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After being banished by Princess Cadence and Shining Armor, the changeling race is faced into a desperate situation. Weak and powerless, they have been pushed into the brink of extinction. With nothing to feed on, Queen Chrysalis must find a way to make her kind live. A mysterious entity helps her think of the "Best solution possible".

( The cover pic is from Skylain )

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Needs so many more views than it has. THE FEELS!

The picture is "Queen of Changeling" by Skykain, you can find the artist's page at deviantart.
The story is a bit thick on the melodrama but I like it.:trollestia:
You might want to look over it again though, you jump from past tense to present tense and back several times, that's a bit annoying.

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I thought that instead, the changelings could coexist with the ponies. But quite right on the passive genocide topic

True self sacrafice.

I never saw Queen Chrysalis as an evil character. Villain yes but not more evil thanother people who would banish an entire race for a thing that they can't help which is to born and have no other choice of a food source.
Sir, you made a masterpiece here.
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The changeling in me sees the poetry in this. It is the ultimate expression of all those elements the ponies hold dear.

The writer in me, on the other hand, wonders about the ghost's story, and wants to know more--elaborate?

1780338 Actually I have this habit of "connecting" the OC's I make in my stories, if you know "Scribble", he is the one being referred as the researcher.. I am planning to add her up in another fic in making...

:fluttercry: I love you my amazing Queen if you are ready to sacrifice yourself to save your kind.

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