad or down, know that there are always people who will like you for who you are.
Like me (i would give you a hug right now if it wasn't for this screen thingy)
What do you think about this Pinkie?
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Right, tear down this wall!
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Ahh Berlin, lovely city.
Sure had a great time there, what about you Pinkie?
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Damn it Pinkie.
1777963 I wasn't blaming you, of course. I just love to get mad at its disappreciation.
It gets famous because it's clop. That easy. Did I mention that it's, as of today morning (Lol, EST foos) my single most viewed and best rated story? That'd be quite a letdown... if I wasn't so damn awesome
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That Berlin reference kinda struck deep since I'm an Ossi myself... NOT. But I know one, and he kind of bitches about it whenever possible. I think I still have a fragment of the wall which I stole when I visited the city. Tear it dooooown!
I'm twenty years late for that one, aren't I.
Basically... I have no idea what I was saying. It's early, I had an exam yesterday and another one tomorrow, and I'm in the break between math lessons. Stay frosty
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Its a nice city isn't it, you can even still see the scars the wall has made in the city. (when you go to the place where the wall went through the city you will see that the soviet side has all his buildings removed to make way for the wall and the "safetyzone" (killzone) that went with it.
And yes its way to easy to make clop, its just is.
As for exams, well diffirent country diffirent exam times. But good luck, hope you'l ace it.
1780805 I, a child of the land, despise of all big cities, so...
Yeah. And even that already gives you a much stronger impression of how things were back then than history class does. Quite amazing. So on that note, fuck school. Just quit out of it, kids, you'll certainly become a rock star if you do!
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I also enjoy nature much more than a concrete jungle, one of the many reasons i want to be a zoologist.
The whole school thing, i do want to say, i agree with this. But i can't, i do think that the school system educates us far to broad and that it is in need of change, plus i really love learning, no really i am a massive Twilight when it comes to that.
1780847 Certainly didn't teach you much about sarcasm, did they. Well, that'll come over time with me, I guess.
Under the assumption that you are yet fairly young (I'd guess mid-teenage here, feel free to correct me), that'll get a lot better in college. It is a fuckload of work, extremely complex, and honestly speaking occasionally quite unfair, especially when you get in at the age of 17 like me, but I think you'll love it. At long bloody last they take off the blinds and tell you things as they actually are, and also answer the question of how the heck this is all connected, not to mention focusing on that which is important.
It also means a lot less time for poni, unfortunately
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Ohh i'm actually 18 and already in college, i am studing micro-biology at the moment.
I'm just not that social, it sounds a lot worse than it actually is. Of course i am much social than i was years ago so i will not turn into the male equivilant of a crazy cat lady.
I liked this. Very nice.
Cool story bro. Really. It was cool.
Hey, i already read this somewhere.
Yeah in Nox, i knew it.
1777963 You might want to edit that comment.
4583650 Nevermind what stood here previously. Huh.
Wait a minute: This story seems too similar to Nox.
So Rarity is Starlight, and Twilight is Dusk. Oh my god i'm a detective.
4583660 Maybe... I would not remember and I sure as hell ain't rereading that.
That would be some cosmic coincidence though, since Starlight is somebody's character.
4583668 I'm sure it's exactly the same, i check.
..green?
1777001 Also love the reaction images! The story was a pretty good oneshot too!
I’m clopping to a pony clopping to a clopfic
